I'm a big fan of Avenged Sevenfold (A7X) and i like to listen to almost any type music.... Pinkie Pie is my favorite Pony in MLPFIM also i like to airsoft and paintball
Just a normal day in Ponyville, other than the fact that ponies; left and right are getting sick. At first, they thought it was just a bad case of the flu. By the time they found out what it actually was, it was far too late. What was once known as Ponyville has now become Hell.
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Holy cat! I started a firestorm of zombie fics.
This is Inception at it's finest. I too have a story called "The Trotting Dead."
405555 And I hate to sound like a douche, but my story was up about a month before yours. Welllllllp, now I feel douchey.
Another storyis already made like a title like this.
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too tell you the truth I haven't looked at any zombie stories here so didn't know that there were other stories with the same title... that's what i added that in the description though... sorry if any of you guys already have this title
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my avatar fits what i did when i read that perfectly
oh and major grammar errors in the first paragraph like you cant tell who sick at the very begging until apple jack says granny smith and it seems like applejakc is sick but the words makes it confusing if she is so all i can say from the first paragraph
and you did stuff like forget is such as me between who and sick
I knew that some one would eventually make a crossover of the walking dead and MLP
First paragraph was confusing. I can't tell if Applejack or just GS are showing symptoms.
When Applejack goes to the hardware store, you meant went right?
When Applejack questioned the nurse, you gotta decapitalize that Q.
And when Sweetie talks to Applebloom. Capitilize Applebloom.
There are actually abouy 5 more mistakes along these lines. Proofreading is important.
In terms of writing, it feels maybe a bit rushed. Thats ok
Some things did not make sense. Thats less ok. Why did Big Mac go downstairs when his prey was upstairs? And It would be nice, funny even, for somepony to explain why everypony is so well equipped
There was nothing particularly good, sorry bro. But I see the potential, and it is easy to read.
Ill give you a thumb next chapter.
spike was right!
Holy shit! I ALSO have a tic called the trotting dead! Until ot got erased...
Btw. Guns in AJs shed? Makes me wonder what's in fluttershys...
The story shows promise but it is kind of hard to read with the spelling and grammar errors.
Have you considered a proofreader?
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Not at all. I watched the site for a few weeks and did a few searches on zombie fice before i uploaded mine. There were like five or six. I know i kinna sound like a hipster. But i have seen at least seven or eight since mine went up. A very obvious increase.
Wait...... how is rarity holding a handgun with no hands
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Several people have, though one of them diverged away from that after having woken up in the hospital and then escaping it.
There's also a handful of Left 4 Dead crossovers, and two of Dead Rising that I've seen so far, as well as one for Spike and Barley from 'afraid of monsters'.
I have yet to see a Resident Evil crossover.
Parade Of The Dead - Black Label Society
405973 Well you're definitely right about the massive increase. It's almost frightening to see so many zombie pony stories on here
407006 Aye, I wrote about zombies cause their cool. But another innitiative i had was that there were almost no zombie fics. Now there is a flood of them.
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407698 Preaching to the choir, man. Zombies kick ass!
407793 It is worthy of a little facepalmadge when you put a whole lot of work into a huge story, and a little two or three parter gets double the views. That or Jackie Chan expression.
You got some spelling mistakes and some confusion in this chapter. I know you already know but the first paragraph confused me. While reading that paragraph I thought 'Was it Applejack or Granny Smith who had the symptoms?'
Also, I believe Applejack would have hesitated before shooting her brother. Applejack giving foals and one baby dragon weapons? Oh hell no!
And why would Rarity go to Pinkie first? I thought she would have went to check on Fluttershy!
Seems a little rushed, you could have at least showed detail other than telling us what happened. Instead, show it! 
But other than all those complaints, great job!
I love the plot so far, and I love how the main characters all survived!....unless..you wouldn't!
You wouldn't dare hurt Pinkie Pie!..wait you did kill off Big Macintosh. Oh yeah! How did he get the flu? Did he catch it from Granny or did one of the zombies get him. I mean his neck was broken for Celestia's sake! But then again, if he did get the flu then wouldn't Applejack and Applebloom? Again, great job! Can't wait for more!
P.S. Dayum! This comment is long!