As the last Big Daddy left in all of Rapture, loneliness had become a constant companion of mine. No memories, no voice, not even a face that I could call my own. I thought it would be like this for my entire existence in Rapture... At least, until
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Good chapter!
Dark souls 2 a addicting time consuming game I do not blame you
I'm guessing we'll find out who the third sister was.
poor omega
I do enjoy dark souls 2, well whenever I have the time that is. Great chapter, good choice for a movie.
Poor Winston, that is what he gets for having an OC moment. So Omega has memory gap problems, the kind that makes him forget things after a certain time or was it due to him being reprogramed for city repairs? Any other dark secrets of Rapture planning on being revealed for the characters?
Very good chapter, it's always exciting to learn more about Omega's past!
While reading, I can't help but think of many ways for the story to go. I want to read more to see if I'm right or not.
I do enjoy reading new chapters to stories that I like. Just a few minor spelling mistakes.
Demonstrating to Dash his strength:
Last paragraph of this chapter:
Should be filling
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Fixed it.
Nice chapter!
I don't know why but I knew that the movie was going to be Casablanca before it was even revealed.(How dafaq did I know that?)
And I did love putting that part with Sofia Lamb.
Oooh~ New cover art.
Nice work with the updated picture. Impressive tie-in with the film you put in, maybe if they have the opportunity to take things to Equestria that will be one of them? As for the content, very good so far, I see that your tying in things nicely, but I wonder if those 'new' daddies are even close to what a original like Omega is....do they heed the call of the system as well? So many questions that only future chapters can answer.
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Happy to see that you like the story, but I can't take the credit for the cover art.
You can thank one of your fellow readers, ShadowBolt, for that.
Also, I like how he tied it in as well. ^~^
Good job putting Casablanca as an allegory of Omega's conflict about Rarity and Fluttershy possibly leaving in the future! It fit perfectly!
This has been a great story so far mate. Keep on writing!
Though I wish we had a drawing of Omega...
Is this story before bioshock 2?
4251209 No, it was just a flashback.
For some reason I could see the ending lines from Casablanca being said at the end of the story.
4246157 Think of him like a Rosie, but with an ESU (Electro shock would be so much easier) instead of a rivet gun.
look at this pictures2.quickmeme.com/img/3b/3b6ceec525559d91f62918118b15e4c84c361fdc8ae4cdb7af7f7de07491cc25.jpg
GET IN THE CEEEEEEAAAAAARRRRRR!!!! >:V
4146613 ITS THE FIREMAN, THE FIREMANS HERE!!!
Fireman: "BURN IN THE NAME OF THE PROPHET!!!!