nopenopenopenopenopenopenopenope soooo much nope around that end part.........

pffft amateurs , real doms don't need no magical mind controlling crystals to make others submit , like with who rules real doms just need a show of their sheer power and cunning to get others to submit to them.....

hoooo man this jsut keeps getting darker and darker , this thing really needs something good to happen to counter act all this....

whoops, seems Coco royally fucked up on this one. What a twist

3985417 I love a happy ending.

Yeah, I get that Coco wants it now, but I still feel like the dominators should get their kneecaps blown apart, then have their reproductive organs removed. After all, the list of crimes I can easily see here is:
A:Rape
B:Kidnapping
C:Unlawful imprisonment
As for Equesteria law, all of those plus use of dark magic, or, at least, that's how the heart spell thing sounded to me. Plus, there's the fact that most of this is a lack of common sense, or just decency. If Suri had treated Coco better, then she wouldn't have left, and Fancy Pants? Did he even ask Octavia on a date? If she said no, I can see him doing this, not that I agree with it, but still. Plus, if she said yes, it would have been legal. How do we know there isn't a police officer undercover here, hypothetically speaking. If that were the case, then all of them would be screwed. It's a good story, don't get me wrong. I like it, these are just my thoughts on what could be plot holes (..I.. to those who are sick enough to think it's a joke), but I haven't read it all yet. If any of this is fixed later, then I'll admit it. This is just what came to my mind at this point.

mother of (because we don't have a Luna emoticon)

first that Kennel scene, UMPH so hawt!

and then holding the breath for Octavia's fate..

and now... there are no words for such despair.

bravo.. bravo..

rereading through these stories long after I originally read them....

nope...

still nope...

SCHORL YOU MAGNIFICENT BITCH, I STILL FREAKING LOVE YOU AND YOUR STUFF

Can't help but think, as I am studying psychology, that even though this is a land filled with magic that this is all just a mind trick with no magic involved whatsoever

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It's strange isn't it? It makes you feel bad/guilty for the ponies suffering like a pit in your stomach but you also want the Society to win. It's a guilty pleasure in a way.