Will Dawn wind up sleeping with the pony he has had a crush on, the fillyfooler, the musician, or the stunt pony? If only his love life was as simple as his existential crisis.
i get the impression that that dream might have been somehow the real twilight's doing. it would be cool if he had a real life encounter with twilight though.
“I guess not, this isn’t the craziest pony I’ve met in a dream. So, how can I help you?”
Since he is talking to Twilight, should this not be "you're not?"
Caught in a landslide, no escape from reality.
I think Twilight pulled an old trick from Nightmare on Elm Street. She was sleeping, he was sleeping, she called out his name- BAM! He is in her dream, and she is in control. Then she leaves and he is instantly in his own dream again. Even Luna cannot keep up with Twilight Krueger.
4230007 Hah, sounds like Lyra did the deed, then went to bed. Kinda like far too many guys. Twilight, however... She needs to learn the definition of blue balls. Bad Twiley!
4230152 I was referring to the fact that she up and left while Dawn was asleep. Although, I guess Twilight was worse. But, I expected this from Kaiden. That's just what his version of Twilight is like, a total tease.
4230276 I get the feeling she's more oblivious than anything, but that's typical Twilight. And it was never implicitly said Lyra left, it does seem it was implied, since neither Dash nor Dawn mentioned her. Mebbe she was busy washing her sheets? Leaving him toed up however... well he probably deserved it for encouraging the CMC.
4230276 Yeah, Twilight's a little too "scientific" for her own good. As for Lyra, she didn't leave Dawn. The Twilight dream happens on "any night" after he introduces the Dewey Decimal System. Dawn wakes up with Lyra the next morning in the main story. I just haven't decided whether or not a certain pony comes by to see why he's late for flight practice again.
4230904 Ah, ok. I assumed that since you used 7b for the Lyra scene and 7c for this one that the dream was about Twilight immediately after the scene with Lyra.
Also, that's a hard decision. Then again, I don't know your master plan for this so I couldn't say if it's just a distraction or something that could add to it.
I guess that was payback for Dawn soaking Twi in 5b?
Man I hate waking up at the worst possible time. every. single. time. then again id hate to be woken up and caught with morning wood by a girl im not in an actual relationship with but had feelings for
I hope theres a future Luna chapter. and I don't even care much for Luna
4232761 A bit out of context to ignore the two hundred thousand words of the main story and call eight thousand words of mostly romantic love after a date and a wet dream being a "man whore. "
Then again, I no longer expect intelligent discussion on this site so I can't say your ignorance surprises me.
Here he comes, there he goes, will you let me go...
WE WILL NOT HAAAALT, WE WILL NOT LET HIM GO, LET HIM GO!!! WE WILL NOT HAAAALT, WE WILL NOT LET HIM GO, LET HIM GO!!! WILL NOT LET HIM GO, LET HIM GO!!! WILL NOT LET HIM GO, MAGNIFIC-O-O-O-O... AH-AH-AH-AH-AH!!!
i get the impression that that dream might have been somehow the real twilight's doing. it would be cool if he had a real life encounter with twilight though.
Oh god, I know that feeling.
Stuck in a landslide
No escape from reality
Since he is talking to Twilight, should this not be "you're not?"
Caught in a landslide, no escape from reality.
I think Twilight pulled an old trick from Nightmare on Elm Street. She was sleeping, he was sleeping, she called out his name- BAM! He is in her dream, and she is in control. Then she leaves and he is instantly in his own dream again. Even Luna cannot keep up with Twilight Krueger.
You have earned a Twilight ahegao.
KBO.
I laughed throughout the whole chapter!
Lol, She just had to get them numbers anyway she could.
CumCome on Twilight, you don't leave a stallion hanging like that.Well that sucks. I can definitely see Twilight doing something like that though.
Caught in a landslide, no escape from reality....am I the only one who got the reference at the end?
(nvm Dralen got it :3)
I loved it all that was awesome.as payback he should buck her brain's out so hard she can't wait for two weeks.I can't wait to see what happens next.
*Out of key, with many voice cracks* Caught in a landslide. No escape from reality.
I would laugh if Luna interrupted the next one Twilight infiltrates and scolds her WHILE taking Dawn for herself.
Gah... Story of my life.
Can't remember ever finishing a single damn sex dream because I always get thwarted or woken up at the good part myself.
4227230 Haha. I can't even remember having a sex dream at all, I guess I'm lucky
4227324 Or unlucky
I guess it depends on the dream!
(Or who you wake up next to?)
4227666 Not anymore I guess I just have no sex drive
So Lyra left him high and dry? Wow... bad Lyra! Bad!
4230007 Hah, sounds like Lyra did the deed, then went to bed. Kinda like far too many guys.
Twilight, however... She needs to learn the definition of blue balls. Bad Twiley!
4228951 thats kinda sad, considering my 80+ year old grandpa is till chasing tail.
4230163 Maybe so, but sex gets boring Once you get over the initial fun of fucking someone new, it just kinda dies..
And props to your grandpa still going strong
4230152 I was referring to the fact that she up and left while Dawn was asleep. Although, I guess Twilight was worse. But, I expected this from Kaiden. That's just what his version of Twilight is like, a total tease.
4230276 I get the feeling she's more oblivious than anything, but that's typical Twilight.
And it was never implicitly said Lyra left, it does seem it was implied, since neither Dash nor Dawn mentioned her. Mebbe she was busy washing her sheets? Leaving him toed up however... well he probably deserved it for encouraging the CMC.
4230276
Yeah, Twilight's a little too "scientific" for her own good. As for Lyra, she didn't leave Dawn. The Twilight dream happens on "any night" after he introduces the Dewey Decimal System. Dawn wakes up with Lyra the next morning in the main story. I just haven't decided whether or not a certain pony comes by to see why he's late for flight practice again.
4230252 Thats what fetishes are for... Gotta keep things interesting!
4230904 Ah, ok. I assumed that since you used 7b for the Lyra scene and 7c for this one that the dream was about Twilight immediately after the scene with Lyra.
Also, that's a hard decision. Then again, I don't know your master plan for this so I couldn't say if it's just a distraction or something that could add to it.
I guess that was payback for Dawn soaking Twi in 5b?
Man I hate waking up at the worst possible time. every. single. time. then again id hate to be woken up and caught with morning wood by a girl im not in an actual relationship with but had feelings for
I hope theres a future Luna chapter. and I don't even care much for Luna
Read her a Physics textbook and bet she REALLY goes wild.
I WAS RIGHT!
Too many of this type of fic. It's like the main character's saying, "Hi guys, I'm a man-whore, I'm available for sex, my body is ready."
4232761
A bit out of context to ignore the two hundred thousand words of the main story and call eight thousand words of mostly romantic love after a date and a wet dream being a "man whore. "
Then again, I no longer expect intelligent discussion on this site so I can't say your ignorance surprises me.
Even Luna is now comming into his dreams? gonna be interessting
4232930 I don't believe he's a man whore. He maybe needs a little less of a sexy body or he's going to break his pelvis
4226160
Open your eeeyyyyyyysss, look up to the skies aaannnd seeeee...
4236268 I'm just a pooooor booooooy. I need no sympathy.
4237187
Because I'm easy come, easy go, little high, little low.
4237443
Every way the wind blows, nothing really maaaters to meeeeee...
To meeeeee...
4237523
Mamaaaaaaaa, just killed a maaaaaan.
Put a gun against his head, pulled my trigger, now he's dead.
4238662
Mama, life has juuust beguuuuunnn...
I didn't leave to see it alll just fade awayyyyyyy.....
MOMMA...
OOOHHHHOOO...
wind blows...
4239470
Guitar Solo!
I see a little silhouetteo of a man.
Scaramouch! Scaramouch! Will you do the Fandango?
4239898
THUNDERBOLTS OF LIGHTNING,
VERY VERY FRIGHTENING,
ME!
GALILEO
GALILEO
GALILEO
GALILEO
GALILEO
MAGNIFICO-O-O-O-O
I wonder how many people are watching us sing bohemian rhapsody in the comments...
since everyone else already continued the song I'll just do a little dance...
4241986
That's one of my favorite songs.
It's like... Dammit Rainbow!
4243900 then join in!
Look down below, and reply to my most recent chain. Be awesome if we got through the whole song.
4241978
I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me.
HE'S JUST A POOR BOY FROM A POOR FAMILY, SPARE HIM HIS LIFE FROM THIS MONSTROSITY.
4243263
Everyone else? There's two of us! Join in if you want.
4247466
Du-na-nu-na-nu-na-nu-na...
Here he comes, there he goes, will you let me go...
WE WILL NOT HAAAALT,
WE WILL NOT LET HIM GO,
LET HIM GO!!!
WE WILL NOT HAAAALT,
WE WILL NOT LET HIM GO,
LET HIM GO!!!
WILL NOT LET HIM GO,
LET HIM GO!!!
WILL NOT LET HIM GO,
MAGNIFIC-O-O-O-O...
AH-AH-AH-AH-AH!!!
4251956
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!
Oh mama mia mama mia.
MAMA MIA LET ME GO!
BEEE-ELZEBUB HAS A DEVIL PUT ASIDE FOR ME!
FOR ME!
FOR MEEEEEEEEE!
4251956
Sorry about the late reply. I've been away from the internet.
This is Australia...