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Lazymansway8
Lazy Man, Artist, Writer, Student
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Pplease continue this
4121556 I am doing it at this moment, Although it looks worse in my opinion
So many runon sentences. Yet, overall the story is interesting.
4131680 Glad you like it, I'll try to work on that on my next story...
so far so good. i liked it.
4133671 Thank you, as you said so far... hopefully you'll like the next bits
Interesting indeed.
Fine. Good. Keep up the good work.
5639150 Thanks... I've got a bit done on the last chapter but I'm hesitant on continuing because of it
5642432 Take your time.
It's all up to you, when you ready. Then your ready :).
I find it weird how fast Twilight jumped to conclusions about Rarity and Soran, only based on the facts Rarity knew his name and was in her boutique.
Grammar errors and typos here and there. Using word that sound similar but doesn't mean what you intended.
There are also the walls of text. Try to cut the text to smaller segments, makes it a lot easier and comfortable to read.
6171552 yeah your right about that... I wanted to make it seem (to the reader of course) that from Twilight's Perspective, that this man who came into her life wasn't as sincere about having a relationship with her...
The Typo's how ever were from a lack of a proper writing software and my amatuer abillity to actually write story's and I'll try to keep the Shorter sentences in mind if I ever take up the pen again.