Twilight really needs to go on a journey, get away from all the stupidity and perversion for awhile. Trixie meant well, but more sex was the absolute last thing Twilight needed right then and now she's paid the price for it.
Oh gods, she's completely snapped and gone full "sex is evil". And after the season finale, Pissed Off Alicorn Twilight really scares me. Throw in a Celestia who's one good fuck (or lack thereof) away from becoming Molestia, and the scheduled Ponyville Gangbang.... Shiny, Cady, get over here and talk some sense into Twi. There's the slightest chance she'll still listen to you. Maybe get Mom and Dad to give her The Talk while we're at it.
4377470 I'm really not sure withholding sex from a horny, pent-up, "born-again" sexually-repressed alicorn would have helped any. She might literally have exploded (twice!) taking out everything in a five mile radius.
Very good chapter. I might have gone into shock for a bit after reading the ending. I think Twilight was broken by sex. The bits should come with a warning: Caution, repeated savage ruttings may cause insanity. Do not use if confused about morals or overly paranoid. Please seek medical attention immediately if any of the following symptoms occur: pregnancy, delusions, paranoia, internal bleeding, spontaneous internal combustion, growth of wings or horn, insatiable urges to commit regicide, insanity or the feeling that nothing bad could happen on such a beautiful morning.
Also
Twilight Sparkle walked on. As she walked, she forgot her dream of Friendship and Harmony. She hunted, dreamless, through the forest until she fainted from exhaustion. As she slept, a new dream was born. Not of jealousy, but of lust and anger. A dream so dark, it eclipsed the moon. For this dream was not an ordinary dream, it was a nightmare. The nightmare awoke and took to the sky, searching for her foes. And thus, Nightmare Star was born.
4377599 That's Princess Molestia to you. You will respect me, I know your exactly location 24/7.
I find myself agreeing with Twilight and Spike here. The insane, endless death-rutting needs to stop. Too much mortal danger. Too many convoluted relationships. Those bits were nothing but trouble the second they showed up and they nearly killed ponies the first time. Now one's definitely almost killing Trixie.
After a clusterfuck like this, I'd go join a convent.
oh, this will end well. I can only imagine that the final chapter will be Luna, Celestia, Chaos, Twi and Cadance sitting down with their SO's and finally bucking TALKING!
... like this series has needed in spades for forever. I hope Dash and AJ are ready for the fallout.
... ... wouldn't mind seeing Rarity and Spike have a heart to heart talk, either.
I wonder if I'm reading into this too much but it seems like Spike is miserable for reasons a bit deeper than "dickings are gross." I mean a bigger more important part is that Spike was unable to find anyone to confide in for days. Twilight was distracted with Trixie and Celestia and didn't pay attention to him apparently much at all for several days, and he can't confide in Rarity, and his other friends are all doing this sex thing with each other and it's apparently VERY important and Spike doesn't get it and is excluded and Rarity and Twilight both indulge it by hurting others or themselves (or at very least apparently hurting others), which Spike had been taught was Wrong. So I'm betting he's very confused, and feeling very isolated, and it just exacerbates the broken pedestal that he's getting with Rarity.
... The entire Sparkle household is just in terrible misery. Twilight is at her wit's end too. Forced into an immortality and power she can't find an upside of anymore, the immortality threatening to hurt and separate her from her love, and Celestia changing in ways Twilight can't accept...
... Which I only now realized is very nearly the same thing going on with Spike. The wonderful paragon that you love is doing things you can't see them doing. Except in Twilight's case it's got a hefty dose of hypocrisy, because Spike can't understand the attraction of sex 'cause his hormones haven't kicked in yet, but Twilight indulges herself all the time, and probably still would if it wasn't lethal to her lover. She just put Celestia on an even higher pedestal than Spike did with Rarity.
... And then the last part happened, and Twilight decides to hide Spike and Trixie away (in a way that definitely will not help Spike in the long run), and go to war. This is going to get very bad.
4380201 Aaand I laughed so hard I felt light-headed.
4382032 Yeah, everypony is so busy with this "magical maredick" horseshit that they have no time for him. On top of that, his crush is in a committed relationship, so are all his peers, his mother/sister/whatever is going insane even by her own standards, the rulers of Equestria have apparently taken leave of their senses... and the poor dude hasn't even hit dragon puberty, so it Makes. No. Sense. Poor dude is well on the way to a complete breakdown. To be fair, even if there weren't any magic bits around, there's enough other crazy going on that he'd still be in a bad place.
4408947 Trixie is not dead. Wait and see. Monday, the chapter goes up.
Then, I get lynched by ponies who have to wait another week for more
*counts* another week? The pressure will continue to build and the update June 30th will be the big blow-off where everything comes together like the guts of an A-bomb, changing the face of Trixieverse forever. (then it's comforting the ponies and finding the happy ending for all)
So I apologize for the June you're gonna have does it help that I'm not going to blow up the treehouse? I have other ways to work that into Trixieverse canon. It is all worked out in advance, I promise. I am the same writer I've been all this time, not changing up the theme at the last minute. In fact it's a bit of a callback to the way TMB ended.
To add on to that, this will not end well, and I can see it ending multiple ways, the top two being Celestia gets killed by Twilight's attack instead of Chaos, or Celestia manages to stop Twilight from casting the bolt and then they tear whatever area they are in apart as a new battle ensues.
The Applejinx coaster goes up The Applejinx coaster goes down Ponies are hurting, Then they are squirting I'm torn between joy and a frown
I don't know just what I am feeling My head is now spinning and reeling The Applejinx coaster has become a roaster I can't tell the floor from the ceiling!
Sex seems to me to be scary The oozing and squishing quite hairy Now edging and death? Trixie barely has breath! Everything seems so contrary!
The Applejinx coaster will stop But what end will come out on top? I fear for them all For they tumble and fall Tis the blow of an axe... or a crop?
You know, maybe it's cruel of me, but I actually kinda WISH Trixie were dead from that. Twilight is being unreasonable, stubborn, and is lost in her own little world. Trixie's death would've been the ultimate test for her already insane mentality: either Twilight would go absolutely nuts, even more than she already is, or she'd wake the fuck up and stop being a child, desperately trying to hold on to the safety of their childhood, when everything was pure and fun and just...the bee's knees in comparison.
Not content with make the Winning-verse a fanfic in his world, Applejinx decided to turn the entirety of the show into a fanfic in the Trixie-verse. Does his madness know no bounds? What world is next in his attempt to cross the fanfic singularity? No worlds are safe from his all consuming grasp.
Oh, and yes, the last shreds of Twilight's sanity finally vanished in a puff of smoke.
Twilight really needs to go on a journey, get away from all the stupidity and perversion for awhile. Trixie meant well, but more sex was the absolute last thing Twilight needed right then and now she's paid the price for it.
Oh gods, she's completely snapped and gone full "sex is evil". And after the season finale, Pissed Off Alicorn Twilight really scares me. Throw in a Celestia who's one good fuck (or lack thereof) away from becoming Molestia, and the scheduled Ponyville Gangbang.... Shiny, Cady, get over here and talk some sense into Twi. There's the slightest chance she'll still listen to you. Maybe get Mom and Dad to give her The Talk while we're at it.
4377470
I'm really not sure withholding sex from a horny, pent-up, "born-again" sexually-repressed alicorn would have helped any. She might literally have exploded (twice!) taking out everything in a five mile radius.
Very good chapter. I might have gone into shock for a bit after reading the ending. I think Twilight was broken by sex. The bits should come with a warning:
Caution, repeated savage ruttings may cause insanity. Do not use if confused about morals or overly paranoid. Please seek medical attention immediately if any of the following symptoms occur: pregnancy, delusions, paranoia, internal bleeding, spontaneous internal combustion, growth of wings or horn, insatiable urges to commit regicide, insanity or the feeling that nothing bad could happen on such a beautiful morning.
Also
Twilight Sparkle walked on. As she walked, she forgot her dream of Friendship and Harmony. She hunted, dreamless, through the forest until she fainted from exhaustion. As she slept, a new dream was born. Not of jealousy, but of lust and anger. A dream so dark, it eclipsed the moon. For this dream was not an ordinary dream, it was a nightmare. The nightmare awoke and took to the sky, searching for her foes. And thus, Nightmare Star was born.
4377599
That's Princess Molestia to you. You will respect me, I know your exactly location 24/7.
Guess that saying 'be careful what you wish for because you just might get it' applies to Trixie
Twilight on the hunt for Chaos is going to be good!
Fan? Meet Shit.
Shit? Meet Fan.
Shit? Why are you - SHIT, STOP HITTING FAN!
I was afraid this would happen... ~<3
4378081
If Twi makes one wrong move in Crowbar's direction... yeah, that's going to make the DBZ battle with Tirek look like a snowball fight.
Twilight just discovered tantric magic?
Poor spike...
Poor Spike? He's just asleep, and upset over another's sincere happiness!
Poor Spike nothing. Do you realize that one of the mares we've known for six books will be DEAD at the end of next chapter?
(don't you dare say a thing, Zobrux )
I find myself agreeing with Twilight and Spike here. The insane, endless death-rutting needs to stop. Too much mortal danger. Too many convoluted relationships. Those bits were nothing but trouble the second they showed up and they nearly killed ponies the first time. Now one's definitely almost killing Trixie.
After a clusterfuck like this, I'd go join a convent.
oh, this will end well. I can only imagine that the final chapter will be Luna, Celestia, Chaos, Twi and Cadance sitting down with their SO's and finally bucking TALKING!
... like this series has needed in spades for forever. I hope Dash and AJ are ready for the fallout.
... ... wouldn't mind seeing Rarity and Spike have a heart to heart talk, either.
I wonder if I'm reading into this too much but it seems like Spike is miserable for reasons a bit deeper than "dickings are gross." I mean a bigger more important part is that Spike was unable to find anyone to confide in for days. Twilight was distracted with Trixie and Celestia and didn't pay attention to him apparently much at all for several days, and he can't confide in Rarity, and his other friends are all doing this sex thing with each other and it's apparently VERY important and Spike doesn't get it and is excluded and Rarity and Twilight both indulge it by hurting others or themselves (or at very least apparently hurting others), which Spike had been taught was Wrong. So I'm betting he's very confused, and feeling very isolated, and it just exacerbates the broken pedestal that he's getting with Rarity.
... The entire Sparkle household is just in terrible misery. Twilight is at her wit's end too. Forced into an immortality and power she can't find an upside of anymore, the immortality threatening to hurt and separate her from her love, and Celestia changing in ways Twilight can't accept...
... Which I only now realized is very nearly the same thing going on with Spike. The wonderful paragon that you love is doing things you can't see them doing. Except in Twilight's case it's got a hefty dose of hypocrisy, because Spike can't understand the attraction of sex 'cause his hormones haven't kicked in yet, but Twilight indulges herself all the time, and probably still would if it wasn't lethal to her lover. She just put Celestia on an even higher pedestal than Spike did with Rarity.
... And then the last part happened, and Twilight decides to hide Spike and Trixie away (in a way that definitely will not help Spike in the long run), and go to war. This is going to get very bad.
4380201
Aaand I laughed so hard I felt light-headed.
4382032
Yeah, everypony is so busy with this "magical maredick" horseshit that they have no time for him. On top of that, his crush is in a committed relationship, so are all his peers, his mother/sister/whatever is going insane even by her own standards, the rulers of Equestria have apparently taken leave of their senses... and the poor dude hasn't even hit dragon puberty, so it Makes. No. Sense. Poor dude is well on the way to a complete breakdown. To be fair, even if there weren't any magic bits around, there's enough other crazy going on that he'd still be in a bad place.
4380201
Are you seriously going to kill on of them?!?
Or wait is Trixie dead... i cant tell?!?
4408947
Trixie is not dead. Wait and see. Monday, the chapter goes up.
Then, I get lynched by ponies who have to wait another week for more
*counts* another week? The pressure will continue to build and the update June 30th will be the big blow-off where everything comes together like the guts of an A-bomb, changing the face of Trixieverse forever. (then it's comforting the ponies and finding the happy ending for all)
So I apologize for the June you're gonna have does it help that I'm not going to blow up the treehouse? I have other ways to work that into Trixieverse canon. It is all worked out in advance, I promise. I am the same writer I've been all this time, not changing up the theme at the last minute. In fact it's a bit of a callback to the way TMB ended.
Be brave. and hang on!
.......................the world will burn.
To add on to that, this will not end well, and I can see it ending multiple ways, the top two being Celestia gets killed by Twilight's attack instead of Chaos, or Celestia manages to stop Twilight from casting the bolt and then they tear whatever area they are in apart as a new battle ensues.
Commence read.
Rarity knew it would happen.
Think we all sorta did.
The Applejinx coaster goes up
The Applejinx coaster goes down
Ponies are hurting,
Then they are squirting
I'm torn between joy and a frown
I don't know just what I am feeling
My head is now spinning and reeling
The Applejinx coaster
has become a roaster
I can't tell the floor from the ceiling!
Sex seems to me to be scary
The oozing and squishing quite hairy
Now edging and death?
Trixie barely has breath!
Everything seems so contrary!
The Applejinx coaster will stop
But what end will come out on top?
I fear for them all
For they tumble and fall
Tis the blow of an axe... or a crop?
Ahh Twilight, pride goes before a fall...
You know, maybe it's cruel of me, but I actually kinda WISH Trixie were dead from that. Twilight is being unreasonable, stubborn, and is lost in her own little world. Trixie's death would've been the ultimate test for her already insane mentality: either Twilight would go absolutely nuts, even more than she already is, or she'd wake the fuck up and stop being a child, desperately trying to hold on to the safety of their childhood, when everything was pure and fun and just...the bee's knees in comparison.
Not content with make the Winning-verse a fanfic in his world, Applejinx decided to turn the entirety of the show into a fanfic in the Trixie-verse. Does his madness know no bounds? What world is next in his attempt to cross the fanfic singularity? No worlds are safe from his all consuming grasp.
Oh, and yes, the last shreds of Twilight's sanity finally vanished in a puff of smoke.
As someone once told Dr. Frankenfurter "Your experiment is a failure -your lifestyle is too extreme"