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Doorway to Olympus

The story is basically the first of many in the series. The story contains mythological creatures and characters. A lot happens in the first instalment and I hope you enjoy it. If you had any problem or have any improvements you can give, by all means please leave your comments.

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Starlight Shadow

Starlight Shadow #1 · Jan 9th, 2014 · 1 · ·

the story is basically the first of many in the series. the story contains mythological creatures and characters. the first enemy that the four ponies face is called the manticore. no not from the show. but a metallic mech sent by the rogue element.

If you summarize the whole story in your description, with zero capitals, I'm not going to bother to read it.

Moonshine The Brony

Moonshine The Brony #2 · Jan 11th, 2014 · · ·

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I'm going to try to read it, but it sounds incredibly stupid.

Moonshine The Brony

Moonshine The Brony #3 · Jan 11th, 2014 · · ·

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Literally read it in 2 minutes. It's pretty bad.

Author, please consider getting together with a more experienced author for guidance for you writing. Also, please work on actually putting a little, if any, effort into making a good plot that people can follow, as well as actually putting at least one period in there. Your grammar is terrible, and frankly, I can see why you are getting so many dislikes. However, I will give you points for at least knowing ONE god. Thats it. Those are just my opinions, and you can ignore them if you want. Just be prepared for more dislikes.

Commissar Holt