As the last Big Daddy left in all of Rapture, loneliness had become a constant companion of mine. No memories, no voice, not even a face that I could call my own. I thought it would be like this for my entire existence in Rapture... At least, until
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interesting very interesting, hm now though wonder how it will be for them now that omega is no longer immortal.
welcome to RAPTURE!!! NOW THE REAL TEST CAN BEGIN!!!!!!!!!!!! GOOD LUCK!!
First off. I fucking love this story. I love Bioshock and I like my ponies.
I really do enjoy what you've done with this story as well, especially with the massive flood of Big Daddy/Bioshock fics in the last month or so, this story still retains its own identity among all of them and I like that.
I also enjoy the development of the characters and how they aren't simply just inserted into the place of Little Sisters.
Anyway, I like knowing the fact that this story is doing very well and hope for the best in the future.
Also this:
*armor
That's the only real problem I saw in the chapter, but if requested I can do more thorough editing job for you in the future since I tend to be rather good at it.
The plot thickens...
It would be interesting to see how Omega would protect now that he lost his suit.
Yay! Omega's alive, and slightly well! This is a phenomenal story: it's long, high I detail, AND just an interesting plot!
Keep it up sir/Madame, your awsome!
Okay then, I seem to be picking up ludicrous amounts of what is possibly RarityxOmega Shipping. Good.
Rarity! Look at Omega! Now look at Fluttershy! Now back to Omega! Omega is now a splicer! Back to Fluttershy! The Fluttershy has become assertive! I'm reading about horses whilst on a horse!
Let's see some hot Omega x Rarity shipping. Begin forming the love triangle.
Description at the end would benefit from something else going on. Like Omega looking himself over in a mirror for the first time since he lost his memories in the reprogramming. Or Rarity checking his wounds more closely while she changes bandages. Would feel like a more organic reflection on his new appearance.
Also what's up with these aspirin that only one puts this behemoth to bed so easily?
Well we've got Omega out of his armor. Can he now attempt to inject plasmids and ADAM? Will Fluttershy find out about the secret behind the little sisters and in her kindness and desire to help the now mortal Omega by becoming a little sister herself to keep him supplied with ADAM? Will Rarity discover EVE might be able to restore unicorn magic for a limited time and use it and her fashion knowledge to gather together as many Big Daddy suits as she can and make for Omega a new Rapture fashion line that just down right 'killer'?
I've become quite hooked on this series and I can't wait to see what you have in store!
I WILL END YOU IF YOU START SHIPPING RARITY AND OMEGA.
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O.o
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I thought that how he looks
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/091/8/5/delta_unmasked_by_lostro-d3cz2ty.jpg
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His tubing scars and the like are under his bandaging, plus, the scar around his neck and the vein that had blackened from the big daddy changes.
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So, you love bio shock so much.
You had sex with it?
That's as far as I got...
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4409039 I am fairly certain if he did look like that then the ponies would probably have had second guesses if they should try to approach him yet alone help him. And they would probably be too scared to hug him or even touch him. It would be more realistic in a way while also rather tragic, but then how would the romance tag work out then?
4409237 Got it. What is the length of his hair? I am guessing rather long or something above average length because of him not having any grooming done for some long period of time.
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I like to think of the effects of plasmids as a sort of chemical, really. So, I'd say that short hair would work best.
*Looks at tags again*
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4410273 Any specific type of hair? Straight, curly or it does not matter?
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Straight.
Yay! Go fluttershy! she stayed behind to save her biped pal!!
For a long while now every time I would see this fic I would always go, "Meh". Not because I thought it would be bad but that it wouldn't interest me. Now that I've read it though I have a sudden and very strong urge to somehow find and slap my past-self. This is a very well done story with plenty of funny and sad moments and so far nothing feels forced. I look forward to more.
So the fires of the shipping boat have finally started(good I was worried this was a lesbian fic.) It's going to be hard to imagine Omega without his suit.(still he gets another one.) Now what's going to happen when Rarity and Fluttershy explain to their friends how they lost their one chance to return home?
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Well Omega did say that there were two ways to get to the surface but only explained one. It'll be interesting to see what the other way would be.
Awesome chapter! I hope we will soon see Ponies with Plasmids!
The author has made it clear that this story isn't ending so soon, nor should it.
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I agree, things will get much more interesting as they progress now.
Aspirin does many things. Inducing drowsiness is not one of them.
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XD
Seems legit
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XD
Seems legit
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XD
Seems legit
(nods head)
Can't help but think that 'Casablanca' will play some sort of foreshadowing role here. If there is a Omega x Rarity romance then eventual in their next attempt Rarity will actually be trying to stay behind while Omega needs to convince her to get on the Bathysphere before she regrets it, maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, but soon, and for the rest of her life.
4414212 For humans, yes. Who can say what it does to magic ponies from another world?
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That might have been a valid argument if it had been one of the magic ponies taking the aspirin instead of a human.
4440373 Err, unless I missed something, it was Fluttershy who was given aspirin to help with her head injury, and last I checked, she was a magic pony, not a human. So yeah... My argument still sounds pretty valid to me.
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When did Fluttershy get a head injury?
I know Omega had a serious head injury, but Fluttershy?
4441062 Unless I remember completely wrong, Flutters hurt her head, some bleeding, Omega fetched a med-box, they patched that up, etc, and she was given aspirin. It wasn't given a lot of text, and she got better over the course of, what, one chapter? Maybe two?
Could you by chance fix you spelling error in the discription? You spelt 'guard' as 'gaurd'. Kind of off putting to someone wanting to read the story. Not everyone is like me and will ignore that one mistake giving the story the benefit of the doubt.
Meanwhile, i'm just sitting here, wondering when that sex tag will finally be put to use.
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I like where my mind wants this to go. As Omega is now out of his armour, and they have no way to get back to equestria, the splicers are gonna have a field day, and continually attack Rarity and Fluttershy. Therefore, in order to protect them, omega's gonna have to get some more armour.
And he's gonna get some upgrades this time.
.....
I REALLY hope that's what's gonna happen.
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Huh, I'm not the only one.
Papa bear's picture seems the most likely to me.
it looks like what id expect him to look like.
(I think that second picture was just an excuse to try and make him look badass)
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Perhaps he was a botched subject, after all, he did acquire a true bond with his sisters and mourn their losses, unlike the others noted in this tale. Maybe he was never truly grafted, never truly converted into one of those duty-driven hulks before him.
PS, its hard to use a tablet to type with only 1 bar of internet.
The one made by papa bear is defiantly the best (in my opinion)
And da weiner is papa bear.
I agree with you agastopia
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I agree, and Omega losing his suit is like losing the awesome thing about big daddy's. He will no longer be able to survive as long as he does in fights, he'll no longer be as intimidating and without his suit and we lose the sense of mystery and power behind Omega because we and the characters know what he looks like. It kinda just ruins the story for me
I wonder if he gets a new suit or has the old one repaired...