• Published 9th Feb 2014
  • 3,229 Views, 14 Comments

Soarin' With a Side of Pie - ClipClopColt



Self insert clop involving Soarin' challenging a young royal guard to a drinking contest with tequila shots over the last apple pie. After giving up Soarin' decides on another type of pie. Good ol' clop ensues.

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Comments ( 14 )

That was decent for your first fic. You get a like my friend.

You should probably mark this as being from "my" point of view... I wasn't expecting it to be... Um... Inclusive?

3933606 Haha whoops, will do. :scootangel:

Good story! Very good and lovely.

4501059 I'm looking forward to more M/M stories from you.

4501293 I'll do another one when i have some spare time.. Which is almost never. :raritycry:

Daaaaaaaaayum:pinkiehappy:

4803854 I'll take that as a compliment.:derpytongue2:

4804225 By all means, please do!

This was awesome. A few grammatical errors, but they didn't distract too much. Loved the dirty talk; this is going in my new group. All in all it was good, and I look forward to your future stories. A second person fic with Braeburn would be awesome, btw!

5442218 Lol thanks! If I ever get around to finishing my current project I'll consider writing one about Braeburn. :raritywink:

Needs a second person tag

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