The Great Train Chase.

by Russell Dickson

All Wells that Ends Well.

Chapter Seven
All Wells that Ends Well.

Rainbow Dash was napping on her crowd when a voice call out. “What you doing?”

Rainbow shouted back as she turn over to look. “Pinky Pie! You and thus balloons….OH!”

There flapped Princess Luna. The smile on her face was wide and bright. “Sorry, Rainbow Dash. I had to get even with you for sneaking up on us the last time we came though Ponyville.”

“Good one, Princess, but I got to ask. Why do you always say ‘we’ when it is just you?”

From behind Rainbow Dash came another, deeper voice. “What are we? Crowds?” Asked Skin Wings. Star Dancer also voice in. “Oh I think, Rainbow Dash, is just not that good at counting.” As she pop up form behind another crowd. Star Dancer still had an eye patch over her left eye, but was healthy other wise.

The four of them laughed. Then Rainbow Dash said. “I thought you told me could not be friends with these guys? You know rule and all.”

Princess Luna smile. “I still believe in rules. But, sometimes the rule have to change. I need my friends and they need me. If you got the time, would you like to come with us to Appleloosa and get my sky chariot?”

Rainbow Dash smile herself. “And, maybe see some pony special?”

“Well, if he happen to be there. I mean I only mail, Transparent Pie, a few days ago. So, it’s not like he does not know I coming. So, time will tell what happens.” Said Luna.

The four new friends took for Appleloosa, enjoying being together, because friendship is magic.

The End

Comments

[TwilightPoopSparkle]

Dude. You need an editor.

[8542Madness]

I'm not going to lie, the grammar in this story is atrocious. However, it certainly does not deserve seven dislikes. It is a far cry better than a lot of the crap thrown up on this website. It isn't great, but it isn't bad either. Also, it's spelled "great", not "grate".

If you studied up a bit on grammar, then this story really could be grate great.

I'm giving you a thumbs up for support of your creativity. You certainly have a good imagination, and this many dislikes does not do your creativity any good grace.

[Russell Dickson]

4044424 That one of the reason I took this up so that I could be better at spelling and grammar.

[Patient X]

4044423

*a editor

[Russell Dickson]

4164598 can you help me find one?

[MinccinoandEmolga3]

The pages are a bit short. I'd advise making it longer. Also, I agree with 8542Madness about the grammar and spelling. I MIGHT edit the story if I have time.

[Russell Dickson]

4187966 I will take all the help I can get.

[Russell Dickson]

4187966 What do you mean shot?

[MinccinoandEmolga3]

I mean the fact that the last chapter is short.

[Russell Dickson]

4198333 What would you recommend?

[MinccinoandEmolga3]

I'd recommend you at least make it a couple paragraphs or so.