In Equestria lies a secret society of super elite who find sport in kidnapping, imprisoning and taming unsuspecting ponies into submissive sex slaves.
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Another good chapter mistress ^_^
FINALLY someone is playing smart.
I get the feeling it's going to be hard to break vinyl.
Title suggestions, because I have nothing better to do:
G.T.
Griffins
The Music Starts
Here's hoping that Vinyl will be just as hard if not harder willed than Octavia. The badassness must begins here!! Fight the powers that be!!!!
SAVE OCTAVIA!!!! (Previously the Save Coco campaign but....that didn't work out to well )
Fuuuuuuuuuck.
I wanna read this arc REALLY BADLY but I don't cuz it's Vinyl
First off: great chapter, good exposition, and well written characters.
Now, how in the holy mother of Luna can she say 'what can go wrong in Canterlot it's swarming with guards?' When it's clearly stated she was at the wedding with one of her best friends Pinkie and there was an image in A Canterlot Wedding P.2 that the guards were doing absolute bullcrap while changelings attacked.
On a lighter note. Lady Satine? Are you a fan of Mandaloreian government officials and Dn'D?
The assistant better be careful, or Gilda will know something's up, and the gryphon girl will become Vinyl's replacement.
I thought G.T. Stood for Golden Touch
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You know that is a really good point that I never even thought of. Then again it might be a testament to the mindset of the ponies. "Changelings attacked Canterlot, but that was like a week ago so nothing to worry about. Paraspites devoured Ponyville, well time to rebuild. Vines covered all of Equestria and the princesses went missing, but as long as everything is put back where it belongs I guess it's not really a problem." Ponies seem pretty compliant or oblivious to the things that happen right in front of them. One would think by the time Tirek showed up some of them would be looking for a safer place to live.
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Well that was kinda of intentional. Just a little bit of misdirection. Don't feel bad about it.
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Well I do want to mention that this arc isn't going to be very long, either 3 or 4 chapters, so we won't get too many parts where vinyl gets to kick ass. Sorry, but after the Octavia arc I am ready to get down to Rarity and progress a bit in the actual plot. Vinyl had to be addressed first though.
4597714 oh well its still potential rp fodder so...and I have been awaiting Rarity's arc so get cracking Tourmaline!!
4597714 Never underestimate the power of stupid people in large groups. You still haven't answered my question: are you a fan of Mandalorian government officials?
4597714 Haha, okay :3
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I had to look up what that was and I have to say I didn't know such a race existed in Star Wars. The character of Lady Satine belongs to one of my readers, but as I tried to credit him for the use of another character already an he asked me to remove it I decided not to put his name in the notes this time unless he decides to tell me to put it up.
4599405 Jango Fett's armor is Mandalorian. Mandalorian armor is also one of the few things a light saber cannot cut.
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Seemed to cut through Jango just fine :P. Tell me that there was no armor on his neck and I will ask you why leave a vulnerable spot open against people know for extreme accuracy with there weapon of choice. Anyways we are trailing off here.
4599850 If there was too much armor there it would be restrictive. Plus George Lucas is an ass in the newer movies. Plus have you seen the accuracy of most people in the Star Wars universe? Horrible, it is hmm?
Few comments to be made, since I have not been around to comment.
Previous chapter: LOVED IT. By far the best part goes to when Octavia is trying to quote Schorls OWN RULES back at her, like as if it was gonna protect her. Ever seen the scene in the Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe where she quotes the old magic rules to Aslan? Kinda felt like that scene to me, all I needed was Schorl to say something like..."Lol I made those rules....I can break em...Bitch". And to see Sartak get his way with her, was rewarding, the guy works hard day in and day out and was denied fucking a stupid little bitch that would not listen to reason and accept her place for so long, to finally be rewarded the chance to show her where her place was...HELL YES. Considering hes wanted it since day 1...I can only imagine how rewarding that release was.
Newest Chapter: I don't want a spoiler...but like...Can this ASS be trusted? Come on, ASS, so what is GT the ASS hunter? This story is picking up in a way that I am really liking, all the little "well we cant find him" "well we are on to this underground ring" "well im a member of ASS". While I do enjoy most stories to have a happy enough ending, I can't tell if that is your end game or not. And sure, a world where inferiors bow to their masters is appealing to me, I'm also quite an honorable man and would want to see good prevail. Im torn, im torn, congrats, this fic has me questioning even my motives in life.
Future Chapters: Read enough Rarijack to know Applejack will bow to a superior unicorn...or atleast thats what the shippers tell me, Mistress Rarity is practically cannon to me, I think she would be down for being a member like in an instant. So looking forward to her arc, who will be her first slave? Please let it be a certain farmer I have a love for...PLEASE I BEG YOU.
And lastly my question: Can I put myself on the OC cameo list?
Keep up the great work and Ill keep following and thumbsing up whenever I can.
When do you think you could add more oc characters? Beacuse I really am getting into this fabulous story, and it would highly heighten my interest in it if I could see "myself" in this story. I will give my oc information when/if you consider my request.
I hope I did not sound demanding . Please respond soon, your lovely lady tourmaline.
~Wingshy Pure
With the closing of this chapter my attention have been set alight. You caught my interest with the clop, though I am not a fan of the activities that go on in these types of stories, I cant help but stick around. Hypocritical I know, but what can you expect from a dude?
So now Vinyl is a target as well as the Mane Six? Interesting, this Society is not as dumb as other antagonists I know, which make them a very lethal threat. Something I like. So there is an opposing organization of some kind that is aware of the Society's actions? Something I like more.
How I feel about the targets:
Rarity- Membership material? Yeah right! She is a snobbish poser, cum slut I say.
Applejack- She has a big family, doubt any of them will take kindly to this.
Fluttershy- that is gonna be hot!
Rainbow Dash-
I guessshe has it coming.Pinkie- definitely has it coming.
Twilight & Vinyl- .NOPE not looking forward to those arcs.
A bunch of good comments chapter. I am so happy when I get long, well thought out comments.
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I am glad you enjoyed the previous chapter. I would say that Sartek did enjoy himself. He is a minotaur that truly loves his work and the perks that come with it. As for Rarity.... well there have been those who have seen Rarity as being the kind of pony who would never join the Society, as one who would be enslaved instead of allowed to join and as a member. While I am not going to allow fan opinions to effect the plot I have thought out for her I think it is amazing how each person seems to be very attracted to their ideal version of Rarity. In the end some people might be disappointing, but hopefully they will like what I have come up with anyways.
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II would like to state that I am still taking submissions for cameo OC ponies, but I also want people to know that while the story is going to be very long and your OC might not appear for some time and there is a chance I might never find a place for them. If they do though I think that the person who submitted them will be pleasantly surprised.
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I am very interested in your opinions about which of the mane six "deserve" to be put in this situation. Certainly some of them might be more willing to obey or be more resistant to the Society, but to say that any of them are deserving... All I can really say is perhaps your opinions might be shown to be true in later chapters of the story, but then again maybe not.
As for you enjoying the sexual bits of this story despite them not being your normal kinks I have to say that I understand this completely. There are plenty of times that I have seen something that I normally wouldn't enjoy, but was intrigued or legitimately pleased by it regardless. I guess all I can say is that you never really know what you enjoy until you see it.
Something tells me you're just dangling hope in our faces so we feel true despair when G.T. betrays her and nabs her ass.
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I think the real G.T. was Golden Touch. But this G.T. Is working for the Society.