In Equestria lies a secret society of super elite who find sport in kidnapping, imprisoning and taming unsuspecting ponies into submissive sex slaves.
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Isaac: You have plans to control the elements of harmony, you are either really brave, or really stupid.
Lady Satine:Show respect to Mis-
Isaac: I suggest you keep your beak shut...what I was about to say is that I'd love to help in the breaking...I'd prefer to Break in Miss Sparkle...*points to forhead* the darkness in me is demanding her at my feet begging for mercy...as for her dragon...well I suppose we could always use a good man servant...
Lady Satine: *shocked look on her face*
Isaac: What you think I'm goody goody all the time, I may have stopped slavery in the past but I'm embracing the darker ideals...course I'm in deeper then you will ever...you could almost say...*eyes go red* I'm the reborn monster within me....
Bren:...umm moving along from that, Great Chapter Mistress
Great chapter, but wouldn't they have also noticed Golden Touch and maybe lessened the punishment accordingly if she didn't attack Startek? I understand she would've still be punished heavily but maybe slightly less since she wasn't alone. That or Miss Tourmaline considers the two isolated cases and they shall be punished in separate scales.
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I would think that for something like this they would both be punished the same regardless how many were caught. I guess it will be explained a bit more in the next chapter but Schorl has a very strict way of dealing out punishments when she is the one who has to issue them out.
4522739 Hmm, interesting. In light of this news Miss Tourmaline is my new favourite "antagonist". The main reasons why is because she's not evil she just runs a very popular service for profit and is very smart with how she runs things. Plus I have respect for whoever deals out punishments fairly even to those close to them. Congratulations, it's hard to get a character at the top of my favourites list.
Well.....Octy had a good run...but then Schorl had to fxxk it up!!! OCTAVIA YOU ARE AN INSPIRATION....and CELLISTS STICK TOGETHER!!! GETALLTEHSLAVESOUT......BURN IT DOWN!!!! LET IT ALL BURN WITHOUT KILLING THAT MANY MEMBERS!!!!
BURN IT WITH THE LEMONS!!!
OK silliness is over...it was a great chapter and just....fuck why Flitter.
And not sure if you just took my musical term into suggestion or because you knew I rooted for Octavia to escape you did it to spite me but still
I applaud you for a great chapter dear author now....I'm going to run screaming in that direction
Bye!
LOVES IT
4516952 Welp, to each their own!
I wanted Octavia to escape Sadly it could not be, but deep down I knew this was how it would go. Regardless, I this story!
4522890 in what possible way is she not evil? Her picture is in the dictionary next to the word evil.
Is it just me, or does this story have a lot less dislikes then when it first started.?
4525324 Okay, bad wording, forgive me. She's not evil, but malicious. She's still not evil though by my definition. Which is trying to kill millions Joker style. Malice to me is making profit off of pain to a smaller group of people (maybe one, two hundred). Thus this is an apt description for Miss Tourmaline because she makes a real cozy profit off of slaves including those trustees that are willing to serve.
4523382 Nice Portal2 reference. BURN THEM WITH COMBUSTIBLE LEMONS!!!!
I just noticed. Congratulations Miss Tourmaline for your story making it all the way to 100,000 words. Impressive, my story won't be there for a while. Good job.
4525373 a thank you!
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Yeah, the problem with making a story like this is that some people will give it a thumbs down without even reading it based solely on the fact that it involves rape of beloved characters. Doesn't matter if it is well written or not, they just don't like the subject matter. I don't want to go making assumptions, but I wouldn't be surprised if half or more of my thumbs downs were acquired this way based on the fact that several people that have admitted they don't like rape stories have commented to say that this story is still well written.
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This is what happens when you write 5000+ words on a weekly basis for 5 months straight. It is tough but I manage it well. It is actually very daunting when I think about the amount of future story arcs, but I am going to do my best to see it through completely.
4525681 No matter what we are still humans. Thus there will be biased opinions which while I don't agree with are theirs to make. Just be thankful your good writing is giving you way more likes than dislikes.
I'm not big on most clop. That being said, I'm an individule who finds this story really well written and hitting all the parts that I'd want from an erotic story (plot is sexy people, and so are kinks). I'll be watching this
As for the elements, this seems like the undoing of the society. While I can see Rarity joining I could also see her alerting the princesses and serving as a spy (after all how glamourous would it be to play they hero? and I don't think she'd take to submitting).
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That might be true. In a sense any involvement with the mane six would be a threat to the Society and people (even fans) have brought this up in the past. But then again the Society does have influence over Equestria (Being that they are composed of mostly the rich and socially elite) and might have a few tricks up their sleeves. I guess what I can say without spoilers is that you should wait and see how it turns out when the Rarity arc comes along and hopefully what happens will agree with you.
OMG. Cliffhanger!!
I liked this alot actually! Glad I had a pleasant surprise to come back to, I can't wait to see what happens to Octavia and Golden
So when was the "recital" Coco saw?
I'd intended to take this story in blocks of three, but Ch19 left off on something of a cliffhanger. Of course so did Ch20, but a fifth chapter strait in a row would just be too much for one sitting.
Chapter 17:
Ah, good old crossover time with Coco's arc. Also interesting to see Fleetfoot, seemingly before she was broken. I must say, Octavia really does show off some wonderful selflessness here, not just compassion for Coco, but determination to confront Suri despite knowing how poorly that's likely to turn out. She really is quite lucky that Schorl decided to show up in person to deal with this outburst. Regardless, Suri's speechlessness was also a delight, and no doubt made only all the more embarrassing by the fact that Octavia did it while both naked and sopping wet. Something of a rather telling reversal of their supposed master/slave status.
Chapter 18:
Hmm... having already read the story after this one, I must wonder if Mistress Tormaline is sitting somewhere in the shadows magically coaxing Octavia on during this scene. Doubly so with how she and Fleetfoot manage to cum simultaneously. I also wonder about Photo Finish, and if despite her statements to the contrary of owing Octavia anything, she intentionally left that menu on the table to answer some of those questions. Oh, and something "special" planned for Fleetfoot, given what we already know becomes of her from the previous arc, Octavia probably got that screw back just in the knick of time (or maybe not).
Also, Lightning Dust is a real dick for letting Octavia pleasure Fleetfoot, and then leaving before the favor could be returned. Although speaking of Lightning Dust, she's always been one the dominant that just never made sense to me. Why would the Society really care about recruiting a disgraced academy flunkout as a member. If anything I'd have thought her and Fleetfoot should have been the other way around.
Chapter 19:
Oh my, now things are getting rather interesting, with Octavia seemingly on the cusp of earning back enough privileges lead an almost normal like -- music, no more sexual degradation, even perhaps clothing, and all she'd have to do is give up on any pretense of escape and just become genuinely obedient. Not an easy temptation to resist, and that even now Octavia can hold onto desire for freedom is rather telling of her own personal integrity in spite of all of The Society's best efforts to break her spirit.
Of course this is also where I can't help but wonder if someone is only playing a deceptive game with Octavia, as this scene also affords her the simultaneous opportunity to finally speak with GoldenTouch, but in order to make it happen she ends up telling a lie that loses her the promised privilege of no more touching. I'm just not sure whose game it is. Schorl just openly admitted that she finds sexual degradation to be an effective tool in molding all slaves regardless of their intended use, and she's certainly manipulative enough to intentionally set up situation where Octavia would "willingly" ask for more. Conversely there is GoldenTouch himself, both a personal slave to Schorl and yet seemingly well known among the other slaves as being the guy to go to about escape. It's a rumor that seems rather too good to be true, not to mention SweetMint scolding him for leading other slaves astray can certainly be taken in more than one way. All together the whole thing just reeks of a cruel setup by one or both of these ponies.
Chapter 20:
And now we have Octavia's big escape. The coincidences seem to be piling on rather thick, a blackout at just the right time for Octavia to take advantage of it, Flitter's distraction leading Octavia down exactly the right hall to bump into GoldenTouch, and GoldenTouch just happening to be in need of something to use as a lock pick like Octavia's screw. The only thing I can say with any certainty is that is that if GoldenTouch really is just leading Octavia on to get her intentionally in trouble, that it's not a game Schorl is in on. While I wouldn't put it past the crystal mare to be that devious, I don't think she'd ever condone a facility wide blackout that inconveniences everyone just to break a single slave. GoldenTouch, however, is still a rather unknown quantity and even if he stands to be punished just as badly for engineering all of this, perhaps he's just that much of a sadomasochist to enjoy it.
Anyway, interesting to see Schorl's plans for each the ManeSix laid bare, which also makes everything in the subsequent Rarity arc all that more blatant of a trap from the outset. As for the res, it makes sense that she'd label both Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy as slave material, though the latter could surprise her given just how harsh Fluttershy's assertive side can be. Applejack and Twilight are definitely the tricky ones, desirable as members, but perhaps far to difficult to manipulate into it. The one that leaves me confused, however, is Rainbow Dash. The notes don't exactly specify, but seem to imply Schorl is already planning to go the slave route. I don't know, Dash pretty much already has an ego by which she places herself as better than most other ponies, tempered only by her strong sense of loyalty. Seems to me that with some appropriately clever manipulation she'd be a target very much like Rarity.
One last thing...
Not many things can truly give me pause, but the image this one line painted in my mind made me shudder more than anything else in this story. I can't exactly say that a gag which also pieces the tongue is actually the worst thing I've read about, but the words used to describe and possibly just the fact that it comes with no real warning, left me feeling rather sick to my stomach.
Now if only I could decide whether or not that's a "good" thing.
well that's disheartening I must say..
fuck the Oranges!
wow.. she really is messed up. Funny I was thinking I would have stripped Upper Crust nude and put my collar on her