Twilight is a sheltered unicorn that was raised in Canterlot, so when she discovers feelings she doesn't know exactly what to do with them. Having never felt such emotions before, she explores herself and her friends to find out what exactly is going on with her.
This is remastered from the original Version which had no plot stream. I'm going to be legthening the first chapters and omitting some things. Rob WILL be a character in this, but will also be accompanyed by Big Mac most of the time for some humorous effect.
Plus, Fic Pic that's not creepy!
Update: 12/2/12: chapters have been edited slightly, the only one really edited that most is chapter 1 where I added a new scene into it, chapters are basically the same, but i've updated them just a smidge.
One word
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32165 Yes rather, i extended this chapter from 1300 words, to just over 2000. But thanks for the comment, and don't worry, there will be more chapters coming in about a week. Thanks for reading!
Great! Sorry if it wasn't a very helpful comment but good to hear!
32172 Doesn't matter, I take any comment you'll post. I'm currently looking for some pre-readers though, Microsoft word doesn't like to fix grammtical errors or anything. I'll be working on writing the second chapter tomorrow actually
but it'll have to wait to be published 
I love me some nice cliffhangers
*grammatical haha jk but I did spot a few words that needed capitalizing but typing on my phones a pain
And yes word isn't my favorite when it comes to fixing things.
32182 Yes my keyboard likes to mix up words and such. exactly why I need pre-readers. Interested?
Hmmmmm...I suppose.
32209 you'll ve notified when the new chapter is ready for prereading then. Thank you.
Hopefully more people will help also.
32218 i'd like that. Might submit to EqD, once I get more bugs ironed out
Good move.
32243 my flash engine failed on me, darned phone. This is far from perfect, still needs work
Oh I meant good idea fixing all the errors/kinks before putting it on EqD.
32249 I know, I'm going to look what needs to be worked on. Mostly capitilization and grammar though, which are easy fixes.
Really nicely done! the O.C was...fine, but it felt....i dont know, like it was just pasted into the story in the last moment before submitting the chapters.
32853 simple, it was. That's why he's been omitted. Trying to re-do this the way it was meant to be!
oh shit aj is in da hiz house this ish just go for realzy!
33138 oh hell yea
uh oh twilights in some serious shit noaw!
I feel dirty now
33192 eeyup, or is she?
33213 don't!
I feel i'm going to become know for romantic comedies. Pfffft.... Most likely
A chapter will be uploaded maybe the week after Thanksgiving, given my sinus infection clears up by then
this shit is kinda cool I guess
but it's extremely depressing to read w/ skyrim music
;c
38014 I wouldn't know, I haven't heard the music really. Depressing? I wasn't going for anything depressing here really, but thanks for commenting.
Hmm... Gildshy/Flutterda doesn't work with me... Maybe cause I'm stuck on the idea of the Gildiron ship... but that's just me.
38198 The thing is it's not really supposed to make sense, it's a spoof of those weird romantic comedies where polar opposties are pushed together and no one really likes the pairing but since the story is not based around them, no one really cares. GildaShy is just a spoof pairing, and Twilight's reaction are the watchers of that movie responding to the oddest pairing.
I like spoofing cliches from movies, because it seems they're filled with them nowadays 
This story is really awesome. Can't wait for the other chapters! :D
41471 Thanks, I should be saying the same with your story. Next chapter is in production right now, might not be released for a while though
41948 thanks, and there are no adults here. Celestia? Yeah, RUN.
I feel like it was out-of-character of spike not to stop twilight from doing this. It would have been beter for him to take the role of her guardian angel in this situatio and stop her well before it got this far out of hoof.
*sigh* im gonna lay it on ya.
Personally I liked the other version of this, the unmastered version.
I liked Rob as a character.
Twilight's story as depressed mare is nice, and quite grabbing yes. But I felt like Rob was the cherry on top of the sunday so to speak.
I dunno maybe it's just me but I liked the other version better This is good don't get me wrong. Just sayin
41960 He wanted her to be herself, no matter how. Plus, he wouldn't come to realize it might become an obsession of hers. I've seen weirder, parodying those weird movies where the unlikely people drink and no one cares to stop them.
41965 I decided to keep Rob in, a bit of a spoiler for next chapters. He's just too interesting of a character to leave out. He helped tie the parody part of this story, so don't worry, I'll edit the description later on. Big Mac will take a role in here by accompanying Rob sometimes.
41965
...wow, you really like Rob?
I guess I really shouldn't be surprised... but I am. Heheh.
49521 hey, someone likes your character! BE HAPPY I COMMAND THEE!
FUCK YEA!
49532 Hey look, it's Rob! And Big Mac who will probably end up dead by the end of this. Just for you my friend, because you my friend... You're awesome. Really
I like it how the "SSSSSPPPPIIIIKKKEEE!!!!!" thing goes out of the borders
And I can't help but read Rob's voice with a thick Russian accent... But that always bugged me... If he was from stalliongrad... Wouldn't he be very used to the cold?
49759 resilient not immune
why is spike cussing? lol it makes so much sense
50097 because it's funny.
50107 aww shit you got me there
50128 like a boss
49760 ~oooooohhhhhh~ That makes much more sense! [Who said that? I can't remember... I think it was applebloom so...]
(There are no happy-bloom emotes...)
An' I guess... [insert number of years] years in a warm climate would adjust your temperature as well... Wait... Did he Just move to Ponyville or has he been there for a while? I can't remember and I don't feel like re-reading the whole story to find out.
52450 He's been there some months. But Spike threw chilled water also.
52466 Ahh yeah.
Freezy water plus freezy wind makes freezy pony quite freezy.