Equestria has fallen to the Caribou and has been plunged into a dark age of sexual slavery and wickedness. However, through the selfish actions of a young caribou mage something arrives to change everything. Or rather, someone arrives.
Aww, here I was hoping Dainn would put up more of a fight. Don't misunderstand, I want all these fuckers to die, but it's better when the ponies have to earn it a bit.
To be fair, he did kind of survive a bomb, Incapacitated Straken, destroyed a protection spell single-handedly, nearly killed Blaze, fought a magical battle with a crazy who ate someone's soul, took the head off of Dante and then managed to escape it all intact.
All by himself as well. Hell, if it was a one v one fight he could wipe the floor with them.
Satanic magic fed by the souls of these disgusting rapists/slavers with too much ego? Come on, that's not nasty in the least, it's well deserved. Like Elijah said, they're worthless and getting no decent afterlife after they're down and out, why not make something good out of them? You say it smells like shit, and I say all fertilizers do.
4942326 Methinks you're giving Dainn too much credit, and underestimating the UIP personnel. These motherfuckers are devious.
Hmm... love it. Although this gave me another idea for another fall story.
Twilight did the sane thing and fled with her friends. Now hunted, Twilight realized that she and her friends need to become something darker than the caribou to survive and free their country.
A female voice heavy with command rang out from the town, prompting Luna to look up. A creature with a black mane and pale white skin was advancing towards her, flanked by another solar guard and surprisingly a changeling. Based off of the appearance, Luna assumed that this was the ‘Straken’ that Orthodox had been talking about.
Damn this story is still pretty amazing. Can't wait for more. Also, Elijah is officially a more scary bastard than Freddy Kruger on a bad day. Also if you don't mind, I had this music playing while reading his fight scene
It sells like hotcakes. Besides, you encourage your readers to delve into more fics to uncover more of the overarching backstory. It's a little extra something that loops from fic to fic, prehaps providing a little more entertainment for those that are interested in it.
so let me get this straight James is a psychic orthodox is a short lizard gangster Elijah is a wizard scientist dante is a rubric terminator and nigel mother fucking chalmers is well nigel murder machine chalmers straken is the only sane one and schrieber is a chaplain well can I get a copy of that contract
They must be all Exterminated! I've got a wonderful image to show. Imagine all the soon to be corpses the people on the show, and imagine the daleks as well the ponies with UIP.
4956090 Combining computers/the occult is necrotech in this universe. If you recall, it's mentioned that Elijah works for the department that discovered that form of technology in ruins. Needless to say, they've had a long time to refine it and aren't too picky about using it to their advantage.
I won't be surprised if during the final battle when the Caribou are down to the final few and preparing a final charge that Dainn will die a very anticlimactic death from a drop pod landing on him. And who else would be in that drop pod than Nigel Motherfucking Chalmers, who will then be pissed off at missing the battle...
Note to self: Read military documents when signing up. Also note anything that includes sacrifices, black magic and any doctor who has a creepy-ass name like Elijah.
5014657 My personal punishment? Rip his spine through his anus and hang him from a tree with it. Past that point, I think I'll just coat him in peanut butter and grain. And now you have a home made bird feeder!
Aww, here I was hoping Dainn would put up more of a fight. Don't misunderstand, I want all these fuckers to die, but it's better when the ponies have to earn it a bit.
Still, great chapter.
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To be fair, he did kind of survive a bomb, Incapacitated Straken, destroyed a protection spell single-handedly, nearly killed Blaze, fought a magical battle with a crazy who ate someone's soul, took the head off of Dante and then managed to escape it all intact.
All by himself as well. Hell, if it was a one v one fight he could wipe the floor with them.
fucking hell yeah to the Nth degree, shit was so cash money, Elijah had a booty like DAAAAYUM.
also elijah just got so much fucking cooler,i also like the little tid bits of info for elijah, really makes everything more clear about him
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Right, but his forces were routed. Ugh, why the hell am I arguing in favor of the Caribou?! Fuck it, kill 'em all.
Couldn't you have posted this 3 hours ago, before I went to sleep and had to do things in the morning?
What was with the Yu-Gi-Oh reference? And why did you choose that pun, the show had plenty to choose from. You didn't need to go with the worst one.
Yes...I am loving this. Everything you write is gold. You write a book, and I am certain it will sell fantastically.
Satanic magic fed by the souls of these disgusting rapists/slavers with too much ego? Come on, that's not nasty in the least, it's well deserved. Like Elijah said, they're worthless and getting no decent afterlife after they're down and out, why not make something good out of them?
You say it smells like shit, and I say all fertilizers do.
4942326 Methinks you're giving Dainn too much credit, and underestimating the UIP personnel. These motherfuckers are devious.
Well shit, orthodox should have read the contract before signing it
Hmm... love it. Although this gave me another idea for another fall story.
Twilight did the sane thing and fled with her friends. Now hunted, Twilight realized that she and her friends need to become something darker than the caribou to survive and free their country.
Or something.
Elijah is my new favorite character
Wow all this time I imagined her as Olivier Armstrong from Full Metal Alchemist.
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Damn this story is still pretty amazing.
Can't wait for more.
Also, Elijah is officially a more scary bastard than Freddy Kruger on a bad day.
Also if you don't mind, I had this music playing while reading his fight scene
I just noticed that all your fics have the same Empire, and the same trend of the characters being a bit, maybe very, crazy.
Well, suddenly Elijah is much more fucking terrifying than previously thought.
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It's actually a reference to an abridged series where they highlight the pun multiple times.
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Yeah... they do tend to be a little over-the-top with their methods.
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He's still one of the nicer guys as well.
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It sells like hotcakes. Besides, you encourage your readers to delve into more fics to uncover more of the overarching backstory. It's a little extra something that loops from fic to fic, prehaps providing a little more entertainment for those that are interested in it.
4943985 You must be new.
Yes... yes this pleases me...
Just a quick question, how much longer will this story be? Shit be getting geeeeeeeewd.
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Glad to know there's someone scarier than him.
so let me get this straight James is a psychic orthodox is a short lizard gangster Elijah is a wizard scientist dante is a rubric terminator and nigel mother fucking chalmers is well nigel murder machine chalmers straken is the only sane one and schrieber is a chaplain well can I get a copy of that contract
,,,,,,your mother plays card games in hell
4944628 I kinda figured that. The only reason I got the reference was the abridged series.
you should make a story about Elijah it'd be hilarious
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Maybe. I'm just not sure that he'd work well as a solo character.
I imagine this as the Battle of Hu Lao Gate.
They must be all Exterminated! I've got a wonderful image to show. Imagine all the soon to be corpses the people on the show, and imagine the daleks as well the ponies with UIP.
Isn't that a wonderful image?
4949303 maybe have him be the focus in a group and have it shift P.O.V's semi regularly
KILL THEM ALL! HAHAHAHA!
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I'm sort of expecting you to give Dainn the most anti-climatic death you can think of.
Is dante made with necro tech or is he just black magic research also this song comes to mind
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Combining computers/the occult is necrotech in this universe. If you recall, it's mentioned that Elijah works for the department that discovered that form of technology in ruins. Needless to say, they've had a long time to refine it and aren't too picky about using it to their advantage.
There is only one man that can intimidate the Caribou with just his presence.
4956370 amazing also now I don't trust doctors even worse with eligah not the ncrotech part the soul stealing part
I eagerly await the slaughter!
I won't be surprised if during the final battle when the Caribou are down to the final few and preparing a final charge that Dainn will die a very anticlimactic death from a drop pod landing on him. And who else would be in that drop pod than Nigel Motherfucking Chalmers, who will then be pissed off at missing the battle...
Wow. Hope to see the finale soon. :9
Hey, maybe Straken should have Dainn's head mounted as a trophy. How's that for an idea?
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Let's just say Dainn will probably get a punishment far worse than people have guessed so far.
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Sounds like it's going to be unpleasant for him...and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens. Keep up the good work.
By the way, what's with the caribou anyway? Are the supposed to be like vikings or something?
Note to self: Read military documents when signing up. Also note anything that includes sacrifices, black magic and any doctor who has a creepy-ass name like Elijah.
5014657 My personal punishment? Rip his spine through his anus and hang him from a tree with it. Past that point, I think I'll just coat him in peanut butter and grain. And now you have a home made bird feeder!
This was an amazing beginning to showing Elijah's battle magic. Elijah is absolutely badass. Just... perfect.
I can just imagine a magic battle between elijah and another mage.