As the last Big Daddy left in all of Rapture, loneliness had become a constant companion of mine. No memories, no voice, not even a face that I could call my own. I thought it would be like this for my entire existence in Rapture... At least, until
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Okay I wasn't expecting a slug to be the unknown fella.
Personally I hope he gets the... Insect Swarm (??) plasmid. You know the one with the wasps.
What pre-existing tonics/splices does he have anyways? Boosted strength.. anything else?
And can Rarity get a shot of that Telekinesis if he has any left? She must feel so. much. envy.
Well then... Telekinesis is going to be /fun/ for the splicers.
4668961 Not wasps, Bees
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Exactly what I was hoping for. :) Surprise, Omega has a pet. ^~^
4660040 If you played the video games, Big Daddies have ADAM inside them already.
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4669075 It's been awhile since I played Bioshock
4669123 Me to
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This seems like a promising story, but I am somewhat confused. From the title, and what I've gleaned from reading comments it follows an Alpha Series known as Omega (unsure if that's supposed to be a nod to Sinclair, or just a lazy recycling of the designation) who failed to protect his Little Sister(s), and then begins to protect his new charges.
My confusion begins with the fact that an Alpha Series, following game canon, would be pair bonded to one Little Sister, and when that Little Sister died, the Alpha Series protecting her would either become comatose, or descend into emotional instability to the point of psychosis. But apparently, this Alpha was seemingly pair bonded to multiple Little Sisters and lost them, yet managed to retain his sanity. How exactly did he manage this? Was he not actually pair bonded?
The other thing that bothers me is that he can use Vita-Chambers. They were originally coded to Andrew Ryan's genetic frequency, preventing anyone who wasn't him, or related to him, to be able to use them to revive after a gruesome demise. And as I'm fairly certain he wouldn't have been clever enough to re-key the Vita-Chamber system to his genetic frequency (as Eleanor Lamb had a Little Sister do in Bioshock 2 for Subject Delta), nor that he's related to Ryan (as Jack was), I have to wonder how he can possibly make use of them.
Wait so was Mill the splicer following all along or is the splicer still hiding?
I see Mill being used as a hack tool of sorts on gatherers gardens, infinite uses of course.
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Actually, he's a Rosie, long redesigned in his purpose. It should explain that in the earlier chapters. :/
4669273 Ya Mill was the thing that was following/ watching them though it never said he was an ADAM slug until now
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Well as I said, that was what I'd gleaned from the title and reading some of the comments. I hadn't read any of the story yet, and I simply assumed it was an Alpha Series due to his name, "Omega", and "Last of the First", which I thought referred to them being the last of the first series of Big Daddies, the Alpha Series.
Though while that answers the Little Sister bit, I'm still wondering about how the Vita-Chambers are able to work for him.
He has two friends
A pet slug
What else?
Never expected ADAM slugs to be sentient
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Yes, Sinclair was indeed made to be the last alpha series, Omega. But, he was a part of the second generation big daddies, not the first, like our Omega.
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a little sister
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My little pony where even the bears are sentient
You know come to think of it, I don't think I've ever played a Bioshock game with Telekinesis 3. Level 1 was enough for me since I only used it to grab items away from my reach, grabbed missles, grenades, and other weapons that were coming at me and return to sender.(Telekinesis is the best way to defeat a Rumbler.) So I have no idea what a level 3 does, part of me is thinking that you were exaggerating a bit with its power.
All this time it was a slug?(Dafaq?) Well I can say that I didn't see that coming. I just assumed that it was a splicer that was still sane. Even more surprised that it's sentient and apparently fast for a slug since he was able to board the train from his hiding place before it left(Everyone knows that slugs are slow. Unless being a ADAM slug gives it super speed) Calling it Mill..... for a second I thought you were gonna call the thing Adam(but I guess that would have been too cliche.) So now the gang has a new member and not just that, it's basically a living ADAM factory(like a Little Sister) It would be able to give Omega the ADAM he needs to get more plasmids(but the more plasmids he gets, the closer he is to getting addicted and becoming the thing he hates the most.) Although I'm trying to figure what kind of purpose he would serve the gang.(besides being a loveable slimy pet.)
Here's Mill(y! For some reason I feel like they're gonna call him Milly as his nickname.)
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I found the entire segment at the beginning to be confusing. The overuse of pronouns such as "he" and "him" make it unclear as to whose point of view the story is following at that moment. Just in my second example alone, the point of view changes from the hidden watcher, to the splicer, back to the hidden watcher again with absolutely no clear transition, and all within the same paragraph.
Also, you're starting to relapse into using "it's" when you should be using "its." Here's an example:
Lastly, do not make the mistake of using "who's" instead of "whose."
4669597 He was redesigned as a security Big Daddy with an Electronic Shock Unit which he redesigned them to shoot the high voltage electricity enough to kill whales after the fall of Rapture (he uses it mainly for melee and electrocute water though. And, I don't know where is that ESU now). He was made "To last" by the scientists. He is also a rather interesting big daddy for he have more free will than the other big daddies... He used to be an Alpha until he was redesigned as a Rosy if I'm not mistaken (his security big daddy suit with different painting).
A ADAM slug is a interesting addition to the group...but there seems to be something MORE to it, maybe future chapters will illuminate just what that is though.
They find a slug on the train and name it 'Mill'?
Reference to Prentice Mill, founder of the Atlantic Express?
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Pretty much. :D
I am having a funny feeling that Mill as they are calling the Slug is a genetically artificial Adam Slug. There may be several if not a whole lot that makes him different then a regular Adam Slug (The greatly heightened intelligence and mobility is some [Him setting off the Alarm system must mean he is also considerably larger then the norm]). Fun chapter in and of itself. Are we going to encounter other experiments that have survived after the Great Collapse of Rapture society? Wonder if they will encounter a talking dog ..... no that would be ridiculous not to mention based on the size of the dog or even how intelligent it is it would get itself killed seeking companionship of some sort.
A new companion that is not human and yet intelligent enough to have coherent thoughts and feelings for others. A rather interesting new development that surely will have rather profound results for the characters and the story. Great chapter.
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Ain't he cute? ^~^
... Seriously, I actually think its pretty adorable.
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Adorable as a new born baby(slimy like one too.)
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Good point. Maybe that's what the chip he was implanted with did, over-ride the genetic lock on the Vita Chambers and hence why now that the chip is gone he can't ever use the chambers again.
I will not lie, I was really hoping for the Winter Blast plasmid (was my personal favorite), but I understand your reasoning. Telekinesis will definitely be useful for Omega.
I WILL READ EVERY. SINGLE. CHAPTER.
after the rest come out :P
Another player has joined the party, yay!!
4671078 Oh thanks for the explanation.
WHAT THE *BEEEP* IT WAS A SLUG!?
I did NOT expect that. I honestly thought it was a person.(hell I thought it was jack for a bit till he got scared)
but an ADAM Slug?
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Well so... Is chuck norris adam slug
Are future chapters going to be even longer? It seems like at this point you are stretching it quite a bit...
hmm I can go with that though was sort of hoping for a little sister who had only gone through a some of their programming
4794514 ITS SENTIENT WITH A BRAIN!!! LOVE IT WITH COMPASSION!!!
Do u get addicted to Adam after one use or does it take more? Because in the game u didn't turn into an addict when u spliced all 7 different ways.
The addiction only comes with continuous use, in all the bioshock games your journey only takes at most a few days, the splicers went through years of continuous use
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Addiction is based on several variables including how through the splicing, how much splicing, how much ADAM, how unstable/experimental the plasmid is, among other things. Early testers got addicted in months, while others took years to get that far.