As the last Big Daddy left in all of Rapture, loneliness had become a constant companion of mine. No memories, no voice, not even a face that I could call my own. I thought it would be like this for my entire existence in Rapture... At least, until
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Can't wait.
well honestly if you are going to do a vote, tell us what the vote is for. I didnt vote because it was only asking "1 or 2". not actually having a choice doesnt help.
good story still.
music for the ending? hmm......How about Disturbed: I'm Alive.
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I wasn't really being literal. XD
But, the song does fit.
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I know you weren't serious. I just wanted to supply a song. And besides, My vita was already playing said song as I read the ending.
Rivet gun OP just give him it IT'S JUST LIKE THE HALO 1 PISTOL
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very nice chapter good luck fluttershy, rarity, and omega on your journey
and omega....if you don't make it may I be the first to say truly you have earned the right to be called a protector and a damn good big daddy.
Nice chapter! Honestly I hope he finds like a fully upgraded shotgun or something later. But either way it's cool.
4542314 *Smack* NEVER COMPARE THE TWO!!!!
OP Rivet Gun and Halo 1 Pistol may be good buddies, but never insult Pistol with that comparison!
4542762 I wasn't insulting I was saying that Omega should have the Halo 1 pistol for the lolz. Just kidding, Give him a freaking drill so we can see some brutal action.
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I have a better suggestion. GIVE HIM SOME MORE FUCKING ARMOUR.
Then he wouldn't die, y'know?
And as to how he would get into it...
I'll leave that to the author.
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Honestly I got the same idea. I mean scanning through the comments I assumed pick 1 or 2 then put what you want to see happen at some point. Things need to be made clearer because if it was about weapons I would have suggested the good old shotgun or at the very least coming across upgraded Mini-turrets for when they need to take cover and rest.
Rivet gun, or revolver?
Why not both?
4543500 What about if he finds spare Alpha armor OR Multiplayer Big Daddy armor
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Heh, probably won't be easy.
Though, Im curious. We all know that there are many, and I mean many guardians in Rapture. Though, which is all of your favorites. Personally, I side with the lancer, but its also a close call between him and the rumbler.
(Big Sister count too, btw.)
Ask and you shall receive....
That worked pretty well...
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Ah yes, John Dreamer... I am quite aware of his amazing work with game-fitting music.
But I picked a song that fit the reading of that paragraph and TSFH provided the perfect one that fit that paragraph in theme and time.
Now, for a song that pretty much fits this entire fic...
It's time to oil up!
4544449 That is for the entire fic maybe but what about the final scene only....it should probally be something dark and fast like rainbow factory or something...
4544069 Freking hell I would have to choose Big Sister or Rumbler
Glad that he went with the rivet gun, but it's a shame that it looks like he won't be getting suit T-T
Omega is going to go to Equestria, right? Right!?
He can't just stay and die when Rapture collapses!
I guess, that's assuming he's going to make it through Lower Rapture.
I'm going to go out on a limb here and say a future interactive choice is going to be Omega finding a Power To The People machine and deciding on a rivet gun mod.
On a side note maybe he should start stocking up on cash so he can use vending machines and first aid stations.
There are three problems with this fic that bring me out of the experience. Not narrative decisions, but grammatical mistakes. Yes, I'm being that guy.
1: You use way too many commas. This is the main problem that you should work on fixing in future chapters. Try to separate your sentences using either the em dash (—) or a semicolon. I have had to reread several sentences because they run-on.
2. The use of "it's" instead of "its." You wouldn't type "the projector screen began to lose it's image," but instead "the projector screen began to lose its image." The simplest way to solve this problem is to see if it makes sense to separate "it's" into "it is" and see if it makes sense.
3. The way you have chosen to write out Omega's spoken dialogue when meeting with the other ponies. Not only is it difficult to read sometimes, but I can't imagine a voice in my head that switches from high to low pitch constantly without it sounding like Honk and Pogey.
Also, for ending music, what type of ending are we talking about here? I have a few tracks in mind.
So many variables, so little outcomes.
Come on! Start splicing! Splice Omega! Splice the Ponies! SPLICE!
Because really, with the Holy Trinity(Lurker, Natural Camouflage and Fountain of Youth), they could just creep through lower Rapture.
And Fluttershy would probably trade Angel Bunny for Natural Camouflage on a normal day.
Maybe somewhere along in the story they might encounter a big sister or maybe even a servicing big daddy, would make for an interesting battle and Omega could salvage parts of the armor for himself. Some left overs from the previous occupants would make for an interesting conversation. Like the paintings of Jack's hands injecting himself with eve, or some of Lambs graffiti art. Awesome chapter.
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Or...
4545795 good, and this is my own selections:
Now it's time to chew some gum and kick some ass, and Omega is all out of gum.
Slight problem with the choice of weapon. The rivet gun is pneumatic and must be hooked up to an air tank to work. Omega no longer has his suit so he no longer has an air tank.
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While, for the most part, that is true, second generation rivet guns, (I.e Bioshock 2) were made to function differently.
According to design differences in the rivet gun use by Delta, and most Rosie's, the rivet guns were desinged in two 'formats'. Heavy, and light. Heavy were designed with the pneumatic system, and, while I'm unsure of the system used in the light format, it is the model that both Omega, and delta, used, since Omega as such a 'special' case, and Delta was just plain badass.
4548675 All rivet guns are pneumatic. It's the only way they can work properly. I'm not saying he can't use one I'm saying he would need to attach a pressurized air tank to the bottom. Which would need to be replaced or refilled after heavy use. Not to mention it's exceptionally foolish not to take both. With the lack of ammo in Rapture you risk running out so having multiple weapons that use different ammo would be a good idea. On top of that drawing a sidearm is faster than reloading and each gun has advantages over the other. Also why not I don't know give it to one of the ponies? Even if they never use it it's still a good thing to have and don't give me the ponies can't use guns excuse because it has already been shown that they can lift things.
4548754 We can circumvent this problem by just saying that the rivet gun Omega found already has an air canister attached. And since this is Rapture, let's also say that the air tank will never deplete.
I hope we get to see some specialized ammo for Omega's weapons. The rivet gun has a trap and heavy variant, just as the revolver has an armor-piercing and anti-personnel variant.
A request for the author: I want to see Omega use a drill! Delta's drill wasn't affixed to his arm like a Bouncer's, and he could switch weapons at will because of this. Speaking of Delta, I wonder if Sofia Lamb will mention him and Eleanor?
By the way, what's your favorite plasmid? Mine is the bee swarm, and its upgraded ability to infest corpses to create even more swarms. Their stings are so violent that even Big Daddies swat at them.
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My favorite plasmid would probably be a tie between Insect Swarm, as you said, and aero dash, from the bioshock 2 multiplayer. Mostly, because of how useful it was. Need to get a little sister to the goal quick. Fwip! Youre done. Enemy attacking you mid reload? Fwip! They're stunned, and you can run. Big Daddy? Fwip! Mega stunned! It's a really good form of control.
Looks like someone was waaay ahead of the curve in adding something to their shirt. Back in the 1950's.
Late comment, I know, but the part where he extended the gun and shouldered it reminded me off this:
(Start at 1:03)
4621822 late response, but YUS
Help me. what is the EVE hypo again i forgot
4756750 Its the stuff that powers the plasmids... I think, its been a while since I played.
When you started to list the things he was wearing the only thought that cross my mind of what kind of cloths he find was this. (That..that kind of rhyme did it?)
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Guys... it's Freeze + Revolver... c'mon
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My favorite would have to be the fire plasmid, something just feels right about snapping your fingers and causing things to burst in flames.
4553172 Because of your profile pic, I must do this. I LOVE THAT PROFILE PIC, IT IS AMAZING AND I WANT TO HUG IT AND I AM JEWISH. That is all.
The hell is an ESU?
5644773 BRUH! READ THE STORY FROM THE START!!!
Well personally, I listened to this.
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