I like to read/write stories. And I have two favorite TV shows: Doctor Who, and Incert 4-beat drumming here. (Ref. to DW) MLP:FIM!!! I'm horrid at spelling so I have to use lower vocabulary words.
Diamond Tiara and Silver Soon have really done it now! The CMC go on a quest of self discovery alone and without telling anypony about it. Danger awaits everywhere and if the CMC die we all will know who to blame.
Just a fun little story that popped in my head one day while hating Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon for being such jerks to the CMC. ~Tessa
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Okay, I read this and thought it was okay. A lot wasn't explained, like how did Diamond and Silver know what the CMC are doing at any given moment?
There were also quite a few grammar errors, but more importantly, there were spelling errors. I'll be nice, since I don't know your situation, but you should get either word (which isn't free) and google docs (which is) these have what's known as spell check.
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Ok so here's the thing. 1. They are there. If you read carefully you'll see that. 2. I've been writing this at school. And they don't (Strangely) have the spelling checky thing.
4285754 Hmmm, interesting. Do you have word or Google Docs?
Tessa, dear, you spelled "Prologe" wrong. It's actually spelled P-r-o-l-o-g-u-e.
Just tryin' to be helpful.
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Nnope.
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Thanks!
4289973 You're very welcome, sweetheart.
If you don't have Word, I know of a nifty l'il word-program that you could use if your computer is yours, and you can download things to it.
It's called "Open Office", and it is totally free (you never have to pay for it like you do MS Word...ever!!!), and it has much the same features as Word does.
It is my permanent word-prog-of-choice now, and I
it! Ya oughta try it some time!
As for Google Docs, it's free to download and use, too. I have it on my laptop, too.
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Well the thing about this is, I do this a school. And hey don't have a spell check thingy on here. And on this site at home it does. :/
4290124 Ah, okay. Yeah, that would tend to put a damper on things like that.
Seriously? You'd think that a school computer would have a spell checker on it.
Or a decent word program.
Well, that's good, anyway.
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Yeaaaah. It irritates me. Plus some of the words I know what they are and all, and I think they are close, but then once I'm home the words they give me are nowhere near the word. Like with DT and Silvs laughing. :/
I love it!!! but are they going together or separate ways??
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Well the description on both the small and big state that they are going alone. And it also says that they don't tell anypony. So obviously separate. The next chapter will also help clear that up.
4297701 Oh ok sorry about thatv
but i still like it and cant wait for the next chapter!!! 
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And thank you. :3 
It's quite alright. :3
4299683 lol
Here's just a few spelling errors that are bugging me. histaricly = hysterically /
suplise = supplies / esentules = essentials. Also maybe, "As the crayon snapped Scootaloo snapped back to reality and got an idea." to "As the crayon broke Scootaloo snapped back to reality and got an idea." (Saying snapped twice just seems unnecessary). Lastly "Scootaloo said lying to her hero." to "Scootaloo lied to her hero." (The former just doesnt read right.
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So this is really helpful.
Thanks for the comment about my spelling errors. I really suck at spelling, sometimes to the point that the internet or anything can't figure out what I'm saying!