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400k Words? Okay, let's do this! Yaaarrhgg
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I know it's small, but it's still good, I promise !
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Timey-wimey. Wibbly-wobbly.
80DR ?...a tad overpowered but in a wasteland where stuff is constructed with magic,I'll swallow that and ask for seconds. Grey Knight did sound a tad out of place in the wasteland but his lines and scenes were odd but refreshing,one must wonder if he got all those ideas from 'Tales of Chivaelry' (not a typo) Ah well,I salute to his honor and ponder his backstory.
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Tempest is some strong shit.
Grey was originally the character supplied by amanekudara for the cameo art contest. At some point, I'd like to delve more into his backstory in a future project (which will remain unnamed for the moment). He was a lot of fun to write, that's for sure.
Thanks!
Yay Smooze Pony is back. Good chapter again liked it.
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Thanks!
13 chapters and an epilogue left? What the blueballed fuck?
I have a very strong feeling that if you keep the word count like this, Starlight is gonna be one of the few fics longer than the original.
And it seems Star never learns...
If there's one thing I could say to Star, it would be a certain quote from a certain Prothean.
Cotton is a threat to the denizens of the wasteland, and needs to be eliminated.
And then there's Spark.
Buuuuut this is just an opinion of mine.
Oh, and you have an incoming question on Tumblr.
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I'm well aware of this. I write what I need to in order to advance the chapter.
Smooze? What. The. Buck?
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The Smooze is a thing, yes. He was introduced in Chapter 17/18.
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I know, it's just- what the buck would Smooze need help with? And why the buck is- he? Does smooze even have a gender?- with a griffin?
Wait, nevermind, spoilers.
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Indeed. Spoilers.
In all actuality, there's some setup story for this that was already made public, on Star's tumblr. The Letters from a Smooze series illustrates what has happened to the Smooze since he left the group. This is considered to be canon.
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Send me a like NOW. If that's okay with you.
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Here is the link to the first Letter from a Smooze. http://askradiantstar.tumblr.com/post/39229545758/letters-from-a-smooze
The rest on are the main tumblr page. Their are about 6 in total.
Happy reading
McMesser AKA 'The Smooze'
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Thank you kind sir or ma'am.
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Your welcome, Let me know what you think of them.
McMesser AKA 'The Smooze'
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Okay, so, gonna do a bit of copypasta to address your individual comments here.
All comparisons to Blackjack aside, Star never has been one to truly pursue revenge or act against her own nature.
I'm sorry that my headcanon of these characters and yours don't match. Don't take that negatively, it is what it is. Twilight, I cannot really address without spoiling some things. DIscord more falls in line surprisingly enough with the reformed version that we saw in 'Keep Calm and Flutter On' (even though that episode aired after he was introduced both times)
Side quests exist for a reason, both in story and even in Fallout. If all you did was the main story chain, you'd be done rather quick. I do have quite a bit planned, now that the group is out of Chicacolt.
Language aside, Star's purpose has been relatively the same since she started - find a way to get herself back to her normal state of mind and body. The group's journey to Chicacolt, while prompted by Pride, was a large part of this journey. Right now, that involves going after Spark.
I'm slightly curious as to whether you have any specific examples of this, to be honest. If you're referring to S3 Twilight, then I wouldn't be too surprised. I tried my best to address that, and felt that I came up with compelling reasons behind it.
Whoah whoah, hold the phone. Have I ever stated that this story took place after Gardens? This story does take place post FOE, but it takes place before Gardens is cast. On that note though, I'm sure that in the years leading up to the casting of Gardens, the Wasteland was still a dangerous and wild place. Take a look at Fallout 3. After the end of FO3, and the beginning of Broken Steel, is the Wasteland suddenly any better now that there's fresh water? No. There's still the Enclave remnants, there's still Deathclaws, there's still mutated things out there, raiders and slavers, you name it. These things still exist, and it takes a lot of time for those pieces to get unfucked.
Thank you. I love them too, and I have a lot in store for both of them. Some good, some not so good. I do admit, you are right in that they don't do a whole lot of speaking on camera. I'm always trying to juggle that along with everything else going on. Something for me to think about for the future, I suppose.
I've never really looked at Violet in that light to be honest. Violet's strength is in her love for Star and for her friends. She would readily sacrifice herself for Patch or Steeljack, or even Lilith.
Star is indeed a jumble of mixed up shit. And I probably could write a whole story on the bits and pieces of her mind. If you're asking whether I've read PH, of course I have. But I am not modeling my character after Blackjack. I will be very clear cut about that. Star spared Cotton Candy because she realized that it would taint her own honor and the honor of Grey's memory. Grey entered the fight knowing full well the chance that he would lose his life. Like Violet says, Star questioning herself does not make her weak, it makes her strong for trying to do what is moral.
This is slightly confusing to me. So, first things first. 1. I do not consider other sidefics canon to this universe. The original is all the canon I need. 2. I'm not attempting to write a sequel to anything. All I'm doing is telling a story about a silly alicorn.
I will admit, at first glance, I took it that way, but took the time to really read through it and try to understand what you were saying. And no, I don't consider it rude, I love feedback like this. As I've stated before, I can only defend my choices as an author, and try to explain the thought process behind it. And no worries on your english, it took some time to muddle through it, but I think I know mostly what you were saying.
Thank you again for the comment, and I do hope that you stick with. I would certainly appreciate it, and not only that, continued feedback is what helps us grow after all.
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And I love you for it, for sure, my friend. I did just feel the need to respond, of course. It's good feedback, just needed to iron it out.
Why must all Fo:E stories have the word count of Thor The God of Thunder and his gay lover Death Wing?
I mean...I'll read it; but ah won't like it!
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Can you elaborate on that? I'm merely curious by what you mean by this. After all, saying 'it could be better' doesn't exactly help me make it better, wouldn't you agree? I don't mean that negatively, so please don't take it like that. Just trying to understand what you mean so that I can in turn take that feedback and use it for good.
Also, I totally agree on the early chapters. You may see some development on that in the near future.
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Heh, I know right?
I can't say much without spoiling the ending, but I will say that I have the ending all mapped out, and it should be a lot of fun.
As for your question about Star and Violet, I know that in the beginning Star was simply not mature enough to handle a foal, but I think that over the journey she's come into her own and while she may not have any true maternal instincts (I attribute this to her own race being one of a single gender still at this point in time), she would not be averse to caring for a foal. She may not be very good at it, but like all things it would be a learning experience.
Violet on the other hand, sure I could see her wanting a child. She's devoted, caring, and tough when she needs to be.
Thanks again!
This is still one of my favorite stories. I actually had two chapters to read, because I felt this story is best enjoyed when I have time to sit down and read it. All the main characters are developed very well. You also have a great way of describing battles large and small. I was especially pleased at how you tackled with Star's inability to stop blaming herself (I'm trying to get my girlfriend to stop doing this to herself) Too bad it wont be as easy as having her enter her dreams and help her defeat an evil depiction of her problems. I thought the scene was a little short (Not in a bad way), but it was a long time coming and made a lot of sense. My only other question is what is Twilight? Is she a collection of memories and not really there? Is she a consciousness trapped in Star? Can any of these questions be answered without spoiling things?
Your actin scenes are to freaking die for. I have learned many things I will surly hold onto.
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Indeed, I can't answer the Twilight questions without spoiling it. But, as we move forward into Arc 3 (the final arc), we will learn more about Twilight and the things leading up to the end.
Thank you so so much for your comment. Hopefully with any luck you might see Chapter 24 tonight.
The last words i said to my great grandmother, the woman who helped raise me, before she passed away was "its not good bye Grammy, its see you later" and she just smiled and nodded.