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EquestrianEmo


I'm crazy, and a fangirl. Go away.

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Sweetie Belle's friends are away on a beautiful Saturday morning, and Sweetie Belle wants to surprise them with a Cutie Mark. She knows the perfect place, the Evening forest, where she could find lots of things to do. But it's up to a certain mare and the motion of a single ax to decide the choice of life or death. But here's the question:
If a tree falls in the woods and there is somepony to hear it, will that pony survive?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

I must say the general idea behind this story is nice and interesting....but the pacing...
I don't want to say it's bad but it could really use some work....
Also Why would Discord suddenly chomp off trees in the forest ?
Try and make your story longer, bring more details into it and explain more what is going on in Sweetie's head as well as some of the reasons for the others reactions :3
Then your stories will get even better :heart:

Yay i have a sequel entitled to it

Bad Discord, bad, you should be set in stone for that

Comment posted by EquestrianEmo deleted Apr 1st, 2014

4162504 Well, he wanted to get rid of the trees so he could have a site for his nonsense town.

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hmm ok that IS indeed a reason , but why would he just let Sweetie there ?
This isn't labelled as alternate universe so I take it Discord is still "reformed"
Even though he still would do some stupid stuff he wouldn't let a littly filly get crashed by the trees...
Even when he was still evil he didn't harmed others actively...
Maybe explain why he didn't saved Sweetie Belle or at least brought her to a place where she would have stayed safe....
Or find a good reason as to why he would just risk that fillies life while chopping trees off.

:3

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