As the last Big Daddy left in all of Rapture, loneliness had become a constant companion of mine. No memories, no voice, not even a face that I could call my own. I thought it would be like this for my entire existence in Rapture... At least, until
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moar. now.
Wonderful, I take a vacation and come back to an excellent story taking off!
One piece, I do believe the second rivet gun in this chapter - chapter 8, first paragraph - is written 'river' gun. Other than that, I do believe you are doing spectacularly.
Keep up the good work, this is wonderful to read!
Very nice so far, and such keeping with Rapture in and of itself as well.
"And then Spike rode Winston into the sunset."
The last words to the story. This is my prediction.
So now there is a way to talk between the two worlds, oh the endless questions that Twilight will annoy Omega with. Well, until he tells her to shut up. I wonder if anyone will mention how out of all of them, Rainbow was the most likely one to do something as reckless as sneaking into Rapture. If anything the other two seemed like the least likely if not ever. Perhaps this will convince Omega to leave Rapture near the end.
So Omega's left hand has his weapon?(good thing he doesn't use plasmids, that would be dangerous)(any reason why you did this?) Then what does he use the right hand for?
Also I'm wondering, are there going to be any good splicers in this story or are they all evil cannibals.(I wonder what would happen if one of them has Hypnotize 3?)
I know that omega will try to protect their innocence with his life and soul but... Unless they can get back earlier than 360 days from now they they are going to come back to equestria in a VERY different condition than they left it in, mentally speaking.
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honestly, the only good splicer is either a dead one, or a brainwashed one. other than that...yeah they're ADAM thirsty cannibals that will stop at nothing to get it. all of this is because plasmids, ADAM, and EVE completely BUTTFUCK your mind after having induced enough of it. it basically makes your mind create a need for more ADAM, an procure it by any means necessary.
so no...there are no good splicers
but who knows...maybe in someway through the author's imagination, there could be that one...yeah, no, its not happening
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I think that's up to him to decide, and we already have a incompetent Big Daddy who still has mind and feelings. So whose to say that won't happen?
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i'll admit it's not impossible.
but it's not something i'd find easy to work into a story like this.
but i should just shut up now, and let the smart people do their work.
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Whose they? Last I checked its one guy.
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EVERYONE
One of my main questions is why doesn't he use any guns he finds?? Really? It would be so much more useful.
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Even in Bioshock 2 the only gun a splicer would carry that you could use would be the shotgun (I don't think they could use the spear gun.) Mainly the Big Daddy weapons are modified so he can use them. That's what I always took from playing the game anyway. (Well that and that the bee plasmid kicks ass!)
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I just went all out drill.
Plus freezer burning was so much fun.
Awesome chapter!
I think I know how this is going to end do to the last chapters title.
Ah. The legendary "right?" that only appears at the end of chapters or characters' dialogues.
4004920 D-jack, you said "ButtFuck" correct? I must say, what a, Fitting choice of words for your Avatar.... :3
I noticed the one
Librarian senses, tingling.