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Eclipse Lightning


"Life is like a deck of cards. We're dealt good hands and bad hands. But not a single card is worthless or useless to have been played." - Brony since June 2013

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CANCELLED AS OF JANUARY 19, 2014.

Why are there so few alicorns? Why don't the Two Sisters ever tell more about their origins? What if an alicorn was born naturally, and didn't earn the full right... at first?
These are questions answered, and still asked for one pony, determined to live his new life, and find out what happened in his past... for he can not remember anything, not even his name. All he knows, is his abilities, and that he must aid the Keepers of the Elements of Harmony. But what happens when three, soon falls for one?
Guess only time will tell, now will it?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 5 )

I like the idea, you just need more content! Lol. Bit I'm happy that something like this is being written! If ya need an editor I can help ya! :D

3638759 I thank you for such a comment. I could use a little help. I'm still rough on writing, and I was only able to finish the second chapter on the spot. If you can help, let me know. My worst part, is dialogue. I suck at it! lol

Contact me when you're writing a new chapter, and I'll go through it a make some suggestions! I know writing is tough, but you got the spark, now you just gotta make it a flame! :D

3638801 It's at embers right now. You'd be amazed what's in my mind all day...

3638801 I've the next chapter ready. How can I send it to you??

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