• Published 13th Mar 2014
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Stormy Monday - Bud Grazer



Life has been rough for Sweetie Drops recently... At least she gets to make a friend who has something in common with her: they both feel down in the dumps.

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Tuesday's just as bad

“Thank you, come back soon!”

Sweetie Drops kept her cheerful smile until the filly left her store. The door swung back closed, making the bell jingle on its way.

The cream-colored mare sighed and let her rump fall to the ground. In front of her, one lonely bit was lying on the counter, the whole day’s income. Sweetie checked the clock in the corner of the room, reading almost six o’clock.

Lifting a hoof above her register, she let it fall heavily and with a “ding”, the drawer opened.

Sweetie grabbed the single coin in her teeth and threw it with the others. She gave her fortune a flat look. Four bits and twenty-five cents… With another sigh, she closed the cash register.

The candy shop was small, containing mostly the counter behind which Sweetie Drops was currently waiting and a few tables for the customers to sit at. In the back room, lots of candy were stockpiled. Sweetie had no reason to take them out and even less reason to prepare more in her workshop.

“Three months and all I’ve sold are a box of toffee and a dozen lollipops.” Sweetie Drops rested her chin on the counter, muttering to herself. “It looked so easy when I was a filly. Make candy, sell candy… Nothing to it.”

Nothing but silence answered the lonely mare. Not even a distant conversation or a fly buzzing in the room. Nothing but quietness. The store felt as dead as its previous owner.

Sweetie turned her head to a picture hanging on the wall. “How did you do it, auntie?”

The mare in the photo did not say a word, unsurprisingly. She simply stayed frozen with her eternal smile and kind eyes, giving her favorite niece a gentle look.

Sweetie Drops breathed slowly and heavily, feeling a weight growing in her chest with every passing second. Grunting, she forced herself to stand up and walked to the front window. Standing behind the display which had brilliantly failed to attract any customers until now, the shopkeeper watched the street outside.

Ponies trotted around. Mares and stallions, young and old, all different but with one thing in common: the happy grin on their faces. It seemed that every single pony in Ponyville was cheerful… This only made Sweetie Drops’ mood even darker.

Outside, a young and very pink mare turned her eyes towards her and smiled. Her huge grin was so bright that it could have lit up a moonless night. A bit of a smile appeared on Sweetie’s own lips as she waved at the hyper happy pony until she turned around and went to take care of whatever business she had to take care of. Probably planning another party.

“Why did you have to be so nice, Pinkie?” Sweetie Drops asked the empty store. “You’re the reason I don’t have any business and I can’t even hate you properly…”

The candy maker started to pace around her store like a lion in his cage. The Bonbon Bazaar and Sugarcube Corner had always been a sort of competition to each other, since ponies could only eat so much sweets in a day, but the pastry store seemed to attract everypony in Ponyville these days.

Sweetie recalled the time when she was a filly and visiting her aunt. Back then, the store had ponies coming in and out all the time. So much that the little filly had to help out with making the candy and eventually earned her cutie mark that way.

Nowadays, everypony was friends with Pinkie and Pinkie worked at Sugarcube Corner…

With a groan, Sweetie Drops headed for the door and flipped the sign to “closed”, headed back to her bedroom and collapsed on her bed.

The small clock on her nightstand ticked and tocked the seconds away while the mare stayed completely motionless.

“Another day down the drain… Why do I even bother?” She groaned loudly. “And why do I talk to myself so much?”

“Oh, right,” she answered herself. “It’s because I’m all alone in here…”

A long moment passed, with still nothing but the clock to keep her company.

“Dad was right. It was stupid to take over this shop… I bet he’ll never stop reminding me of it when I come home.”

So far, this had been the only thing that kept her in Ponyville, despite the total lack of business and her rapidly shrinking savings. Sweetie Drops had been eating nothing but hay for weeks by then, only so she could stay a little longer and not give her father the satisfaction of proving him right…

The lone pony tossed and turned on her bed, unable to sleep at such an early hour. After what felt like ages of lying around, she grunted and got up. A glance at the clock let her know that barely five minutes had actually passed…

“I’m gonna go crazy in here,” she muttered.

“What if you’re already crazy?” she answered herself with a silly voice.

“Oh, shush you!” she said, back to her ordinary tone.

An empty chuckle escaped her lips as she decided to go for a walk before losing what was left of her mind.

When Sweetie Drops wanted to get out of her store and let her mind rest a while, she always went to the same place. A bench at the edge of Ponyville’s park, with a nice view on the rolling hills to the west. When the sun went down, the sky took on the most beautiful colors, creating the perfect romantic setting. It always reminded her that she had no one to share it with, but she still felt that it was worth seeing anyway…

Slowly trotting to the bench, she almost cursed out loud when she spotted a pony already sitting on it. Sweetie first instinct was to turn tail and just go back home, but something intrigued her about the green pony. A mint-colored horn poked out of a pale green mane with white streaks. The hair was cut short but kind of messy looking, making Sweetie wonder if that pony had cut it by himself.

Walking a little closer, she finally understood what looked strange about the pony. It wasn’t her face, she looked like an ordinary mare, maybe a little prettier than average, but nothing you’d see on a magazine’s cover. She wasn’t wearing anything, she wasn’t even really doing anything… The only strange thing was the way she was sitting on that bench, the lower part of her back lying on the base, her legs dangling above the edge and her back straight up... Sweetie could feel her spine hurting just from looking at the green mare bending that way.

She could not tell how much time she had spent staring at the strange pony, but Sweetie only snapped out of it when the unicorn looked her way. A pair of golden eyes stared back for a moment.

“Can I help you?” Sweetie was so stunned by the clarity of the mare’s voice that it took her a while to realize that she had been asked a question.

“Oh! Uuuuh, I– I mean. No, I just…” Sweetie Drops shook her head and cleared her throat. “Let’s try again… I just wanted to have a seat. Is that alright with you?”

“Sure,” the green mare answered with a shrug.

Sweetie climbed up on the bench and lied down on her belly next to the green mare. The latter turned her eyes forward, watching the horizon without saying a word and Sweetie did the same. As the surprise of meeting the unicorn wore off, her depressing day soon came back to haunt her, sapping all the strength from her muscles and forcing her to rest her head on her forelegs like a dog.

The two ponies stayed silent and immobile for what could have been hours, until a drop of water fell on Sweetie’s muzzle, making her raise her head and look up at the sky.

Thick gray clouds were completely blocking the sky above her. More and more rain fell, building up into a drizzle of thin drops that seemed to pierce her skin and soak her fur in no time at all. “Great,” Sweetie said with a groan. “I completely forgot the weather team had rain planned for this evening.”

Next to her the unicorn didn’t move, except to blink the rain when it fell near her eyes. “You’re gonna stay here?” the strange mare asked all of a sudden. “In the rain?”

Sweetie Drops mulled this over for a moment, until she finally answered “I don’t care.”

“I see,” the unicorn said quietly. “Me neither.” A minute or two passed, with nothing but the rain’s soft pattering to keep the two mares company.

“Lyra Heartstrings,” the green unicorn said without warning.

Sweetie Drops blinked a few times. “Pardon?”

“That’s my name. Lyra Heartstrings…”

It took the candy maker a bit of time to realize that she should probably answer. “I’m Sweetie Drops,” she finally said. “Do you live in Ponyville? I don’t remember meeting you.”

“No. I arrived today.” Lyra turned her head over her shoulder, giving a look at the peaceful country town. “Looks like a nice place,” she finally said, taking her eyes back to the darkening horizon in front of her.

“Yeah,” Sweetie said with a sigh. “Sure is.”

“You look like you’ve had a hard time,” Lyra said, a curious look in her golden eyes.

“I guess… You don’t look so good either.”

Lyra hummed in reply. “What’s your cutie mark for? Candy?”

By reflex, Sweetie gave a glance at her flank. “Yes,” she answered. “I have a candy store in town.”

“Business is no good?”

“You can say that again…” The candy maker gave a quick look at the unicorn’s own flank, seeing a golden lyre shining in the fur. “You’re a musician?”

“Yeah… Business is no good either.”

“Oh…”

Lyra sighed. “Everypony wants to hear happy, cheerful songs. Stuff you can dance to… I don’t have anything against dance music. I even like to dance sometimes… But it’s not what I play.”

“Why don’t you play something else, then?”

“Why don’t you stop making candy?”

Sweetie winced a little at the harsh reply, but had to admit that it was a stupid question. She wouldn’t want to do something else than preparing and selling her sweets, it had to be the same for the musician.

“So,” Sweetie Drops asked softly, “What do you play exactly?”

“The blues, mostly.”

“Blues?”

“Hmm hmm. Not the kind of music pones can dance to.”

Sweetie stared at Lyra for a moment. Truth be told, she barely knew what the blues sounded like and she wasn’t even sure if it was actually pony music or a style that came from gryphons or zebras or some other faraway country. There was one thing she knew, though…

“I don’t feel like dancing,” Sweetie said. “So it should be fine, right?”

Lyra stared at her, blinking a few times. “You want me to play?”

“Sure, why not?”

The unicorn stared a little longer, until a little chuckle escaped her lips. “Yeah… Why not?”

A golden glow appeared around her horn and immediately, a lyre, an almost perfect copy of the one depicted on her flank, floated up in front of her. Lyra shook it a few times to get most of the rain out of it. Sweetie Drops expected Lyra to play using her magic, but as soon as her hooves touched the instrument, the golden glow disappeared. With her lyre in her hooves, Lyra no longer looked like a freak for seating in such an unnatural position: it was simply the only way to keep her hooves free to play.

One of her hooves plucked a string and a note, crystal clear, sounded in the air. The other hoof plucked another, then the other… The pure-sounding notes formed a slow, wistful melody, with the pitter-patter of the rain acting as an accompaniment.

That melody alone sounded of sorrow. Sadness... Sweetie Drops watched Lyra’s face as she played. Her eyes were closed and it was impossible to tell if the water flowing around them came from the rain or not, but in either case, the tears echoing through her lyre’s strings were unmistakable as the music played sobs and sighs.

Then, that incredibly clear voice of hers added to the music…

They say the grass is greener

On the other side of the fence.

I’ve grazed in many fields,

Gave every meadow a chance.

I just wanna find a pasture

No matter where it could be

That’s green enough for me.


I’ve travelled for so long

I’m the mare that always moves.

The one thing I’m looking for

Is a place to rest my hooves.

Yeah, I’m looking for my pasture

And I wonder if it can be

Green enough for me.


I’m not looking for a paradise.

No, I don’t want very much.

I don’t want a palace,

A mansion, a castle or such

All I want is a pasture

But it has to be

Green enough for me.


I’ll keep looking if I have to

Oh, until the day I die

No matter what, I have to find

The one place where I can lie

Gotta find this pasture

That’s all I want you see

One green enough for me...


Lyra kept playing wordlessly for a moment, until the music finally slowed down and stopped.

Sweetie Drops simply stared at Lyra. For some strange reason, listening to such a sad song had lifted some of the weight off her heart. Maybe it made her own problems seem not so important, or maybe it was just the reassuring feeling that she was not the only pony to be down on her luck…

A shiver ran through the cream-colored mare’s spine. Without the music to distract her, she couldn’t help but realize how soaked she was. Sweetie Drops climbed off the bench and shook herself, trying to get most of the water out of her coat. Considering the rain hadn’t stopped, she was not very successful…

As her shivers became more consistent, she turned to the green unicorn, who seemed intent on staying right where she was.

“I’m going to go home and get myself dry,” Sweetie simply said. When she got no answer from Lyra, she added: “not to tell you what to do, but you shouldn’t stay in the rain either...”

“I guess…”

Sweetie stared at the motionless mare for a moment. “Are you going to stay here?” she finally asked.

“I don’t have anywhere to go right now.”

“Don’t– Don’t you have a home?”

“Couldn’t pay the rent,” Lyra answered with a sigh.

“What about your family?”

“Haven’t spoken to them in years.”

“No friends to help you out?”

Lyra did not even bother to answer this time. Instead, she began playing a few notes on her lyre.

Sweetie Drops smirked as a simple idea struck her.

“I have an extra room at home,” she told Lyra. “You can stay there if you want.”

The unicorn stared at her, eyes wide in surprise. “You– You want me to stay with you?”

“You’ll catch your death if you stay out there. And I could use the company,” Sweetie said. “I think I’ll go crazy if I stay alone in this big house...”

“That’s nice of you, but I don’t have the money to pay a rent, or food or nothing…”

Sweetie Drops sighed as she was reminded of her own finances.

She shook her head. “You know what?” she said with a confident smile. “We’ll figure something out. Come on, I’m freezing out here!”

Lyra stared at Sweetie for a while longer, until she eventually shrugged and got on her hooves. The two soaked mares walked at a tranquil pace through the streets of Ponyville.

“They said ponies in Ponyville are the nicest in all of Equestria,” Lyra said after a minute of walking. “I guess that’s right.”

“I don’t know,” Sweetie answered. “I moved here not so long ago… But thanks.”

“Hey, you’re letting a penniless mare like me stay at your home for free. If that’s not being nice, I don’t know what is.”

Sweetie chuckled. “I never said you’d stay for free.”

Lyra gave her a curious look, raising an eyebrow. “I told you I don’t have any money.”

“I know,” the candy maker answered with a smile. “I guess you’ll have to play a lot of private concerts for me, then.”

A big grin finally appeared on the unicorn’s lips and she could not help but jump in the air as she heard that. “I guess I will,” she said with a laugh. “I guess I will.”

Author's Note:

Was feeling down yesterday. Took a day off work and spent the night listening to some blues. Got the idea for this. Used my day off to write it.

I'm not really happy with how this story turned out, but maybe some of you guys will like it. Thanks for reading anyway.

Comments ( 14 )

That was really nice! An interesting take on the LyraBon origin. Kudos!

I totally forgot they changed her G3 name due to copyright issues for the G4 toys to be allowed to market. Shame, Bonbon was always a very nice pony name. Props for actually using her new canon name!

So nice to see someone really do a nice SL Bonbon/Sweetie Drops meets Lyra tale.

Another day down the drain… Why do I even bother?” She groaned loudly. “And why do I talk to myself so much?”

“Oh, right,” she answered herself. “It’s because I’m all alone in here…”

Even when I'm not alone, I always feel that way.

The lone pony tossed and turned on her bed, unable to sleep at such an early hour. After what felt like ages of lying around, she grunted and got up. A glance at the clock let her know that barely five minutes had actually passed…

That's pretty much me at the moment as I've been trying to find a way to sleep for the past two hours despite how tired I feel.

“I’m gonna go crazy in here,” she muttered.

“What if you’re already crazy?” she answered herself with a silly voice.

“Oh, shush you!” she said, back to her ordinary tone.

An empty chuckle escaped her lips as she decided to go for a walk before losing what was left of her mind.

It's not always a bad place to get lost, I find. I entertain myself with silly voices and random nonsensical chatter to myself quite often when I'm alone. It's fun. The silence really can be killer sometimes when you're going about monotonous routines and friends are still at work and you can't rely on a computer to pass the time when doing work.

I just felt really down reading this. But at the same time it was quite enjoyable and endearing. I really felt for the characters, and Lyra was beautiful. Hope she gets to sing someday on the show, her VA had such a clear gentle voice to her.

I don't know what else to say. You have a way with writing characters that feel so warm, so genuine. It's hard to believe writing english wasn't your first language, but I thank the stars you took the time to learn a new language so we can share in these stories.

Thanks. I feel pretty good now actually. That ending added that one piece of Lyra that was missing in this story. Kudos, good sir. :heart:

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Thank you :twilightsmile:

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She's still named Bon-bon in the mobile game, so I'm not sure which name really is canon... I guess I just like how "Sweetie Drops" sounds.

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I sorta talk to myself too, I guess. Not out loud, since I don't want people to think I'm crazy, but I'm always having a conversation in my mind. I keep myself company... :pinkiecrazy:

Thanks for your praise, I'm glad you enjoyed my words.
It's funny... When I write, I always feel my characters are clunky and badly characterized, just doing or saying whatever the plot needs them to. I'd like to make them so much subtler... I guess if I really did, they'd end up being bland. :applejackunsure:

Anyway, it's nice to see that you were feeling better after reading, it was supposed to be an uplifting story, after all. But whenever you feel down, try listening to the blues. I find that listening to some guy pouring his heart out through music helps me feel better. I guess it's just nice to know that you're not the only one feeling like crap. "Be lonely together", you know?

So, yeah... If you're feeling lonely, try Albert King, he'll play the blues for you.

4076218 I love the blues. And yes, I know exactly how it feels to listen to such seemingly sad or depressing music. For the longest time, there was a very electronic symphony version of the Eva Movie ending song that made me feel so much better the more listened to it.

I can see why Nirvana can be quite popular for some. I like to relax to jazz, some Kenny G type music.

Albert King really has that touch. I love it. I mainly listen off to youtube now due to losing my music library, so anyone I can subscribe to is a plus in my book.

Loved that minute between 3:03 and 3:20. Everything from there especially starting at 6:42 and up was just magical.

I really wish I could properly imagine how Lyra played that soulful melody in the rain, the raindrops trickling on her lyre's strings as she strum and sang in the pouring rain. I love rain. I love being in the rain. Especially during those light sunny showers. The world looks so much cleaner when it rains. I love the smell.

I'm rambling geez. Sorry.

The story had it's uplifting moments, but it reflected a bit too close to home at times. But that ending was just wonderful. I really did enjoy the story, it didn't depress too much, just more "Yeah, been there. Yup. Do it too. You and me both fictional mare in someone's story."

But then the park stuff happened and I recalled an old distant memory where I reflected on life for awhile. Wish I had me a Sweetie Drops/Bonbon to share the moment with then. That's all.

Far as her canon name goes, for toys her old name wasn't copyrightable I believe for the TOY line. Sweetie Drops is from G3 and they were able to legally add her to G4 though no word on whether they were able to keep her G3 name or not. They have an official pony name guide they released. But Bonbon in G4 is the exact pony from G3.

We can say her real name is Sweetie Drops and Bonbon is what her friends call her? I don't know. I like Sweetie Drops too, and that scene with her playing that ball game like from the mobile game with that walrus made my day in Filli Vanilli.

And yeah, writing characters so formally like you were some college paper to be turned in would be rather bland. Just keep doing what you're doing, it just seems to work.

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Go ahead and ramble. I'm a rambler myself :twilightsheepish:

No one can replace Albert King for me. I've heard a bunch of blues player, but he's the one I always come back to. The way he plays his guitar is just so soulful, even if he always plays the same licks all the time, he plays them so well...

As for what Lyra may have sounded like... Take some lyre sounds first:

(I listened to this halfway through the story, wondering how a lyre actually sounds. I was surprised at how well it could go with blues.)

Then try to mix that with an old-school blues song, the kind with just a guitar and a singer. I listened to this one several times while writing the story, since the guy has such an airy, clear voice:

I'd love to hear an actual version of that song I wrote. I'd do it myself, but instead of a lyre I have a saxophone. I can sing a bit, but I'm a dude with a deep voice. And a French accent...
Not even close :rainbowlaugh:

Also, I guess Bonbon could be a nickname... I think the problem with "bonbon" is that it's a common word, so it can't be copyrighted. Maybe... Let's not overthink copyright issues too much, that can't turn out well.

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That was the closest to what I found that I could see Lyra playing like. I could not stand the greek one you showed there when I came across it as I was looking for what could be her.

The sounds many make are not only cold and unfeeling, they were rough and robotic. Now THIS guy at least seems to know how to resonate with a lyre, and yes I agree Lyre can go so well with the blues and it's not hard to see why it was such a popular or at least more openly used among the populous back then.

I've always loved Lyra since her "One Day, They

The lyre is pretty amazing. Though I prefer the olden ways, like Lyra, though she's never shown to be a musician, there is this here which is pretty crazy:

Sadly, I've yet to find anything that truly felt like the Lyra in your story. At least not the Lyra in my heart as I read your story. But the first video atop was the only one that came close. It was lovely, and it just feels like something she'd play. I certainly do need to immerse myself in music again. Youtube is just not satisfactory enough. But I'm tired of trying to build a library only to lose everything to a failed harddrive.

Another thing I love is flutes, I used to play solo's in my school's symphony on my clarinet, I always had respect for those who could play the flute so well. Which is probably why I'm so obsessed with this one piece here, though to be fair I've always loved the music in games and how they add so much to the environment and the moments be they repetitive battles or emotional/dramatic sequences:


For some reason I can just see Lyra in this really nice sort of moment in Ponyville where pick up a leaf feeling all is lost and knows what to do but express herself through music. With her lyre destroyed attempting to aid mane six whom now despondent and practically defeated, Lyra loses herself in her music. Just blowing into a leaf.
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Despite herself, knowing all is lost, the incredulous look of her friend urging her to retreat with her, though knowing there no place they could go, Lyra refuses to budge. Reflecting inward and recalling all the past sorrows in her life, until something began to grow within her as she played, a sort of spark began to transform her leaf, the gold glow of her horn's magic mixing in with the melodic breeze, as Lyra with her eyes shut, began to enter the moments in her life that made her happy, the friends she's made, which made the spark fill her with warm, her horn's light now surrounding her with a golden soft light that grew wider and stronger as her music tempo continued to intensify covering the ground and ponies around her, her magic now visibly resonating with the wind to carry its tune further.
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A spell was being born, Lyra was creating a spell that of which not heard in Equestria for hundreds of years. A song of battle, a song of hope, the song of evil's bane.

From a despairing moment like how the band on Titanic decided to continue playing despite the Titanic sinking, Lyra had suddenly burst across the fields with her golden aura carried by the wind, reaching all ponies with her magic amplifying its reach hitting those 6 fallen mares before her.

There, despite the foe taking notice of the mare, Lyra stood playing as her music seemed to restore the energy and strength of the mane 6, all glowing a faintly in her music's shimmering golden glow.

Full of vigor and hope, Lyra ignored all and continued playing her flute-like music from the leaf she'd picked from the ground.

The music however seems to have set the Beast a-rage at somehow feeling some of its powers being restrained by her playing. Feeling this, it went straight for the source to free itself of the baneful noise—Lyra.

The sudden humming by Lyra's side caught her attention. For the first time since she began playing, she opened her right eye to glance at the pony by beside her. Bonbon, having no place to run, apparently figured if she'd die she'd do so in company and stood by Lyra's side. She was humming to Lyra's music. It seemed many more ponies were joining in, some even whistling.

<insert epic LyBlock moment with mane 6 reminding their foe the battle was between them>
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<Insert Rainbow Powers.>
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<Insert happy ponies>
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<The End>
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<Lyra is best pony>
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Gosh, I didn't know I enjoyed Lyra this much. I'd forgotten how much I enjoyed the gleeful minty green mare with the infectious smile.

Great story. I'll not forget it anytime soon. Yeah, I had too much fun lost in my own thoughts again. lol

Hopefully someone will get the memo and do some soulful blues stuff with a lyre. I always thought music was a wonderful way to connect hearts, and it gives us such strength at times. I guess the media giants must be pissed we don't all adhere to their demands for sticking to their definition of what's popular and what should and shouldn't be listened to. Suck it music industry, you can have your boy bands and your Gagas. :p

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Wow. That's the kind of comment I don't see often. I wish I did.

I didn't expect much when I wrote that story. It was just a quick idea, finished way faster than I usually do. I wasn't even sure about publishing it... If you liked it that much, I'm really glad that I did. :heart:

Plus, I got to hear an electric lyre :rainbowkiss:

You're right about music. Personally, I don't think I could even live without music. When I'm not listening to something, I'm always keeping a tune in my mind to fill the void.

I listen to Sun Ra a lot. His music is so unique and complex that I can never get tired of it... He often said that music was the universal language, the only one that everybody in the whole world (and beyond) could understand. He also wrote poetry, and said that there was no difference between poetry and music. I guess I agree with that. When I write, I pick words based on how they sound in the sentence as much as on what they mean. Maybe that makes me a music writer :derpytongue2:

You said you like flutes.

That was an unexpected gem. (Well, not that unexpected after I'd seen its ratings. Just that I hadn't known it existed until very recently!) I confess to being one of those annoying people who sticks his fingers in his ears and goes "La la, can't hear you!" with regard to "Sweetie Drops", but a sufficiently good story can overcome my silly prejudice. Like this story. Same goes for the song lyrics: nine times out of ten I can't stand them in fanfics. This is the tenth time. Believable and interesting. Thanks!

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Thanks. I love reading that kind of comments. Feed my ego. FEED IT! :pinkiecrazy:

What a nice story. I'm glad you wrote it.

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Thank you for your kind words :twilightsmile:

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