The night after Fluttershy babysits the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Fluttershy remembers where she got her soothing lullaby. She remembers all the pain and sorrow she went through that night long ago but she will always remember the kindness she got from then. Oh! And if you aren't one for sadness do not read!
Page generated in 0.146 seconds
Total duration
864 users online
1,290,088 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I'm not going to dislike this as it wasn't terrible, but I will say that there are several issues I've come across.
1) A multitude of spelling errors.
2) Grammatical errors as well.
3) This fic implies that Fluttershy lived on the ground, but this directly opposes show cannon.
My advice is to acquire an editor, and either tag this alternate universe or re-watch episodes of the show that deal with the fic you plan to write.
I'll happily offer assistance when able, but my schedule is very packed.
3563928 Awww, this makes me feel like such a bad writer
but thank u for the info. I'll keep that in mind for my next story
3564030
Don't feel bad, people make mistakes. It's how we improve! ^_^
I look forward to your next story.
Why...why did I read this? I was having a good happy day, and I came across this and read it...and now I'm sad.
3564106 Whoops, sorry about that.
The story might be changed up because Quill Scribe gave me some advice on how to improve it.
This was beautiful.
3565373 Awwwww, thanks! Just like your profile pic
3565420 Thanks.
I have a cute one of Derpy too. 
Don't forget to check out my other fanfic Celestia's Regret!
3563928b "Fluttershy lived in a small cottage along with her mother and father on the clouds."
the story did say she lived in the clouds.
3566446 Ohhh, sorry. I had to edit that part because the first time I didn't specify that Fluttershy lived there. But thank u for the fav. ( Runs over and hugs )
I can't stop crying. It's so sad!
3568844 Sorry but I just felt like doing this fanfic cuz I think Fluttershy deserved an explanation about her lullaby
3569576
I wish I fully knew why I always try to get myself to cry by reading stories like this. But I just do.
Well, time to favorite.
Oh another sad Fluttershy fic... now I'm sad. Not sure if I can sleep now. Great story.
It was a little... Short for my liking but it was freaking sentimental as crap!
Just take the Favorite OKAY? I'M NOT CRYING!... ok maybe a little...
3581880 I know it was shorter then I planned but it's just because when I read fanfics myself it annoys me when there super long so I usually stick to short ones. But I am planning a sequel for this. Might be really bad or really good but I'll just see what people think of it.
loved it. I think Pinkie Pie should have her own lullaby. It would probably be very interesting
3590560 Hmmmmm, maybe that will give me some inspiration for a new fanfic...
3591545 sounds intense already
3591682 Stay tuned, I`m typing already!
3591689 YAY
Great fic! Didn't make me cry though...
There are a multitude of reasons for that...
None of which have to do with your fic, don't worry.