To Deny Thyself

There's a new pony in town and while he seems content to keep to himself Sweetie Belle takes it on herself to get him to open up.

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Chapter 1: First Day · 20th Nov 2013 · 6,356 words
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Chapter 2: Magic Lessons · 20th Nov 2013 · 7,322 words
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Chapter 3: Lessons from a Princess · 20th Nov 2013 · 2,334 words
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Chapter 4: One Year Later · 20th Nov 2013 · 849 words
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Bronzedragon

Bronzedragon #1 · Nov 20th, 2013 · · · Chapter 4: One Year Later ·

You have a good story here . However you trust spell check too much, it doesn't care if it's the right word, just is it spelled right. I found these in the first two chapters and put them here so you can have some examples of what I am talking about. I hate to see a good story with stuff that I know you did not mean to do in it.

Chap 1

lesion ------ lesson
brake -------- break
dose --------- does
apology --- apologize
clot ------ colt
fist ---first
cheep ----cheap

chapter 2

chanced --- chased
lead --- led
privet ---- private
wroth --- worth
mine magic --- my magic
coarse ----course
barrow --- borrow

Keeper of time RD

Keeper of time RD #2 · Nov 21st, 2013 · · · Chapter 4: One Year Later ·

3516187 Hench why I need the practice. Thank you soo much for the help cleaning this up. and I'll certainly add those to my growing list of words I tend to slip up on.

I'm fairly sure I meant all my uses of 'apology', as 'apologize' doesn't sound like a tone of voice to me. (if you're trying to correct what I think you are.)

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