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This is a Crossover story.
It plays through the story and game play of the 1993 game MYST, but with our mane6 solving the puzzles and exploring the rich world and design.
Our heroes will solve puzzles, uncover clues about betrayal and punishment, an in the end, make choices what will lead them to either the freedom of an innocent pony, or a huge mistake.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

While this crossover has been done, I am interested in seeing your take on this amazing game.

I respect the idea and some of your characterization is good, but this is full of issues.

One: You are in dire need of proofreading. Sit down and really comb over this for technical errors like capitalization and punctuation. You've derped a lot of those things. After you've done that, have someone from ponychan look this over because I bet you anything they'll find a whole mess more nuts-and-bolts level problems.

Two: Don't make the ponies solve the puzzles. Holy crap that would be fucking boring. Play out some kind of drama on the island. I want to see the ponies playing out the drama of Atrus and his sons. I want to see the ponies working through the storyline of a game, not going through the motions of playing the game.

Three: This runs a serious risk of being a "find and replace" type fic, where it just follows the game except it adds ponies. Make the ponies part of the story; don't stick strictly to the events of the first MYST game, bring in whatever elements from MYST-canon you can and make them interact with the mane cast in interesting ways that aren't already covered by the MYST games.

Good story bro about to read chapter 2 seems good so far! Have a well deserved moustache :moustache:

Make the chapters longer as well :3 :fluttershysad: maybe sa fluttershy will force you :D

This is a fusion, not a crossover.

A true crossover would have Atrus staying a human, not Atrus being a pony now.

Crossovers are crossing one series with another, without changing the main characters of the series.

i like myst i look at youtube in begine there myst ,riven, myst 3, myst 4 ,myst 5 and byond myst game i wonder if you look up at youtube type myst or let play myst and copy on clip to your story please:pinkiehappy:

I really think that you ought to change he puzzles a bit so that it won't just be a walkthrough disguised as a fanfiction. Okay?

well, there different poeple who play myst and tell the viewer what to do and find the sercet place and hidden easter too

are you dead where are the story?:twilightangry2:

WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING YOU ARE ASSHOLE YOU NOT WRITING THE FUCKING STORY ET YOUR FUCKING LAZY ASS OFF YOUR COACH AND FUCKING GET WRITING NOW:flutterrage::twilightangry2::raritycry::raritydespair::trixieshiftleft:

CANLLED? YOU CAN BE CAENLLED WHAT ABOT CROSSOVER STORY I LOVE YOUR STORY TRY REWRITE ABOUT GO ON YOUTUBE AND TYPE REAL MYST AND WATCH ALL THE GAMEPLAY THROUGH AND WATCH OTHER SEQUEL OF MYST GAME SERIES AND YOU CAN BE POURAL

can you rewrite the story?

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