Celestia wants to die more than anything, as she no longer has the will to live. Is there anything she can do to save herself from the misery of living eternally? According to Philomena, yes, there is.
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"Life drive" makes me think of a spaceship engine powered by souls.
Wow um... crazy little ending, but the whole story was SOOOOO short.
You missed a wonderful opportunity to further detail the inner turmoil of Celestia's situation, and Philomena's words of wisdom to help her progress.
Gg celestia
367730 same here
the fuck
she repeated something and then blew up everything?
the fuck
And then Celestia was a grenade.
Seriously, what even happened there? Why would the great and powerful Celestia be all like "Oh, woe is me" and not, I don't know, consult her friends about it? She is the one who told specifically told Twilight to "make some friends." Either way it sends the destruction of her entire castle into the screwy realm of wtfery.
Nice work there, Phil.
In all seriousness, I think you would have done better to not keep calling attention to Luna's shared state. Maybe set this at some point in the future? Maybe Luna done got herself moon'd again, or took a sect of like-minded ponies and formed her own country, or was otherwise in some other position that Celestia would be unable to talk to her about it? Or at LEAST glossed her over, and just dealt with 'hey, what about Luna?' comments. Continually calling attention to her like that just kind of makes it look like Celestia's being mopey.
Reply time.
367797 I figured if I put more stuff about her inner turmoil people would be like "another poor me immortal Celestia story screw this". I can do it, I just thought it would drive people away if I put too much.
367962 Yeah, I was trying to be kind of funny. But I'm apparently not that good at that, as whenever I do people flame me (not saying you are).
367912 It was a magic spell gone wrong. Thought that was kind of obvious. I wanted something exciting to happen.
367918 I think I talked about that earlier. Celestia understands that ponies need friends to truly be happy, but Celestia herself simply watches her friends waste away without ever really being there for her. That's why she was so sad: Nobody can understand her as she does what she must do.
I think I could make an interesting story where the spell works, she becomes a filly, and then screws up Equestria, then has the mane 6 help her defeat Luna again.
That might be fun.