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The Forgotten Age: End of the Line, Creation of Monsters

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The Good Boy

The Good Boy #1 · Feb 23rd, 2014 · · ·

B. A. Utiful

Shpoople96

Shpoople96 #2 · Feb 23rd, 2014 · · ·

Eh, too rushed and not very descriptive.

Shadow-Dancer

Shadow-Dancer #3 · Feb 23rd, 2014 · · ·

3989920 It was spur of the moment and also I did not see the point of too detailed of a description as i feel it is not that important, I worried more about the flow which i believe I did well.

Thanks for the comment, i'll still keep it in mind

swisspony