The Death of Celestia released a force stronger than anypony had seen before, a maddened psychopath. Upon his return he crosses the site of a suicide, seeing the stallion upon the ground he rejuvinates him. The stallion despises him for reviving him to the infernal hell he'd just escaped. But he thirsted for vengence once again.
Sequel to Luna's Vengeful Protege by Dr.Bob
I'm doing a thing by having, 'regular chapters' where most chapters will only vary in the amount of words slightly
okay, that's B.S. The chapters will vary greatly.
But some chapters are short, I'll get more serious with this another time.
I'm going to go through and revamp the chapters.
The ballad of discord will be combined eventually so the chapters will probably get taken down.
Sounds rather excellent. Though, there seem to be a few punctuation errors, like using a comma where a semicolon or a period might better fit. Very very nice however.
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For some reson, my keyboard doesn't respond very well, laptops man.
But I'll get those fixed, It's just a matter that I'm waiting for my last thing to process
so, enjoy my works. I'm not as dark as most, making my writing sometimes more readable.
sounds interesting
to the tabs with thee!
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oh my, I'm just using another story, crossing my own with Dr.Bob's creating a conflict once again.
Twilight's new attitude seemed to fit, because
oops, I'll explain in another chapter
hmmmm bit rushed, is there gunna be an explanation on how hunter managed to kill a "god" and maybe shed alittle backstory on Eclipse plus the whole reason why everyone hates the princesses
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Luna's vengeful protege is where Hunter is from written by Dr.Bob
and if you'd look at my stories, 'The Maddened Pony' provides backstory upon Eclipse.
They hate Celestia because she'd stopped caring about everypony
Yes, I'm dreadfully impatient sometimes
The only errors in this chapter were some capitalization errors, otherwise this is a good story!
14531 Ah yes, the unresponsive key on my keyboard. the shift key. It's becoming quite the chore to make names for these chapters though, trying to come up with a unique name that will keep the dark edge of the story. OInce i finish the story it will go through some HEAVY editing. Thanks for reading, and thanks for the feedback!