In Equestria lies a secret society of super elite who find sport in kidnapping, imprisoning and taming unsuspecting ponies into submissive sex slaves.
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it has to be something wrong with me just to laugh about what happends to her.
but i guess beign shameless have its perks somehow.
like reading this story for what happends and not only for the clop.
(i love this story way too much)
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I am glad you are enjoying it. I hope everyone likes the last act of this chapter. I hinted at it in earlier chapters and I think it is a delightful part of the story.
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i can already guess what it is.
the cliffhanger in chapter 8, dinner with soarin, aaaaaand fleetfuck in control.
like i said, i can only guess where this is heading.
Another great chapter mistress. A great mix of story and clop, perfectly blended with a little whipped cream and passion fruit shavings on top.
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I am glad you enjoy it. I was worried some people might get bored with the actual story aspects of my story.
4018034 I'm the kinda guy who likes a little story with my clop. And the stories of the slaves and how they react make it more interesting, you aren't writing passive dolls, you are writing people (well ponies), thats why I love your writing mistress, you just...rock. What more do I need to say
<< I'm not hard right now, what are you saying? That I get aroussed from such great writing that makes me wanna grab my own slave?
*pets the girl on his lap*
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I take it you enjoyed the most recent chapter. Good, I personally think that this one is one of my best so far.
Pretty good but im more of a person that prefers bondage
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Well I can't do bondage all the time. Got to keep the story interesting for all who read it. But perhaps you will enjoy the up coming chapters. If not then the Octavia arc will be for you. Fleetfoot though is given a bit more freedom since she is a tamed salve.
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oh please. If they didn't think of self harm they wouldn't be very good at their hobbies. It should almost go without saying that there is a rule that states a slave cannot hurt a member of the society or themselves (For fear the slave would commit suicide to free themselves). Also I kinda want to mention the vagueness of the first rule. It says not to talk about it's members. It doesn't state "unless you are not talking about them in the form of them being members". It is a catch all. Lightning Dust cannot be spoken about by fleetfoot., nor the club's location nor any other members.
And can you please just try to enjoy the story instead of looking for ever little problem? I'm not perfect and even you said it has gotten better so cut me some slack and stop sweating the small stuff cause at the end of the day all I have to say to loophole your loophole is say "yes, but would the character think of that"
I wonder... how would the society deal with captives who weren't planned for? Especially if said captives aren't overly attractive themselves?
For instance: Let's say they send out a team to catch Applejack, but somepony screws up, and they need to overpower Hayseed Turnip Truck as well. Now, they either have to kill him (messy), wipe his memory (if they can), or take him along. What would they do? Do they throw him in the kennels and treat him as a "communal" slave? Do they try to find a master with the right fetish to take him in?
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Memory wipes are not available to the society. If they were then they would have most of Equestria under their thumbs. I would have to believe if such a thing happened they would take him and tame him, finding him a mistress/master that would appreciate his humble appearance or perhaps just his abilities as a pony. You can never have enough servants. He might have to go through some training to make himself more presentable though.
great chapter
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thank you
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Thank you for your answer!
Hopefully there is a way to break the connection between the ponies and the damn crystal hearts that Turmaline is making from the slaves.
My first chapter for my fanfic of Equestria Trainers' Society is released!
4042860 Awww, why would you want that? Think of it, one little spell and you have you own personal pet for life. Ok, it is more difficult than that, but if there is a way to reverse it then at the moment only Schorl would know of it.
4050520 Until Twi Figures it out. It would be a good Idea for the regimen to lower its activity lest they get caught in the act, then it's just a matter of time before Twi figures out a way to counter the enslavement spell.
4050520 why would anyone not want to be a pet...at least your pet *smiles and plays with my collar a bit*
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... Quick question. What would happen to the slaves who have become victims of the crystal heart ritual if say... Oh I don't know... A very angry unicorn member of the society sneaks into Schorl's office and strangles her to death? Would the spell break or would they be trapped like that forever or what?
A what would happen scenario.
*One of the minotaur guards says something about how he finds a member annoying. Three seconds later the said member leads him into another room, there is a loud crack and a scream, the minotaur goes flying out of the room with one of his horns jammed in his eye and the unicorn begins to walk towards Schlor's office killing every minotaur he sees along the way.*
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As much as this is a troll comment I will gladly answer anyways.
As to the first part where if Schorl dies will her enchantment break, well we don't really know since there is only one way to experiment this theory and as of such Schorl is a very healthy mare. Then again I would have to say since the hearts are actual items forged from the submissive will of the pony it comes from I am going to have to say the hearts can survive Schorl's demise.
As for the minotuar issue I don't really see anypony going all "Lucy" on a minotaur. Minotaurs are physically powerful, much more so than any pony. A unicorn with significant magic power might be able to fight off a few, but I think even Twilight would fall after about 5 of them if she tried to go head on. Fighting a minotaur is more about superior strategy and outwitting them, not brute force.
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.... I was really just expecting you to delete the comment.
Nice to see that you can actually think of what would happen in what if scenarios.
I have another one and this is completely logical... Sorta.
What would happen if the slaves who still had their free will all banded together and started massacring the members of the society? I have to assume there are many who have yet to lose their free will so I assume there would be enough to over power at least half of the guards and kill a few of them.
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I have yet to delete any comment, either good or bad, even if it is a personal attack on my story.
The society takes measures to keep the slaves bound or imprisoned until tamed (and to a degree afterwards). It would be hard for them to get organized with the near constant sex, sleep deprivation and restrictions put on their wings/horns/arms/legs. The only place they have adequate time to talk is the showers as of now and effective weapons would be hard to find. Even if they could work all this together they have to contend with members who have no restrictions on them as well as the overpowering minotaurs. An internal uprising seems unlikely I am afraid.
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... I will find a flaw with the security! I also think that the unicorns horns even when unable to use magic make effective weapons. Like a shark has eyes so does a pony. Jab your horn in their eyes, blind them and they cant fight back.
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Perhaps you are right but a minotuar is taller then a pony and stabbing them with a horn would be like stabbing you with a toothpick. Unicorn to unicorn combat also has the advantage to the members as they can use their horns to control the situation completely. Pegasi to unicorn combat would be more fair for the slave, but I can see the pegasus able to use their limited indoor flight to avoid lethal damage. Earth ponies would be the best bet for stabbing, but they are physically strong for the most part too so they might be better fighters.
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A pony slave? Or are you talking about something else?
If your still looking for doms I have a male Pegasus sadist named Solar Flicker. Has black coat, black/white combed mane and a test tube with an explosion coming out of the top. He's an inventor so he can be Very creative. Hope this helps this great story bro.
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I am always looking for potential back ground ponies. I will send you a form to fill out.
Great thanks I already sent it to you, the form, hope this helps and really this is one of ... no, The Best clopfic I ever read! Hope you keep it up and can't wait for the complete fleet foot ark.
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Give it a min. about to put up the next chapter.
Lunar would already know bout this group. She walks in ponys dreams. So maybe . . . . .
sometimes I doubt my sanity. I mean I have to be a fucking idiot to be hoping against hopelessness that somepony as strong as Fleetfoot could force herself to resist.
I mean you know, knowing how the story goes because of Coco's account. If I continue to have this much trouble I might have to take a break from this story.
damn anxiety.
what the hell pose is this Pegasus statuette in? It sure as hell ain open winged as one be in triumph.
otherwise this would get seriously garish REAL quick!
GOOD FUCKING GAWD!!!
and here I am worried about a caffeine addiction..