Many years ago, the titans first arrived. Pony kind was nearly wiped out. But since the colossal titan showed up, will we have a chance?
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So happy to see an Attack on Titan Crossover! Hope it turns out good, or even OK.
Hopefully this will spur other authors to make more aot crossovers.
Jesus Christ in the Bat mobile... this was a crazy short and fast chapter! Try extending how long it is and adding more detail, something to slow it down.
CAPS LOCK IS UNNECESSARY WHEN TRYING TO MAKE A CHARACTER YELL! USE YOUR WORDS TO DESCRIBE HIS VOICE AND MAKE SURE WE KNOW HE IS YELLING CAUSE THIS JUST LOOKS SLOPPY!
The chapters are woefully short and lack any sort of description and don't give us any amount of time to get to know the characters or even begin to care about their actions. Also, if you're looking for someone to "take it over" why are you even bothering to post it in the first place? I'm sure there are plenty of AoT fans that you could PM and get them to post it.
Not too bad, but it could be longer. Take your time and don't do it all in one go, and a little bit of detail won't hurt either.
3826901 That was the initial idea
3827390 I intend to try and add more detail. After all, this is my first story (it was rushed because I wanted to get it out there. It will only get longer)
3826929 I have changed my mind. I'm going to continue it myself. And I will add more description and length
Please just continue to read it, the first two chapters are shit, but I can promise improvement, just look at the third chapter
Poor thing. I liked and I read a little of the first chapter. It needs work, but I know you already know that. You seem to be improving so you should prove that in your next chapter. Good luck!