Will Dawn wind up sleeping with the pony he has had a crush on, the fillyfooler, the musician, or the stunt pony? If only his love life was as simple as his existential crisis.
A Winningverse parody? It'd be interesting to see how you get Dawn with Applejack or Rarity, but Rarity would be harder than Applejack, considering Dawn's loudmouth behaviour. Pinkie's random, so that's slightly easier. And he's already "gotten" with Twilight (and Luna), and Dash is off the table.
As for other ponies? He's already got Lyra, Bonbon could be a quick one, like "sharing the love between friends" or something like that.
You could also play the Wonderbolts angle with Spitfire, say "something something Soarin's a jerk" or something like that.
....yes that idea sounds awesome hmmm do you think later down the line Flutters will tell Dash about this/poison joke's effect and those two will conspire to "prank" Dawn?
4375474 I always thought that Pinkie would be the kinky one. I mean we all know she likes her deserts, and she has a abundance oh chocolate sauce and wipped cream......
4375718 They're all canon. That's the only hard part, I want to do so many "what-if" and non-canon things with Dawn. For the sake of the story and the implied "romances", I'm trying to stick to things that plausibly happened to him.
4376187 Okay... and griffons... and dragons... and diamond dogs...
4376108 4375498 4375474 4376074 It would be fun for two reasons: 1.) Seeing him convince everypony into bed with him and 2.) getting to do things I can't in the story (like Discord turning Dawn into a sex toy and banging her, or a three-way with Big Mac and Braeburn or Pinkie and Maud.)
I think I would enjoy a few non cannon chapters. Like what if Dawn came back as a colt and was wrestling with physical issues verses his mental age, where a possible romance with the CMC as he tries to convince himself that he's not a pedophile. Also a few crossovers would be awesome, like Dawn in Fusion Foal the thirds Dickmareverse or Mad Max the Black's YHaYverse. Please do this.
A story where Dawn starts a bucket list and tries to bang every pony in Ponyville would eventually get boring. Unless you made it a What if? Every chapter showing events happening in a alternate way like "What if if Dawn had woke up as Rainbow Dash twin instead of a colt body? What if Luna had created Dawn new body as a mare? What if AJ didn't get to Big Mac in time when Dawn was in heat?
I haven't read it yet, but considering the last chapter's ending (the main story) and the title of this one I already know what the great kaidan-sama has given us!!!! a dawnXfluttershy chapter!!!! oh good heavens thank you!!!!
I never read the Winningverse, so I have opinion. However nobody ever talks about pony AIDS. All that promiscuity, with every Earth pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, and possibly, Alicorn, would make for one humongous STD outbreak in Equestria. Until everypony comes down with some form or another of herpes, chlamydia, or gonorrhea, let Dawn have his fun.
While that does sound like a good fic idea.... i wouldn't want it getting in the way of Dash of Humanity 2. Dash of humanity is, like, my favorite story right now. So if working on this new fic will make this one update slower . . . well, I wouldn't really like it.
RD is gonna kill him if she finds out. or be extremely jealous. and idk how Lyra is gonna take it
have Luna visit him in his dreams to finish what she started last time. as repayment, Luna merges his dreams with other ponies dreams where they can do whatever and however they want with no restrictions. no chance of foals, no gender restrictions. as kinky as they want. nopony else would know unless they mention it to a friend. no problems
I'll be honest, today I finished reading a story about a Marine who got himself stuck in Equestria. So when Fluttershy told Dawn thanks for his support through this, I was half-expecting the door to be broken down and Fluttershy shot through the chest with a shotgun.
Sometimes I feel constrained by the main story, and want to write more and/or weirder stuff. I am considering a Winningverse parody wherein Dawn starts a bucket list and tries to bang every pony in Ponyville. Thoughts?
My thoughts, yeeeeeeessssss
Nice job on this, this was... pretty tame compared to some of them 8'D I approve... so sad but good.
I like to think that there are no STD in Equestria, or parasites for that matter. My reasoning being (in my head cannon) that there are sentient magical forces such as the one that gives ponies there cutie marks that maybe influence evaluation and just would not allow any thing so nasty as STD's to come to be.
Gender Identity Crisis Incoming!
Prepare Count Measures!
Emergency, Emergency! Orgasm in Progress!
Counter Measure Deployment Mechanism Damaged!
Gender Identity Crisis Imminent!
Danger Will Robinson! Danger!
Goddamn teaser!
Now I want to see much more, and longer, FemDawn! and Fluttershy sexy times. Oh god, do I ever.
A Winningverse parody? It'd be interesting to see how you get Dawn with Applejack or Rarity, but Rarity would be harder than Applejack, considering Dawn's loudmouth behaviour. Pinkie's random, so that's slightly easier. And he's already "gotten" with Twilight (and Luna), and Dash is off the table.
As for other ponies? He's already got Lyra, Bonbon could be a quick one, like "sharing the love between friends" or something like that.
You could also play the Wonderbolts angle with Spitfire, say "something something Soarin's a jerk" or something like that.
Anything else is totally up for grabs.
Bang them all!
....yes that idea sounds awesome
hmmm do you think later down the line Flutters will tell Dash about this/poison joke's effect and those two will conspire to "prank" Dawn?
4375474 I always thought that Pinkie would be the kinky one. I mean we all know she likes her deserts, and she has a abundance oh chocolate sauce and wipped cream......
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I uh.... actually....
That could be awesome. Fluttershy and Dash don't get mad, they get even.... turning Dawn into a mare so they can test out some very large strap-ons...
4375662 .-.
I would read the shit out of a winningverse PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ WRITE IT
Sup,
Canon?
Yes
or
No
4375662 Score!
Pretty certain that Cloud Kicker would want in on that action.
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Then again, knowing her she probably already has most of her Ponyville bang bucket list complete.
Only the ponies?
WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH KAIDAN?
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They're all canon. That's the only hard part, I want to do so many "what-if" and non-canon things with Dawn. For the sake of the story and the implied "romances", I'm trying to stick to things that plausibly happened to him.
4376187
Okay... and griffons... and dragons... and diamond dogs...
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4375498
4375474
4376074
It would be fun for two reasons: 1.) Seeing him convince everypony into bed with him and 2.) getting to do things I can't in the story (like Discord turning Dawn into a sex toy and banging her, or a three-way with Big Mac and Braeburn or Pinkie and Maud.)
Damn... that's the shallowest thing I've ever read... Fluttershy's a bitch.
I think I would enjoy a few non cannon chapters. Like what if Dawn came back as a colt and was wrestling with physical issues verses his mental age, where a possible romance with the CMC as he tries to convince himself that he's not a pedophile. Also a few crossovers would be awesome, like Dawn in Fusion Foal the thirds Dickmareverse or Mad Max the Black's YHaYverse. Please do this.
4376451 still suspiciously tame for Kaidan...
A story where Dawn starts a bucket list and tries to bang every pony in Ponyville would eventually get boring. Unless you made it a What if? Every chapter showing events happening in a alternate way like "What if if Dawn had woke up as Rainbow Dash twin instead of a colt body? What if Luna had created Dawn new body as a mare? What if AJ didn't get to Big Mac in time when Dawn was in heat?
And so on...
Yep... and this is why Dash needs a big ass slap over in the main story.
Every pony of legal age in Ponyville, I take it?
I haven't read it yet, but considering the last chapter's ending (the main story) and the title of this one I already know what the great kaidan-sama has given us!!!! a dawnXfluttershy chapter!!!! oh good heavens thank you!!!!
4377600 HOT DANG IT IS!!!! I just read the first few lines of the main story and i say i am very pleased!!! commence reading!!!
*shuts the windows and doors and leaves a sign board outside the room - do not disturb*
I never read the Winningverse, so I have opinion. However nobody ever talks about pony AIDS. All that promiscuity, with every Earth pony, Pegasus, Unicorn, and possibly, Alicorn, would make for one humongous STD outbreak in Equestria. Until everypony comes down with some form or another of herpes, chlamydia, or gonorrhea, let Dawn have his fun.
KBO.
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Age is relative.
Or was it subjective?
THANKS YOUS KAIDAN!
Oh, and count this as another vote for the self-insert "bang all the ponies" fic. As long as there's some femDawn
Do the story
Daww,
We'll Bang later.
While that does sound like a good fic idea.... i wouldn't want it getting in the way of Dash of Humanity 2.
Dash of humanity is, like, my favorite story right now. So if working on this new fic will make this one update slower . . . well, I wouldn't really like it.
Solution: Maybe do a collab with someone on it?
if u enjoy writing it, do wat u love
4376451 first I loved this chapter and all the other ideas.I can't wait to see what what happens next to them all.this was a cute and sexy chapter.
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Yeah I basically want to do some what if's... and need a format that supports it.
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Just call it "Dash of Humanity: Alternate sidestories" and post it here.
For example: "Dash of Humanity: Alternate sidestory 1: Don wakes up in a clone of Dash body."
Will that include big mac causethatwould be intresting
RD is gonna kill him if she finds out. or be extremely jealous. and idk how Lyra is gonna take it
have Luna visit him in his dreams to finish what she started last time. as repayment, Luna merges his dreams with other ponies dreams where they can do whatever and however they want with no restrictions. no chance of foals, no gender restrictions. as kinky as they want. nopony else would know unless they mention it to a friend. no problems
hmmm a bucket list to bang as many ponies as possible sounds like a certain flash I've played before....
4383581 omg yesh
Awww, what you said to that one guy had me really hyped...I want some dawn x manticore action
Like in banned from equestria? Hell yeah!
yes
I'll be honest, today I finished reading a story about a Marine who got himself stuck in Equestria. So when Fluttershy told Dawn thanks for his support through this, I was half-expecting the door to be broken down and Fluttershy shot through the chest with a shotgun.
No wonder rainbow dash was so pissed off at dawn she thought he took advantage of fluttershy if she only knew the truth poor bastard.
He is not a bad guy he just has all those women controlling his ass like a toy.
Hell I am amazed he even lasted this long were it me I would not have been able to resist any of them lol.
Oh and sure why not but how about one where they dominant dawn ?
Good side stories. I can totally see Twilight doing that.
4379185 NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! it's CK hide your virgins
My thoughts, yeeeeeeessssss
Nice job on this, this was... pretty tame compared to some of them 8'D
I approve... so sad but good.
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I like to think that there are no STD in Equestria, or parasites for that matter. My reasoning being (in my head cannon) that there are sentient magical forces such as the one that gives ponies there cutie marks that maybe influence evaluation and just would not allow any thing so nasty as STD's to come to be.
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/SentientCosmicForce
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BackgroundMagicField
Dawn trying to bang everypony? DO IT!!!!!!!!!!
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... not to mention, PIV and AIDS would be devastating to ponies.