• Published 23rd Feb 2014
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A cheesey Hearts and Hooves day - EnderW0lfCraft3r



Pinkie Pie is planning an extra special party... so is Cheese Sandwich!

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A cheesey day.

"Aww!!" There was a big red banner hanging outside of Cheese's apartment window. It had a picture of Pinkie Pie on it and it said : My very special some pony!
"Cheese this is amazing! Not to mention you did it all while i was moping in my room." She added the last part silently.
Everypony had a wonderful time playing pin the tail on the pony. Pinkie decided she needed it for the party after all!

Everypony loved listening to the song bird quire! She decided that was needed in the party too. Everypony thought the red ribbons were spectacular. Ahe decided they were needed too! All the ponies were impressed by the massive heart shaped cloud. They all thought that the apple fritters were delicious! Pinkie was glad that Cheese Sandwich did not leave them out. Pinkie Pie remembered suddenly. I need to apologize to my friends! Especially since I was being so envious! Pinkie trotted over to her 5 friends.

"Sorry I was getting so worked up, girls. I really am!" Pinkie apologized humbly.
"It's quite alright, Pinkie Pie!" Rarity said ans turned to face the rest of the ponies. "We've all felt a bit jelous of some thing ourselbes, havent we girls?"
The ponies all nodded and Pinkie Pie squeezed them all into a group hug.

"Soon, all of you will very special someponies!" Pinkie Pie said. Rarity blushed as she remembered all the colts she had crushed on. Twilight remembered Flash and Rainbow Dash thought of Soarin.

"But for now" Pinkie Pie turned to face a group of mares gawking at Cheese Sandwich. "Stay off my colt friend or I'll cut you."

Everypony went silent. How cheesey.

Comments ( 9 )

javascript:smilie(':pinkiehappy:'); good Story

Aila #2 · Feb 23rd, 2014 · · 3 ·

Well, the story is fine. There are some grammar mistakes, but it's still a good story. :twilightsmile: ... Keep on with writing!

It was a cute story. Little chaotic but still very cute! Nice work here! :raritywink:

Nice story. I approve of your writing.

Comment posted by moviemaster8510 deleted Feb 25th, 2014

Basic reaction: awwwww
Good story, better grammar would be nice, and it left me with a smile on my face. A nice sweet short story to say the least

I was writing this on a tablet so my grammer got crapped up, so sorry!

Comment posted by Luxina deleted Sep 21st, 2019

don't make pinkie mad or she will cut you :pinkiecrazy:

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