I love the story. Keep it up.

damn good

i am intrigued...cant wait till the next chapter.

[you have been awarded with my seal of approval for peaking my interest]

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Yay my favorite pony is in this story and I must say this looks like a fine reading

So far, so good- can't wait to read the rest of it

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Very nice, great success!

Small question, what's this ESU? I looked it up on the Bioshock Wiki, didn't give me anything,

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its like a built in taser. (i think)

so he is a god

let us see what happens i do hope this one gets me i;d love to read one that dos but so far they fall short. side note: i have a little bit of a hard time seeing these 2 sneaking like that less there some sort of fashion ideas she thinks she could get the cmc would more likely be the ones to to do this but then we want whats left of the city to stand right? never the less what i have read i like and will press onward it is your story and we are only here for the ride after all.

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Notice anything odd? A Big Daddy with no lethal weaponry, painted blue, and overly armored platings. Like I had said, I wasn't exactly a normal Big Daddy. If anything, I was more like a security gaurd. The reason? I had to be the worst guardian in existence. When I was first "volunteered" into the Big Daddy Initiative, I lost three Little Sisters within my first year. Knowing that I had lost them, whether I knew they were my daughters at the time or not, always resulted in a strong emotional whiplash.

I would go days on end mourning the death of the little girl that I had known as my daughter, even if I was only made to believe so. What baffled the scientists at Ryan's laboratories though was the fact that I could mourn at all. I was originally a Rosie model after all. Made to be without emotion, thought, or any sort of mindset that deviated from protecting my charge. Try as they might though, they could never seem to truly remove these issues from my system.

How is he talking about his own brainwashing/programming in a self aware manner? That makes no sense. If one knows they were brainwashed, then were they really brainwashed?

Why not the good ending for BioShock two dude I got the best ending for BioShock two and it was like the best thing ever because I was so happy

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I think he remembers that they changed his programming, and that’s what made him self aware enough to know that he’s been brainwashed, even if he can’t fight said programming (kind of like robocop I guess)

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Remember the Marvel Civil War movie? Bucky knew he'd been messed with, recognized the pattern of command phrases being read to him.

So, would the Ponycific Sea be the same as the South Luna Ocean on the following map? http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-uj5l0C_W9Ps/Vh9gxWnaXKI/AAAAAAAAA98/kYLCGxpkHmI/s1600/eq_map.jpg

Or maybe it would be the North Luna Ocean? I suspect you might be more familiar with an older map of Equestria that does not show the Undiscovered West (beyond the Smokey Mountains and Las Pegasus).

Re-reading this masterpiece one last time. Then I'll let it sail the forever unfinished waters.