• Member Since 5th Feb, 2014
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Russell Dickson


I am Russell Dickson. I live and work in Maysville, KY with my family at Magee's Bakery. I like to write stories form time to time and thought I would try MLP

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Princess Luna: “We are heading for Appleloosa. We wish to meet with Chief Thunderhooves about affairs of state. Along with some ponies who are censures about a new wind turbine project. Also the town is opening a new cheery packing plant.”

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 11 )

I'm not going to lie, the grammar in this story is atrocious. However, it certainly does not deserve seven dislikes. It is a far cry better than a lot of the crap thrown up on this website. It isn't great, but it isn't bad either. Also, it's spelled "great", not "grate".

If you studied up a bit on grammar, then this story really could be grate great.

I'm giving you a thumbs up for support of your creativity. You certainly have a good imagination, and this many dislikes does not do your creativity any good grace.

4044424 That one of the reason I took this up so that I could be better at spelling and grammar.

The pages are a bit short. I'd advise making it longer. Also, I agree with 8542Madness about the grammar and spelling. I MIGHT edit the story if I have time. :twilightsmile:

I mean the fact that the last chapter is short. :ajbemused:

I'd recommend you at least make it a couple paragraphs or so. :ajsmug:

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