I'm a big fan of Avenged Sevenfold (A7X) and i like to listen to almost any type music.... Pinkie Pie is my favorite Pony in MLPFIM also i like to airsoft and paintball
This is a story about a Pegasus named Pinkie Twinkle who is new to Equestria, she has has been on her own for years now and she doesn't know what happened to parents and has no friends and she is a grown Pegasus with no cutie mark. She has to count on the Mane 6 and the CMC plus spike and Princess Celestia so she can get her Cutie mark.
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This is my first Fimfiction story i'v created, well this is my first story that i have really worked on. its not finished but i hope you guys like it. if you suggest any changes let me know.
I got through the first paragraph, and all I can say is that your grammar and punctuation need a lot of work. I don't mean to deter you from writing, you just need some practice.
It's going great, give some detail. Make it longer, write in order to give off the atmosphere. I have advice if you need it.
ok thanks this is my first story so it might no be as good as i would want it
To people who will read this in the future.... I know that my grammar isn't that great and well (that was really the only thing i had trouble with in school hahaha) but if you can tell me what i should do that would be great. and thanks for letting me know what needs to be done.... hope this whole story turns out well and hope you guys like it
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I'm glad you will continue to write.