• Member Since 13th Sep, 2013
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RedRioteer


Just a sociopath with an unheathly love for flames, gaming, and ponies. I'm probably not mentally fit to drive . . . but I'm still a pizza boy!!

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A single thought in a psychopath's mind.

As the smell of blood fills her nostrels, Pinkie Pie is finally given a moment as her old self to grief and think about what she's done. The change is always temporary, so Pinkie Pie writes... something as the precious seconds slip away.

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Comments ( 17 )

>mfw cupcakes sequel

Such a deep, psychological story. I have been waiting for a story like this, and the use of the clearly bipolar, depressed Pinkamena Diane Pie was sheer brilliance. I applaud you, good sir.

My lord... This is beautiful. I MUST SHARE THIS WITH THE WORLD!

Oh, and take this with you! It's not safe to go alone! :moustache:

I need to pee... (GASP! MAYBE MY MISTRESS WANTED ME TO!) I'm scared...

This... was... awsome

... You sir, have done well with this story. :pinkiecrazy:
But just check through, you have a few typos in there.

mmmmm creepy.... I like

4191847 dammit!:twilightangry2:
I swear I've some kind of reverse-dyslexia, auto-correcting mental thing. Its not that I don't know grammar rules, its just that often I literally don't see it when I read it.

4191889
Nah, don't worry, but I could PM you all of the corrections if you'd like.

:ajbemused: Ok, who added this story to a bunch of random-ass groups at around 0950 central US time?
I'm guessing its "The Watcher 509". Whoever it is, serious, wtf?!

This story paints a possible picture to me, not only does it match up with true facts about us it makes me somewhat able to beileve this! I like stories like this cause they add to the suspense and general creepy vibe by playing on our emotions and facts. all in all good job with this story!

This was actually really good. An interesting probing into the mind. Also, I have my own conversations with myself so I understand that very well.

And there I thought my paranoid shizophrenia was gone. Now I will have to take meds because I am a phobephobe, fearing that what I fear aren't my fears, it's what my subconciouss, the mistress, WANTS me to fear.

Good damn job, you ass hole.

I applaud you.

4192226 you should be thanking him our her. Because of it. You got a Fav.

4193307 umm...my bad...?

This makes an awesome Creepypasta.

And I had to be hungry while I was reading this....darn it. XD Mistress I do not need food right now! LOL!
Very well done! Original and creative! I loved it! :yay::yay::yay:

Awesome I love it's :twilightsmile: it gives a iteresting view on our world

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