In Equestria lies a secret society of super elite who find sport in kidnapping, imprisoning and taming unsuspecting ponies into submissive sex slaves.
Page generated in 0.043 seconds
Total duration
968 users online
2,699,002 hits today, 2,139,894 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Good chapter as always mistress, lots a fun and plenty of OCs ^_^
Great chapter, Miss Tourmaline. I just have one thing to say, FUCK THAT HURT!!! Seriously this hurt me so bad that I started to get a nervous tick! I feel for Soarin, honestly I do, no man should have his junk branded! That really hurts, and I know I have hAd a dick branded on my ass as part of a dare before. In simplest terms it stings.
4189451
well at the time Soarin seemed to be ok with it (If your definition of "ok" is being under a drug induced state), but he will certainly feel that in the morning. Why on earth would you ever accept such a silly dare my dear?
4189599
My friend watched the movie Jackass 2 and thought it would be a good idea to have me do it. He at least got me drunk first, but I still felt it. It got infected and I had to take my cock branded ass to the doc to which he laughed at. All in all that's Five hundred dollars more than what I had. I am ashamed of myself.
4189854
Well do try to refrain from doing something like that again in the future. I would hate for any of my loyal readers to get hurt, at least in a way that don't amuse me.
4189451 Now, having my dick branded would hurt like hell, but having a branded dick inside my ass. Results are inconclusive.
4189890
And there is the star of this chapter (well aside from Soarin). How do you like the idea of Doodle belonging to Miss Fleur?
4189898 How you you? I'm assuming you mean how do you. IT WAS GREAT! I absolutely love the chapter, thanks alot! I'm sorry that I've been slow with the art, but it will come. Now that the arc is coming to a close, I'm under the assumption that I don't need to do art for it, but what of the next chapter? Please MP me about the subject.
So will twilight become a slave? Just wondering because she's my favorite.
4190009
The original intent of the story was to involve all the main six in some way, so the likelihood of Twilight being a part of this eventually is high, as is the likelihood of her becoming a slave as I don't think she would be too keen on becoming a member. If and when that happens though will be some time further down the line. I hope you will think that it is worth the wait.
4190050
Seems like if anyone could think their way out of this it would be Twilight. They aren't exactly geniuses at keeping prisoners. She's also not someone who can just disappear without very important ponies noticing.
I've never understood how the whole "you can't leave now, you're naked and will be humiliated" argument ever works. You get makeshift clothes or, at worst, get in trouble for being naked and explain that your clothes were stolen from you at a party. Celebrities in particular get into crazy shit all the time. It bugs me, even though it's really common in these kinds of stories.
4190222
Twilght is an issue for sure as more than any other of the main six if she vanished for some time it would send up flares. That is why it is most likely that she will be saved for last.
I just kinda want to think that Soarin is not the brightest bulb in the bunch. I am not saying he is dumb, but he was fooled by Fleetfoot and Spitfire saying he should just rest up as well as being distracted by a couple of girls. I think in this situation he wouldn't try to leave until he could do so with his clothes. And perhaps his keys were in his pants. Would you want to show up at a co-workers house in nothing but a table sheet, especially when those co-workers are mostly attractive members of the opposite sex?
Also I kinda think Equestrian celebrities are held at a higher standard than human ones. Remember when Celestia being a cake fanatic was considered embarrassing by the other ponies. Just my own observations.
4190293
Fair point about Equestrian moral standards being higher.
And yeah, Soarin isn't known for his brains. I'm not complaining that the clothes thing worked on him in particular, just about the ploy in general. Anyone who has gone to college is surely at least vaguely familiar with the concept of having to walk naked back somewhere. At the college I went to, there was a end of semester "streaking" if you were brave/stupid enough.
As to Twilight, I imagine her escaping personally would be as much of a problem as her friends/family/alicorns coming to rescue her. They left the captives alone a lot, and relied heavily on drugs and (as the Soarin thing shows) poor choices of their captives. If there's anyone who would know how to get a magic-suppression device off, it would be Twilight, and I got the impression they relied too much on demoralizing/drugging their slaves and were a bit lax with actual security.
....
That's it. I'm going to destroy this little world of yours.
I did it with Fall of Equestria, I can do it with yours as well.
Noted and logged, keep a look out for it.
Amazing chapters ^_^
4189885
It sure amused the fuck out of my ex-friend. After that I got back at him by shaving all the hair off half of his body and took five hundred more dollars. It helped but I couldn't sit for a month without wincing.
4190415
Well after the recent escape attempt by Octavia Schorl will probably have increased security to make sure that this doesn't happen again. Also this event with Soarin was more of a one time thing. If Soarin would've left without going on stage he would of just thought that the whole thing was just some weird S&M party and might of been too embarrassed over the whole event to tell anyone (though he probably would of still got Spitfire to confront Fleetfoot's own personal kinks)
The problem with having the knowledge of removing an anti-magic ring is that once it is on that knowledge is then moot. If I knew how to disarm a bomb but my hands were completely numb all the information in the world wouldn't save me. If you ever played Dungeons & Dragons you might know about a spell called "Anti-Magic Field" and how it completely negates/suppresses any form of magic within it. Think of something like that directly focused on the one thing that gives you magic. At that point she might as well be an earth pony (or a pegasi as is the case with the alicorn princess)
4190492
I think I might be flattered. To know that you are going to take time out of your life to write a story based on my own fanfic, it lets me know that I have touched you in a personal way. Heck, I might have to make a new folder for the story group just for you (Surprised your FoE story is not in the Fall of FoE group).
Might I offer some ideas? Perhaps Celestia comes into the group's headquarters with a platoon of guards and rescues the enslaved ponies and decides that those involved should suffer the same indignities, perhaps with Schorl becoming her personal whipping girl? Maybe one of the slaves manages to release him or her self and takes down the organization singlehandedly. Or my personal favorite, the gods of karma send some eldritch horror from the ends of time and space to enact vengeance in the form of endless pain and suffering.
While I do now excitedly await your own ETS tale I do wish to remind you that such a story has no real baring on my own story and will simply be something you concoct to make it easier for you to go on with your life. No doubt plenty of people will like it for the simple notion of "punishing the bad guys" and I will applaud its success. If more people like you make stories as such it makes it really easy for me to decide on using my planned out "bad ending" as opposed to the "good ending" I planned out as well.
In short: The production of such a story will no more "Destroy" the ETS universe than your FoE story caused people to stop enjoying FoE.
4191366 celestia?
Who said anything about her!
Discord for the win.
Plus I needed more Equestria universes.
While I would like to hear how an entire estate torture party hosted partially on a mic by a supermodel and featured countless members of high society that DO NOT see the threat of a prime celebrity being mutilated on an open stage and are perfectly content that they are safe on a crime lord's promise (no offense to the character or maker), in Man
ehattan of all places where the press are everywhere and every morning starts with a shouting areshole giving his two cents on the other loud mouthed areshole's opinion on who enters and leaves a building. Or how someone who wears skintight Lycra or latex suits that leave about as much to the imagination as pants made of paint would could feel uncomfortable naked... I would rather just ask where the idea to write ETS came from if you don't mind me asking and how you are able to find the time to update on a near weekly basis if you are comfortable with answering of course4189854 And thats why you never imitate Jack Ass..also wow what did the doc say.
Bet it would be as awkward as explaining the burns if your girlfriend was a toaster.
4190415 Here is my thought, I'm sure if Twilight had the knowledge to deactivate anti-magic rings or something she could, I'm sure anyone could. But lets also think about what magic means to a unicorn. Its what they use to grab things, use things, to do nearly everything in their life, and for Twilight Magic is her life. Now what do you think would happen to her it, it would be like taking Rainbow Dash's rings, taking Fluttershy's abiltiy to speak to animals, and so on and so forth.
To a unicorn losing your magic is like losing an arm, unless the unicorn in question learned to live without relying on the magic (and I doubt even Celestia and Luna would have done that) putting anti-magic rings on them would break part of their will.
Thats just my thought on the matter, not just negating magic but also breaking spirits.
4190492 If you don't like the story and setting, why are you reading this?
4190492 I'd report you for trolling if I weren't certain you're actually this stupid. Fall of Equestria is still alive, sweetie. What did you think happened?
Also, why are you here if you don't even like this kind of stuff?
Was that Big Mac with Lightning Dust and Gilda? I'd like to see how he got involved in this. And if the blue pegasus mare is Rainbow then it gets even more interesting.
I was a little disappointed to see this scene end before Doodle Dip was given the same treatment. I know it's being told from Soarin's perspective and he was basically uncousouse. But mainly I wanted to see if Dip's resolve stayed true the whole time, or if he broke down at the last moment or not. Watching this happen to Soarin must have done something to him, sure his mistress would have been preparing him for this. But branding, and on such a sensitive place, might have caused his devotion to waver.
At any rate it was something I was curious about. But so far this has been an entertaining read.
Alright so two things on the dick branding.
1) This has officially made Fleur the most terrifying member of the society in my book
2) I'm a little confused, my understanding is that society rules prevents subs from being mutilated or scarred. How exactly does Fleur admittedly get a way with using a branding iron on any body part, much less on someone's privates? Yes I realise Schorl isn't at the function but she would still find out about this is, one way or another and doubt that Fleur would risk incurring Schorl's wraith over something like that.
I realise this is a minor thing to get hung up on but I'm genuinely curious.
I still thought this was a good chapter though. It's was cool to see Fleur in action.
5547222 To answer your question, the rules prevent any non-owner from permanently damaging someone else's slave. Soarin is Four's slave we can effectively do what she wants with him. The only probable limit would be something that anyone would catch outside the society.
ohhh NOW it's a PARTY!
you know.. as a person who has trouble.. getting started, if I don't at least THINK of Bondage, I find Soarin's attitude more then a little insulting.
I mean in this instance he is 100% right, (SAFE SANE AND CONSENSUAL always remember and I would add COMUNICATION to that credo) but he doesn't know what is going on is non consent and he's judging the very mare he loves. Pfft sorry, I'm just taking a break for a reality check.
Heroin.