• Published 12th Apr 2014
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Candy Corn Kitten - pokefreak13



Apple Bloom finds a kitten in a bowl of candy corn and decides to help find it a home.

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Twelve

Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Discord sat on the curb gloomy.

"I still can't believe the mayor shut us down! That was the best haunted house I..I mean we've ever made!" Rainbow exclaimed.

"She said that it was too scary." Pinkie sighed.

"Now what do we do?" Discord asked.

Suddenly, they heard hoofsteps and looked up to see Scootalo, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Bell, Button Mash, and Silver Spoon walked

their way. Each dragging a sack full of candy.

"Is that Silver Spoon?" the pegasus questioned.

"It is!" Discord exclaimed

"Why is she with them?" Pinkie said.

Once the fillies arrived, Rainbow gave Scootalo a friendly noogie and raised an eyebrow at the silver filly.

"Don't worry. She's cool." Scootalo informed.

Apple Bloom nodded. Handing a very eager Pinkie Pie some candy.

"So, why are you all outside?" Sweetie Bell questioned.

"That mayor shut us down, because she said that our haunted house was too scary." Discord said flatly.

Button Mash popped a caramel into his mouth. "That sucks." he replied.

Silver Spoon nodded. Suddenly an idea popped into her mind.

"What if we brought the haunted house to her?" she said.

The ponies looked at her in confusion.

"How the hay are we gonna do that?" Rainbow asked.

"Remember what you did last year with Luna?" Silver replied.

A smile formed on the three pranksters faces.

"I'll get my sound effect." Button Mash volunteered.

"And I'll get Twilight." Pinkie Pie replied.

Author's Note:

Hope you enjoyed! This is a parody of the book, Kitten in the Candy Corn by Ben M. Baglio. Check him out!

Comments ( 6 )

that was a very good read. It did end rather abruptly and I kinda got lost at what they were talking about at the end, but i kinda figured it as what Luna did in the Nightmare night episode. Fix the grammar mistakes and you have yourself a good story.

10 out of 10 for Slice of Life
5 out of 10 for Alternate Universe
6 out of 10 for grammar
8 out of 10 for overall story.

A like will be sent your way. good job :twilightsmile:

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Thank you so much for taking the time to review this story!

4337880
Welcome. Thanks for the good read.

5101202 Thank you and I'll try to add more detail. :twilightsmile:

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