I write stuff. You read it. Simple. (formerly My Little Kenny)
The SPP Foundation. A Foundation dedicated to containing and ponifying the more...unique dangers of the Everfree Forest. Unfortunately, the whole "containment" thing kinda didn't work out, and now only a few guards and a Class-F remain. Them, and of course, hundreds and hundreds of deadly monsters.
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Hmmm good start. Could use some work maybe making it longer and more elaborate.
~Imperial Brony signing off
I see potential if you are wondering contact me and I will do my best to explain
Not half bad, it's a pretty funny story with a decent concept of the SCP's. If you want to improve, try just being a little bit more descriptive of the surroundings and the character, I was unsure if the main character was grown up or if she was still a foal until the second chapter. Good luck and have fun writing!
Not bad, not bad it all. I can feel you have a lot of potential in you. You just have to put some more effort in making the descriptions of things longer. I also like your little random jokes, and how you trolled SCP-173. Anyways, good one mate. I hope you will make more!
"died of hypocrisy" is probably the best thing i have ever written.