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>Slow applause
Brilliant work as always. I sort of had a feeling that the Crystal Empire would show up at some point. This chapter was flawless in my opinion save for the occasional grammatical errors.
Also, correct me if I'm wrong, but wasn't this the inspiration for a certain black Pegasus? It seemed like it, considering what I remember of the article. If so, then you are quite a clever author. Took a while for me to make the connection (mostly because I didn't get a chance to think on it until recently).
Anyway, keep up the good work. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
I hate 50/50 cliffhangers!
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Thanks!! The reading has been much appreciated.
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Hey, new reader! Thanks for popping in to say hi and leaving a comment, you're awesome!
And thanks to everyone new who's favorited today sofar!!!
Aghh,I spoiled myself to the Magisterium by reading about it in the blog...well you did warn us about it. Anyways,I like how you changed Ahuitzolt into a ghoul. I would've preferred it if he'd been kept alive by some mystical bauble all these years but then I remembered most of them were with Daring
and on a last note:I'm gonna heed any spoiler warnings from now on.
She didn't notice an extra 110 Wt? Also despite the fact she was surrounded by people who obviously would have payed thousands for him, smooze was still half the value of Featherjoy.
Is all nitpick still enjoyed story.
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Star's never shown herself to be very attentive. And Smooze not being worth a whole lot is a bit of a joke.
I like The Smooze. See what you did G1 . Anyways like where it's going so far.
I think I've read this chapter about 5-6 times now, I feel this is one of the best chapters you've done to date.
I love the way you've written FeatherJoy, Finishing Touch and the Inquisitor. The feeling of not really knowing what the Inquisitor has planned is just brilliant and the way FeatherJoy and Finishing Touch get a long is just great.
But now I need to wait and see who Stars shooting at. So get to it!
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OMG Patch is pregnant!!!
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I can neither confirm nor deny this.
2656881 your profile pic reminds me of smooze
2670502 That would be because it is The Smooze. :-) It's kinda my OC (more given to me) because I create clay figures. I did a set for Volrathxp and he wrote the Smooze into the story.
2669862 Lolz
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Have you read the story at all?
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Please, it's almost too bloody obvious by now, maybe if you had left it at just their private conversation on their way to the temple and Patch's extra reaction to the foal Stable, it would be more surprising.
Also, I've just managed to plow through this story over the course of 4 days of reading and love this story very much. It almost seems like you're writing the backstory for one of the new Elements (Magic of course) that will be part of the Garden Megaspell at the end of FO:Equestria. I love how I can't quite tell if Twilight Sparkle is actually helping Starlight or if even she is still slightly corrupted by the Nightmare.
Of course, I'm still waiting for Discord to pop back up and mess with Starlight. Though, if the Elements are out of commision right now, why hasn't Discord messed up he Wasteland with chaos, or would that be too predictable?
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Oh I am quite aware. Letting people draw their own conclusions about it. I am pleased that it's able to be picked up on though. Even if Star herself doesn't see it.
Thanks for your other comments! Glad you are enjoying it!
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No problem, I love that you always have a little bit of mystery in the plot as well.
My only complaint so far is that Discord seems to be getting the short straw on the villain scale, but that could be because he's "reformed" and helping Starlight out in his own chaotic way.
Otherwise, Discord doesn't seem to be living up to his full Spirit of Chaos potential, unless he's still evil, but weakened by all the Megaspells and radiation.
Either one works for me, as long as I get his story before this one is over.
OOOOOOHHHHHH, IDEA!
Discord Memory Orb.
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The completely beautiful thing about Discord is that you can write him however, and either way is perfectly fine, because he's completely unpredictable.
That being said, we'll see him again. And when we do we'll be in for a big storm of chaos.
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I think Patch is pregnant.
I kinda like Touch and want to squishhug it.
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Same here.