In Equestria lies a secret society of super elite who find sport in kidnapping, imprisoning and taming unsuspecting ponies into submissive sex slaves.
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once again, another great chapter ^_^
Great chapter as always Lady Tourmaline. I cannot wait for the next.
A beautiful chapter as always. I think Octavia is now my favorite character of this story (sorry coco)
Also....TOURMALINE YOU ARE CRAZY
, SADISTIC, AND ALL AROUND F***ED UP.
.....and damn it i love every bit of it!! I will continue reading this..but shall run screaming because I know too much...
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Thank you. I would like to believe that the reason you like Octavia is becuase she is pretty much displayed as the heroin of the story, at least thus far. She goes out of her way to help ponies like Comet Tail and Coco, she is the one coming up with a plan to escape and she is actively confronting the members to do so. Sure she gets knocked down a peg by the members as well, but without ups and downs she wouldn't be a very interesting character.
It might also help that I put a lot of time and effort into her part since she has the longest character arc, at least when it come to the other two characters thus far. I really need to start slimming down the amount of chapters to each arc after this one though.If I don't then this story is going to take over a year to complete (I have many, many more arcs to explore after Octavia.)
4456038 ...you hit the nail right on the head.
That was quite a nice read, thank you for the chapter
My sadistic side wants this to have fame comparable to fics like FO:E
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Thank you for the complement. Unfortunately I don't think any story that involves enslavement and rape will every reach such fame, even if the story is writing gold.
I hate to bring this up.. but we have covered all the necessities up to now, accept restroom facilities.
I'll admit it never once crossed my mind (something so simple and yet so vital) until I started criticizing Octavia for storing the screw in her mouth. She's taking a big risk knowing that there will be drunk or otherwise amorous patrons wanting to make out.
So I was going to say she should swallow it and let it run it's course (throwing that idea out as it could do serious damage to her intestines) then I thought induce vomiting when she finds a hiding place for it.
but all this begs the question, where the hell do the slaves go to the bathroom?