It seemed like a normal day of making videos for SkyDoesMinecraft, Deadlox, Bodil40, MinecraftUniverse, and Bashurverse. They were doing the most requested mod, Mine Little Pony. But when a rainbow light appears in the sky, Sky and his friends' life will change forever. They are taken to another world, totally unknown. They are taken to a world of ponies! Now Sky and his friends are trying to get home, to the human world. They meet some ponies along the way, and.. they don't get along as well as their supposed to... Will they make it back home, or will they stay in Equestria for the rest of their lives?
Chapters (9)
Everything is Gizzy's fault. No toilet paper at work? Blame it in Gizzy. Dog peed on the floor? Blame Gizzy. Phone battery dead? Blame it on Gizzy.
The story was really good altogether, but here are a few tips for your next story.
-Don't try to rush the chapters. It makes a good story just end to quick.
-Try to make your own names. Nightmare Sky seemed pretty obvious, so try to be original!
-If you are going to do a sequel, try to add more member from team crafted. Even if they quit. I'm not sure if Jerome and Mitch quit, if not try adding them (if there is a sequel)
Overall, good job for the creativity!
The last time I saw a book with chapters this short was when I read Everyone Poops when I was four.
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Lol yes. Everything has to be Gizzy's fault.
Thank you. These tips were very helpful I appreciate it.
There are no words for how random this whole fic is ._. I LOVE IT!
Wow. That's nice.
Dun dun da!
Just a suggestion, you should call sky's evil form nightmare does minecraft. Nightmare sky just doesn't have that ring to it. Great story btw