As the last Big Daddy left in all of Rapture, loneliness had become a constant companion of mine. No memories, no voice, not even a face that I could call my own. I thought it would be like this for my entire existence in Rapture... At least, until
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I both love and hate where this is going. This story is a great one, keep it up.
I absolutely adore this story , but I wouldn't be surprised if it's beginning to come to an end. Not that I think it SHOULD end, it's nothing short of magnificent and I feel it doesn't get nearly enough attention. It just feels like I'm getting those "Your hearts about to break because this story is ending" kind of vibes.
I am not a fan of those vibes.
But hey, maybe I'm wrong. Whatever the case keep writing and updating.
if your doing what i think your doing... eh, ill like it either way. keep up the good work and have a cookie
Excellent work once again, the plot moves on, but I suspect your not done with them all yet. It's NEVER that simple or easy after-all.
Good chapter
Did you plan to make Omega use a weapon in the next chapters (like a minigun or a drill)?
Great chapter, love the combat scenes. So know they get to the part where a way back home is possible. The chance to go to Equestria will probably be offered to Omega again, and his inner thoughts will probably give him reasons not to even though the others want him to. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Congrats on the 200 likes.
Will there be a sequel thats be g daddy in equestria?
This has to be my favorite story on this website
I'm still very anxious about that sex tag on this story...
*shutters*
But so far this story is really good!
great chapter
Another awesome chapter, excited for the princesses' idea to get them outta there. Also enjoyed the fight!
Don't you mean, Fleet Hall? That's the name of the theater in Fort Frolic.
I'm a little disappointed that you didn't post a song that we could listen to when Fluttershy started singing. I REALLY HATE Houdini Splicers SOOO MUCH! I didn't expect a solution for them to return to happen so soon, but I guess the story has to progress.
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I know that its called Fleet Hall, but the problem is that, even in bioshock 1, the only reason that jack knew about the name 'Fleet Hall', was because he was told by Cohen. So, I figure it would make more sense if it was just called a theater.
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So far the author's putting a lot of Flutters/Rarity.
... Jesus, I wonder how Omega's reacting to that?
4256849 *Muffled sex noises*
Omega: Man, fucking splicers, at least I got the supplies I needed
*opening door*
Omega: I hope Rarity and Fluttershy are o--....
*stares*
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*Omega dies out of sheer mental scarring and shock*
A truley great fic, well written and the story is great.
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... Pfffffffffttttt.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! XD
The sad part is that I can actually imagine that happening! C:
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FUCK THE AUTHOR IMAGINED IT
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YOU KILLED US ALL
And I really wanted to see how Plasmids will react to Pony's physiology...
Oh, well...
Nice chapter thought!
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just...stop...you're killing us
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oh shit, that's not good
How many people were in that friggin' city? You'd think that after several years at this whittling down their numbers he'd run out of splicers. I mean, he's killed what, a hundred and fifty of them in the story already? Even accepting that these are unusual circumstances where he's running into lots and lots at once, you'd think eventually there just wouldn't be any more splicers.
Depending on the lifespan of a Big Daddy, all he has to do is survive another twenty years I suppose and they'll have all either aged to death, died of whatever cancers are inflicted by their plasmids, or consumed the last of the supplies and starved. There's no more ADAM left to repair their wounds, and Omega is the last person for whom the Vita Chambers still work.
Eventually, maybe he could clean up the city. Fix everything that's broken with nobody left to break it, clean up the gardens and get supplies going again, maybe even invite ponies in to live in his city with him.
The only thing that could have made it better is if the larger Splicer said "Thanks for breaking my fall." I didn't use the accent because I'd have to charge you all extra then.
5255880 thats a spacestation...
(again, sorrynotsorry)
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Given that Rapture is supposed to have a literal army of Big Daddies and regular human staff running around and maintaining the place, I wouldn't give the place a decade before it suffers a cascade failure. The adventures of Jack and Delta wouldn't help matters either, especially with an airplane ramming into bits and pieces of the city and the literal mountains of destruction that was done by all sides. Hell, there is at least one time where fucking torpedoes got thrown around! We're probably talking something akin to modernized Mk14s or something...
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Know its an old nessage but didnt notice the sextag. And the first thing. The first thing that popped into my head was this https://youtu.be/h0-WO6xRbAo (obvious what part it is)