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Michael Hudson
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Michael Hudson
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Interesing.
4582894 Good. Now get over here. Everyone gets one, right?
Well, this is interesting...
Was there a story before this? It seems to be kind of an abrupt start.
4589941 There is not. I thought about doing a prequel, but what happened in the year before this is not what I wanted to focus on, but what happens now. Sorry.
4589954 But you might want to include what happened to get them stuck there and why they are there in the first place (specifically). It helps to maintain the suspension of disbelief. Even a handwave explanation would work.
4593356 I suppose I can see what I can do at the end of the second chapter as far as that goes. That or the third.
4594010 Maybe include it in dialogue or in thought pretexts (someone thinking to themselves). Personally, I find stuff flows easier that way. Of course, that may be just me.
4594033 I understand, and I realized that there is one last thing I want to do concerning the first day of this story (Expect a lot of events to be like that, event name: Chapter part.) I just need to decide where it would fit best.
Nice. I like the premise and your writing style. Faved and upvoted.
This chapter was great. I enjoyed how Nathaniel managed to converse with the girls. I cant wait for the next chapter.
4617162 Woot! Likability achieved! Now lets see if I can do the opposite in the next chapter.
I put this in my favorites so i can look every day, please, PLEASE update frequently.
4617667 I will try, but I have been having terrible writer's block recently. That and just being overall distracted.
4617697 aw, please when you can, i don't feel like Mark has the most respect for fluttershy, i think this is where the dark tag plays in.
4618227 Hehe, just wait. You might see Mark's role better soon. Chapter 3 will hopefully come later this week seeing as I had a burst of productivity today. I leave no promises as to constant progress, but thank you for showing so much interest in my story.
That Mark is a dick. That creep needs to get beat up, big time. NO MERCY on his evil soul.
Mark is shown to be quite the manipulator and it seems he's fit enough to stand up to AJ. He seems like a competent antagonist. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
4637085 Wow, This is nothing compared to what he will do. Just you wait.
4637236 There's more!!!!!!!!
4637287 Of course, even though it seems like people are hating this chapter. Weird.
Just curious, how often do you think you will be updating this? Really enjoying it so far, probably one of my favourite ongoing fics right now so I'm rather curious
I'm out. I can see where this is going and sorry, but I hate blackmail/forced "servitude" stories, good luck
4637506 I have no idea. I will probably make a schedule for myself once I start working on other stories as well, but at the moment I am focusing on this, so you get the chapters as I finish them.
Well, if it wasn't clear before it is now.
Fillies and gentlecolts, we have our antagonist. 
4637327 I can see why
Why is this in the Rainbow Dash group? Its been bugging me for a while now.
4639421 I smacked myself for this. I meant to only add them to each group as each of the mane 6 had their ow chapter or not add them at all. I think at this point I will be taking it out of there, and am sorry for misleading you.
4620198 Mark should be happy my OC (the picture) Isn't a human in that world, would Bass have heard that Mark had so much as touched Fluttershy the wrong way......Mark would end up mysteriously "missing"
4639436 and Applejack was Bass' wife in his world, even with Mark's burly look, he'd be fucked. I'm liking this story
4652002 I am so confused right now. I'm happy you're enjoying the story.
4652007 just a snippit from my OC's history is all
wow, what happened to the nice guy we all had been rooting for? all i'm seeing right now is an asshole.
4662654 Think about it, strict duty bound guy meets Pinkie on a stressed out day, what do you expect? I know it may be blunt, but I like to call it depth, or hope to god its something like that.
did Nathaniel hit Pinkie?
4663486 Yes
Thanks for the fast update. BTW, the scen between AJ and Mark was brilliant, sexy, yet dark.
4667122 Expect chapter 6 tomorrow. I've been writing up a storm lately, but I think I might take a break chapter 6. Maybe work on another project for a little bit.
Mark is an absolute waste of human flesh!
Great story looking forward to reading the rest.
4667475
Starting to dislike him? I didn't like him the moment he arrived.
Man, Mark has one messed-up family.
"I ain’t gonna be your sex doll anymore and thats that."
YAY FOR APPLEJACK!!!
Mark needs to die a very slow and extremely painful death.
Still great story.
Don't take a break, this is fabulous. how many chapters were you planning?
4673425 Don't worry, this story isn't dead by a long shot. However, I do have another series I like to work on from time to time, especially when the darkness of this story gets to me. As for how long this story will be, *Jumbled looks at his idea document, and promptly falls over* (Trust me, I will need breaks. This is going to be loooooong!)
4675357 Grazie Dio
Couldn't help but notice that some of the words 'woman' in this chapter should be 'women.' (Doing your own proofreading does have disadvantages. In my case, I can't turn it off.
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Well I think the only question remains is how much the author can make us hate Mark before the story ends? Any thoughts?
4672687 What about Nathaniel? He seems to be the only normal-ish one there! (Much to the same effect as Michael from 'Arrested Development.')
4718825 I don't blame you on this one. I'm the only person even proofreading the chapters before publishing them, so I'm not surprised I've been making small screw ups. Thank you for the help, even if I end up being too busy pushing forward to go back for the mistake.