A carefully laid plan Gummy placed everything on is disrupted by Pinkie Pie
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- Member Since 15th Jan, 2013
- offline last seen May 2nd, 2022
Brutydude
Just durping about, searching for the written gems of ponydom. It has been a difficult decision, but posted in my favorite boxes are some of the best/most touching stories I have found. Happy reading
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That is totally the ending of this story
Did your teacher understand the context of this story (gummy, pinkie, EQG portal, MLP:FiM)?
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She actually hasn't read it yet
4210046 but will she? ;)
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Eeyup
4210241 i meant understand, will she understand?
(Typing on my phone, some words like to disappear)
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Idk, honestly
I think so
Hm!
I like it!
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Glad you like it!
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Love your Skitchverse stories btw, both you and GreyGuardPony did an outstanding job.
Great story, I'm surprised that it hasn't been seen all that much. I also love the soccer art. The only issues I had with it were the double spaces after sentences, and the subtle breaking of the forth wall, although, that my just be me.
Great job!
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Thanks for the feedback, and glad you like it!
Double spacing was created for printing presses so that ink wouldn't smudge, and so sentences we're easily separated by the eye, and continued by typewriters just because. It is now somewhat debated whether the extra space is needed, however double spacing is still usually the proper way of doing things.
You can't have a story with Pinkie without breaking the fourth wall, however small