Back then it was just a game to me, I didn't believe that anything bad would happen to me. But then it all changed...
This is the story of Lightning Blaze, a pony who has been betrayed by the nation he swore to protect. Alone, he has to survive the assaults launched by the Equestrian military and find a way to prove his innocence to the rest of the world. But as time passes, shadowy figures who would use Blaze and many others as pawns in their attempts to control Equestria lurk in the shadows.
As Lightning Blaze gets pulled deeper into the dark side of Equestria that few know about, so too does the chances of his death. Who are trying to kill him? Who is trying to use him and most importantly why is he a fugitive? Alone he must find the answer to these questions, but how can one Pegasus stand up against all of Equestria?
Rated Teen for violence and swearing
Not bad! Very interesting introduction you have here. My one suggestion is to reduce the swearing. I don't mean that swearing is bad, but when you add curses every five seconds, it gets a bit annoying to read.
*Reads description* Wait... what?
4182080 Yeah I totally understand I didn't actually mean to include that much swearing but i didn't realise how much I put in until after I posted it, I will definitely tone it down in the later chapters though
4182089 a pegasus, in the military, named Lightning Blaze sounds familiar to me, but I'm not sure why...
4182557 I don't know why either, there could be another fanfic with the same concept but if there is I haven't read it
4184545 I was a little scared upon reading the description. Project WNDR-BLT, a story that is on my page, is an origin story about one of the main characters in my main story The Reign of Chaos and Harmony, Lightning Blaze, who also happens to be a pegasus, and a soldier.
4184700 Oh that explains a lot
I haven't actually read that story and I am sorry that the names (and races? O_O) conflict, I hope that even though the names are the same that you can still like my story.
If you want me to I could go back and change the name of Blaze
Seriously though, that is a scary coincidence
4185427 I will leave it up to you whether or not you will change the name
4986192 That is quite true
That part of the description was going to be about something later on in the story but it is definitely subject to change and I am doubting that I will end up adding it into the story. I have also been thinking about changing the description but every time I go to my brain dies, but thank you for your feedback!
4991000 No Problem! Thanks for pointing stuff out that I should change