In Equestria lies a secret society of super elite who find sport in kidnapping, imprisoning and taming unsuspecting ponies into submissive sex slaves.
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nice hope to see asphyxiation used again in the story
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I am happy to please.
3809432 I would like to see this torture in this story link
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That is very nice actually. I might do something similar in the future, but for right now I do have a small set plan for the next 3 chapters at least. Since you are interested in the story I will give you a sneak peak at the layout if you want.
3809664 that would be nice thanks
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Well I was hoping to make this a sort of on going story with a new chapter released every week at the least. Every 4 chapters will focus on a specific pony and his or her experience in the trainer's society. This will hopefully create an on going narrative that I can keep enjoyable for a while and at the same time bettering my skills as a fanfiction writer (I want to keep this a hobby.) So basically the chapter format will look something like this.
Suri/Coco Arch
1. Misery
2. Coco Pops
3.
4.
Next character arch
1.
2.
3.
4.
ect, ect.
This will continue until we get to the last of the mane 6's archs and will help to flesh out the world along the way. Not sure exactly how many of these archs I will have, but I guess it will be based on how many people enjoy the story and feedback. I will do my best though to at least get what I thought of done.
3809887 this is good the biggest problem i have seen in fanfics is the lack planing but you know what you are doing
p.s promoting my DA page this is the stuff i like
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I guess that is fine is you also promote my story on your page. I mean, if that is ok with you.
3809947 i can't post a link on my page DA rules don't want to get ban but i can send a link to some friends
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ah right, DA can be a bit picky with stuff like that. I will appreciate you sending links to friends.
3809983 will do
I like the premise and stuff of this, but jeez dude... Get an editor.
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well I hate to ask but where exactly would I find one? Is there a group on here for people that do that?
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Pretty sure you can ask in the Struggling Authors group.
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Thank you. I will look there soon to see if I can get someone.
I want to see their entire society torn down from beneath them. I hope Twilight will be able to accomplish that feat.
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Well I am not going to spoil anything but if there is a light at the end of this tunnel it is very far away. Hopefully though you will enjoy the ride as well as the destination, for better or worse.
Alright then sweet.
Wowee!!!
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I guess I can take it that you like the story so far. Thanks for the comment.
ok very nice chapter, hmmm can totally see Brenda in this universe fitting in...well as a slave *evil grin*
Hmmm...... I want one!!!
Sorry, but I have to make this reference:
Right off the title made me
foreshadowing dun dun dun!
damn my fetishes are taking me to some dark places tonight!
Can someone please spell Schorl Tourmaline's name phonetically