A young inconspicuous colt of Ponyvillian residence explores the time between widely renowned seasons 3 and 4, and through his eyes are seen the magnificent events which transpire.
Twilight never became an alicorn princess and instead lost her life as a result of Star-Swirl the Bearded's unpredictable spell. But being dead doesn't prevent Twilight from visiting those she cares for...
You are an ancient god who dates back to times of the beginning. However you have been lost to time due a major wound that you had gotten a long time ago, turned you into stone. A few thousand years have pasted and you're now reintroduced to the
Loss. What is a loss? Is it losing something close? Or is it feeling like something inside you gave way? How do you cope with such a thing? No one knows for sure.
3704472 Yes rarity dies, however spike just leaves. He isn't seen by any of his old pony friends because it hurts to much for him to be with them so he left the country.
Cadence.....poor,poor Cadence! Losing not only your sister but your husband too! Well, she's still epic. Even if she is....like....traumatized for life.....and emotionally scarred. Moustache Spike agrees!
You should "Highlight" the text in some way it confusing if not
Well dispite the discription she isn't really dead.
This is a really, really good idea, but you need an editor. PM me if you're interested.
Interesting story idea.
Although I must ask you something.
How can you have a story about the mane six dying if Twilight is now an alicorn? or is this an alternate timeline where she doesn't become one.
This is really good...
Also,
Thought this is appropriate to this chapter
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It's my Opinion that being an Alicorn does not make it impossible to die, but instead simply stops you from aging.
thanks for reading!
3704472 Yes rarity dies, however spike just leaves. He isn't seen by any of his old pony friends because it hurts to much for him to be with them so he left the country.
3704302 Could you elaborate please?
Not pinks YES I have pet names for all the charecters
Okay, I wasn't crying until Vinyl.... played.... the....record!!!!! But anyways, this is a great story, and the other chapters are just as good.
She isn't dead! She won't be unless Pinkie gets hold of her.
Cadence.....poor,poor Cadence! Losing not only your sister but your husband too! Well, she's still epic. Even if she is....like....traumatized for life.....and emotionally scarred. Moustache Spike agrees!
I don't know what to think about this chapter.
Aside from the punctuation errors, this is really sad.