Rainbow Dash is the best pony.
After a mistake with the Party Cannon leaves Applebloom crippled, Applejack goes into a rage. Where she then attempts to exile Pinkie Pie into the Everfree Forrest without the opinion of any other ponies. Will Pinkie Pie be left in the forrest to her fate, or will her friends be rescued.
Contains: Guns, Violence and language.
Page generated in 0.075 seconds
Total duration
1,082 users online
1,691,267 hits today, 1,960,719 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m2sdupGmIH1r1bwrp.png
3967763
Sorry.
RUSHED
side note, ponies don't have fingers
.................this story is just baaaaad.
it is especialyl bad with the whole contrived aj fucking matrixing god damn bullets, dash somehow incapable of doing so even though she is much faster, just so you can kill off another mane six............
this is just plain bad. the story goes way too fast, is definitely lazy, and you pull fucking guns into the idiotic thing for no other reason than to ensure someone dies............. and none of them can even fire a standrad gun anyway.
3967783 they do have toes. four of them in fact........ their hooves are technically toes.
also how the fuck could aj dodge bullets and neither pinkie pie or rainbow dash?
also burns do not cause bloodpoisoning................... and the party cannon obviuosly uses magically induced air compression else Cheese would ahve been grilled.
3967819 Still, how do they shoot?
3967897 simple. they can't shoot guns. at least not guns designed as shown in this thing.
3967897
Nice troll fic, I laughed pretty hard when they pulled guns on each other, but I totally cracked up when AB died due to "blood poisoning". That's pure comedy right there, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and say that this had to be poorly written on purpose.
The amount of grammatical errors, awkward sentence structures, and the actual story itself is just in too poor of taste to not be intentional here.
How the fuck do they shoot?
Also, you cant get blood poisoning from burns.
Okay, I never mentioned that the guns are the same as the guns that we have. And I know you can't get blood poisoning from burns, I was tired and wrote this in an hour. Sorry for the mistakes in biology and common sense and stuff. This story was rushed easily, but I just got bored and wrote it.
3967954 Most of the shitty physics and everything were on purpose. I wrote this because I was bored and my friend told me to write a story for her. So I did. This wasn't supposed to be a SERIOUS story, at least most of it anyway.
lol wut
Wow! I really like this story! There are not many dark story's about Applejack, but this one is awesome! Well done!
Uh