Will Dawn wind up sleeping with the pony he has had a crush on, the fillyfooler, the musician, or the stunt pony? If only his love life was as simple as his existential crisis.
But in all seriousness, is there no possibility of a follow up chapter for this where Dash is wrapped up instead of Dawn?
Also, I can't but shake the feeling that Lyra and Dash wasted an opportunity. I mean Dawns gel-covered member was right there, essentially a dildo. Would loved seeing his reaction to them figuring that out.
Either way, fantastic work on both the clop and normal bits for this story. Easily one of my.top favorites on this site.
5250456 Hmm true, there's just too many good options out there! On the bright side, I won't run out of ideas anytime soon and your idea to have Dash wrapped up is noted. Maybe I'll part two this chapter later.
If you look up KinkyRainbowDash's tumblr, or search artist:krd on derpibooru, you'll find plenty of Dash. If you want encased Dash... well artist:dombrus has a lot of fully encased ponies similiar to this (actually inspired this as well) that you can look at. Sadly, he doesn't seem to have done Dash yet.
5250497 Hell if you don't get around to it just shoot me a message, I might just write it myself. That being said I haven't updated my own story in a while...
And I'll have to file away that information for later, much appreciated.
“Now, Dawn, I’ve got you too sealed head to hoof except for the sexy bits. Seeing as Dash has her mouth full, I think it’s only fair you keep yours full too.”
That should be "two"
Our guest must not have orgasmed while watching me and Dash go at it, because Lyra didn’t even make it ten seconds from that pointnt.
Hmm slightly perplexed by the geometry of things... How can he bump his nose in her clitoris if they are basically sixtynineing? It should be near his chin...
This was kinky as fuck.
*Slow grin* Heh heh heh.
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Aww, thanks! Now you know how to kidnap me irl. Just bring lots of latex.
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Don't tempt me.
But in all seriousness, is there no possibility of a follow up chapter for this where Dash is wrapped up instead of Dawn?
Also, I can't but shake the feeling that Lyra and Dash wasted an opportunity. I mean Dawns gel-covered member was right there, essentially a dildo. Would loved seeing his reaction to them figuring that out.
Either way, fantastic work on both the clop and normal bits for this story. Easily one of my.top favorites on this site.
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Hmm true, there's just too many good options out there! On the bright side, I won't run out of ideas anytime soon and your idea to have Dash wrapped up is noted. Maybe I'll part two this chapter later.
If you look up KinkyRainbowDash's tumblr, or search artist:krd on derpibooru, you'll find plenty of Dash. If you want encased Dash... well artist:dombrus has a lot of fully encased ponies similiar to this (actually inspired this as well) that you can look at. Sadly, he doesn't seem to have done Dash yet.
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Hell if you don't get around to it just shoot me a message, I might just write it myself. That being said I haven't updated my own story in a while...
And I'll have to file away that information for later, much appreciated.
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I always seem to get sentimental and throw in extra pop-culture in finales... but who can resist?
Hot!
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Yet all I can think about the last two hours is making it hotter... gah! I'll be in my bunk.
5251014 I don't know if I speak for everyone on this issue but, I'd be more then okay with that!
Oooh, all night orgasm denial.
...can Lyra visit me next?
5250497 I know that artist's stuff. I like it!
ok I will admit it I will trade places with dawn and die a so vary happy stallion.
I found some minor things you may want to edit.
That should be "two"
And that should be "point".
I zeroes in on Lyra first.
passing between my member and me right hind leg.
If you want Dawn to talk like a pirate I won't judge.
"Drawer," maybe?
This third person word in the middle of a first person sentence makes Dawn sound like a pirate.
How?
More pirate talk.
Damn. Your words give me the best boners. You really earned this Dash ahegao. Here, have another one. I have something I have to go do.
KBO.
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Arrrr! Thanks!
That was awesome, though Dawn hasn't had much luck when he's been with Dash. Next time he should probably get a chance to win a prize
i loved this chapter it was so funny,sexy and sweet i cant wait to see what t happens next between them all and what happens next too them all.
Ahhh dang it, so much denial! XD
hehehe, painful... so painful.
Nice work mate! :D
Hmm slightly perplexed by the geometry of things... How can he bump his nose in her clitoris if they are basically sixtynineing?
It should be near his chin...
Jesus this is kinky as fuuuck!